[solved]Noctis Pendragon [APPROVED, 1-5]

» Name: Salem Noctis Pendragon
» Titles: Noctis
» Age: 18
» Gender: Male
» Affiliation/Rank: N/A

» Appearance Description:
Noctis appearance is one that makes him look gothic or emo. As most people when they see Noctis think that he is a little dark boy that is into devil worshiping. This is because Noctis has a very dark and gloomy appearance about him. As his clothes hair and even the aura around him tends to be gloomy. Though this is because Noctis took on a dark appearance after all the bullying that he had to deal with at school. Though his appearance does not give away his personality. Noctis hair is one of the most noticeable features about him. As his hair is long and dark and one of the biggest things that gives him his emo appearance. Though Noctis likes his hair and has chosen to keep it that way no matter what other say.

Noctis is of a decent height for a child at the age of eighteen as he is 6’2 which Noctis fines as a good height of himself. Noctis body is very in shape as he keeps himself in a good shape so that he may try and find mates and friends. Though the most notable thing about Noctis is his eyes and the fact that they change colors depending on his mood and other things. This is one of the main reason that Noctis has had trouble making friends as a lot of people fear him for the reason of his eyes and the fact that his family is known for Magic.


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» Personality:

• Shut out: Noctis is one who does not like to stay in company of many other people. As he is the kid that would rather be by himself sitting in the corner while all of the other little kids are running around and having fun. This is because Noctis is not a very good people person, as when Noctis was a child most of the other children tended to pick on him because he was different. And they could not understand that even though Noctis was somewhat different than him he was also the same in many more. And so because of his difficult childhood Noctis has become one who does not care much for the company of most other human beings as he sees being around people will just cause them to want to make fun of him and point out the ways he is different. And this tends to be something that enrages Noctis when it is done. Though there are those that Noctis does not mind being around as even Noctis understands that he cannot take on the world by himself and so he has allowed for himself to get close to a few people. Though Noctis list of close people is not a very big one, as he does not trust a lot of people.
  
  Caring: Even though Noctis is not a people person, and has problems with most people because of the way he was treated as a little child. He still cares about people deep down and wants to help humanity. Because Noctis sees it as that the people of the world have no Heart or Soul. And fighting those with no Heart or Soul is something that is very difficult. And so Noctis feels that he needs to help the world undergo a rebirth and help all of those that are trapped in this world of the heartless. As Noctis wants all of those that still have heart and soul to be able to live in a better world for he does not want them to have to deal with this horrible world that has come amongst them. Though this may seem like Noctis feels he is of a greater calling to some. Noctis just feels that the world should be reborn and if no one else will do it, and then he will take it into his own hands and start the process himself. And Though Noctis knows that some will see this as Noctis either doing it for his own personal reasoning’s or just because he thinks he is better when none of it is so. As Noctis just wants the world to become a better place for all so that no other child shall ever have to go through what he did as a kid. And so Noctis feels that by rebirthing the world he can make that possible.
  
  Secretive: Noctis is one who has come to keep most things a secret from others as he does not like people knowing a lot of things about himself, or things that he is doing. This is because Noctis does not want people judging the things that he is doing or trying to find ways to stop his plans. And because of this Noctis has come to even keep those that are close to him on a need to know bases. As Noctis feels that if they do not need to know every little thing of his plan then why tell them. Because as a Kid Noctis made the mistake of telling people things that he should not have told them. And it the end it would always turn out bad for Noctis instead of the others. And so because of all this Noctis learned that keeping things to himself was the best way for him to be able to come on top. And so Noctis has come one who has learned to keep everything he does a secret. As Noctis has even gotten so good at keeping secrets that he is completely able to keep his feelings hidden and show no emotion 24/7. This has allowed for Noctis to seem like an emotionalist bastard to most. Though it is not true as Noctis just keeps his real emotions and feelings a secret.
  
  Grateful: Noctis is one that is grateful for all of the things that he has been given in life. As Noctis knows that he should be thankful for the things that he was lucky to get in this world. As Noctis knows that without his powers he would be unable to change the world like he wants to. Noctis is also grateful for all of the minor things that he got in his life. Because things were not always the best for Noctis, even though he was lucky that his family had money and he could have almost anything that he wanted. There were just some things that money could not get Noctis when he was child. That main thing being friends as no matter how much Noctis wanted friends he could just not have his parents go out and by him the friends that he wanted. That is why when Noctis finally grew older and got his first friend. This is something that Noctis would always be grateful for. Because Noctis knows that if he would have never found the great feeling of friendship the he would have most likely not been able to make it all those years. As Noctis few friends that he managed to get are what made him able to deal with all of the other kids that made fun of him and made him feel as though he was a monster.
  
  Generous: Though most do not see this part of Noctis as most do not really get to know Noctis very well. Noctis is one that is very generous to others. As Noctis will even go out of his way to even help those that do not like him. Though must do not understand why Noctis would help those that do not like him. But Noctis feels that maybe if he helps enough people that more people will come to see that he is not a strange boy and is just as normal as them even though his eyes change colors and are like that’s of a cat. And because Noctis is so generous like this he has taken it upon himself to tend to help the less fortunate kids of his school when he gets a chance. Since he feels that all his family money can be put to good use by helping that in need. And if he just so happens to get a friend out of it is he really do a bad thing. Since Noctis knows that even if he shall not get a friend out of helping others he should still try. This is one of the main reasons Noctis wants to rebirth the world as he feels that this will help all those like him. And this will allow for Noctis to make the world where there is no discrimination or hate of things like eye color and skin color.
  
  Hard Working: Though Noctis comes from a very wealthy family he is one that works hard for most things that he gets. As something’s are just handed to him , Noctis would usually rather work hard and earn the things. As hard work and dedication had gotten Noctis to be the great Mage that he is now. Because if It were not for Noctis working hard on learning to control his magic and learning knew spells he would most likely not be the high level classed sorcerer that he is now. As Noctis knows that without hard work he will not be able to accomplish anything. And this is why Noctis works hard in the project of his idea of rebirthing the word. As Noctis feels that if he works hard enough to become a strong enough sorcerer and gets the right spells as well as the right people on his side to help him in achieving his goal then he would be able to rebirth the world and make it a better place for all those that do not fit in. But Noctis also knows that if he does not work hard to make his goal become true then it will most likely never happen. As all those that do not like him and find him different will work their hardest to try and stop him from reaching the goals of rebirthing the world.
  
  Responsible: Noctis is one that is very responsible. As Noctis can be given a task and he will do almost whatever it takes to make sure that the task is done right and on time. This makes Noctis a very big hit with the teachers when it comes to assignments that involve the whole class. As they know if they put Noctis in charge it will lead to the assignment getting done right on time maybe even before then. This also makes Noctis take responsibilities for all things that are his fault as well as him living up to his own mistakes. As Noctis knows he is responsible for things that go wrong when he is in charge. That is why Noctis always tries to do the right thing and make the right decisions. Because of this Noctis tends to take responsibility for something’s that are not even his fault as he feels that he could of did something to help prevent those things from happening. And because hid did not do what he could of to stop it. It is now his fault. Though some would see this as a fucked up logic, Noctis does not. As Noctis feels that if you can possible prevent something from happening and yet you do nothing to try, then it is your fault when that thing happens.
  
  Serious: Noctis is one that tends to stay serious when the time calls for it. As Noctis is one to never joke in the heat of battle or when things are to be done. This is because Noctis knows that if he does not put his full focus on certain things and stay series then the results will most likely end badly. Though some think that Noctis stays series at all times this is not the truth. As Noctis is only serious when he feels that the time calls for it though to most Noctis always looks serious. Though Noctis sees that being serious is what can most likely help him come across to others as a person who does not play around. Since when Noctis threatens those that get in his way they take it as him telling the truth. As they know that Noctis is known for being a serious person. But to those close to Noctis know that when he is serious it is not the time to mess with him. As when Noctis gets into a serious mode he focuses on nothing but his goals and what is on his mind at the time. Because of this when Noctis gets into a serious mode he gets into the top of his fighting abilities. This makes Noctis a very dangerous person to deal with while he is serious.
  
  Silly: Noctis tends to be very silly and joking when he is with his friends and family as they bring the best out in him. Because around them Noctis knows that they do not judge him for being different and that they understand his powers. This allowed for Noctis to let down his tight guard that he tended to have around people and just be himself. And so with friends Noctis is always seeing laughing and playing jokes and not living up to his bad boy image. As Noctis is truly a kind hearted person who loves to have fun with friends. And because of this those that get close to Noctis tend to love this about him. As Noctis is always down to joke around and play game with his friends as long as the time calls for it. As Noctis understands that there is a time to be silly and have fun, but that there is also a time for him to be serious and get things done. Though Noctis can also sometimes take jokes to far as he does tend to use his magic in his jokes and his magic can sometimes get out of control when he is not completely focusing on a spell. And even though his friends hate him for doing jokes with his magic they always find it in themselves to get over it.

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» Background:
On one very dark and stormy night Kira Pendragon was in the living room of her and her husband’s three story house in city of Karakura. She was sitting on her blue and black designer couch. That she had paid about three thousand dollars for. Since she and Roku had a very good amount of money. Since the whole Pendragon family was filthy rich. Though most of them made living as wizards. Even though Kira did not believe in magic. She did not care that the family practiced magic.

So long as her son Salem did not practice magic. She did not care. Like her husband Roku. He may have believed in magic. But he did not study and practice it like the rest of his family. He also believed in the family legend that the family was related to the great powerful and famous wizard Merlin. Who was one of the main Pendragon's who made the family traditions and customs. Such as the one Roku and Sadie Roku's mother had convinced Kira to go through. Since it is a very big tradition in the Pendragon family. That all the children of Pendragon blood. Must be born in a natural birth so that their magic power's are not affected.

And this was one of the most biggest tradition's in the Pendragon clan. And so far there had not been a child of Pendragon blood. That has not had a natural birth. And so as she set there in the second floor living room. She started to have pain's in her stomach. And these pain's where not like the normal pain's she had been having. These where much worse. They were like no Pain she had ever felt. And so as she set there watching tv she started to scream out in pain.

In a very loud and dramatic scream that hurt the ear's as you heard it. And Roku and his mother Sadie ran down to help Kira. Since Roku and Sadie both decided that it would be could to have his mother Sadie at the house. And help them in the birth. Since not only had she given all three of her child's Roku ,Sam ,and Jake all natural birth's. But she also helped a lot of the family member's in there birth's. Since she was what they called a healer. A person who specialized in healing magic. And so she helped guide Kira threw the birth. And when the birth was threw.

They had a very natural and health baby. Until the very moment he opened his Eyes. Salem had the eye's of the devil. His eye's where just like that of a cat. Something that had been talked about in the Pendragon family for years. But Kira forbid the legend of the cat's eye's to be talked about around her or Salem. After Salem was born the word of his cat eye's started to spread around the Pendragon family like wild fire that could not be tamed. Every Pendragon clan member tried to come and see Salem and his eyes. They just could not believe that the legend of the baby with the cat eye's was born. Since there was a legend that the boy with the cat eye's would rise to power and be the greatest Sorcerer every.

Even more powerful then Merlin. And the whole Pendragon family wanted to be the one to teach Salem. But Kira would not let them go anywhere near Salem. Since she was somewhat sad and scared for her son. She did not know how people would take her son. Even though she loved him she could not make everyone else love and like him. Since some people might think he was a demon because of his eye's. She just hoped he had the chance for a normal life. And so when Salem was to start prekay.

Kira held Salem back. But Roku told her she would not be able to keep him from school. He was going to have to go to a good school. So that he could get a good education. So Kira new she was going to have to let Salem go. But she was not going to let him go until she found a nice and very good school for him. Cause she wanted the best education money could buy. Since she and Roku had the money to send him to any Private school in the country. Maybe even in the world.

After his mother and father. Had searched half of the world they found a nice private school in the capital . Not that far from where they lived. The school was very big and was one of the top schools in the world. So Kira and Roku agreed to the school. Since it would not be hard to get him to and from school. And when he got older he would be able to stat at the school dorm's. And it would not be hard for them to go visit him. So when Salem started the school it was all fine. Or so they thought after about the third week of school. Salem's teacher called them to the school to talk to them about how Salem was doing in the First Grade. She told them how Salem was doing good with all of his grade's.

Making A's on everything he did. But Salem had a problem with the other student's. They tended to pick on him and try and fight him. And so she told them she was going to try and fix it but that they should know what is going on. And one day when Kira decided to go to the park with Salem she would let him out of her site for a short amount of time.

Salem in that small amount of time would manage to get into a fight with about six of the kid's that he went to school with. That also just happened to be in his class. Kira ended up having to break up the fight and take Salem to the hospital. They said that he was not in bad shape. And so they patched up his cuts and bruises. And so the doctors sent him back home with his Mother. And so when Kira talked to Roku about it. He suggested. That they put Salem into a Dojo. So that he can train his skill's. In fighting and be able to handle himself. And so when Roku took Salem to the Dojo. He signed him up for every class. So that he could better his skills. Even though Salem was only 5 years old.

This was the start of Salem’s life of combat. And shortly after attending the Dojo for a few year’s Salem was able to hold his own in a fight against at least three boy’s of his age. So after this Kid’s tended not to try and fight Salem in a fight. But they still made fun and did not except him for his demon like cat eyes. This still hurt Salem a little. But he was able to dill with even though he was tired of all the kid’s.

But soon things would get worse for Salem as his powers would start to manifest even though his mother protested to him getting the training that he so needed from his family. And so Salem would try his best to try and learn to control his powers the best he could. As Salem had no idea what was happening to him till it was too late. As one day when Salem was in at school just sitting in the class he would accidently start a fire in the class room. This would be due to Salem not being able to control his powers.

And due to this Salem was almost expelled from the school but luckily his parents were able to work out a deal that would allow him to continue attending his school. This would also force Salem’s mother Kira to have to let Salem start his magical training. And so Salem’s uncle would come down from his home and take Salem to a school known as the School of Fang. A magical summer school for young kids gaining magical powers to train at. And at this school Salem would take on the name of Noctis. The name Noctis would serve as Salem’s sorcerer name as well as his middle name.

And at first Noctis would have a hard time at the school as his Magical skills were way behind most of the students as most of them had time training at least to control their powers. But After Noctis would come to be able to do the basics with his powers and just keep them under control he would easily be able to catch up with all the other kids of the school and soon even pass them up. As it was seen that Noctis had a talent when it came to combat magic as he was could at keeping the elements and other unknown forces under control. Though their were some forms of magic that Noctis sucked at. As he was horrible at transfiguration. As it tended to be difficult to make sure that all things got changed correctly.

This would soon make it for Noctis to start learning more advanced spells. As the teachers at the Academy felt that Noctis would be able to handle the power of higher level at his current level of progression. And so Noctis would then start to undergo intense training at the Tower of Fang. As the teachers felt that with Noctis skill and Pendragon blood he would be able to reach a level of power that no sorcerer had ever reached before.

And so Noctis would start to train every day nonstop just to try and get to this level of control. But Noctis would soon figure out that the teachers of the tower of fang were just trying to use him to reach their own personal goals and so Noctis would go into a rage and end up destroying the tower of fang. This would cause Noctis family not to be too happy with him but they understood the rage that he felt from being used and just let it all slide. And so Noctis would make his way back to school at Karakura high school. Though a lot of the kids were not happy with him coming back as they felt safer for the 3 years he was gone. But it could not be helped that Noctis would come back his 9th grade year ,

But now most of the kids of the school were scared to even look at Noctis wrong as people started rumors that during the years he was away from the school he was training in some dark arts. And though this was somewhat true Noctis did not want everyone in the whole school knowing this as all he wanted to do was try and get some friends as he was tired of being the loner boy who had not a single friend by his side. And Noctis knew that the rumors would do nothing but ruin his chance of getting friends.

But Noctis figured he could do nothing but try and make the best of it and work on keeping his powers under control as well as trying to get some knew friends. And almost at the end of his freshman year Noctis would manage to get a friend who would give him the idea of rebirthing the world with his powers. And so Noctis would start to work hard on trying to find friends that would not only be friends with him but also possible be down with his cause to rebirth the world. As Noctis felt that the world needed to change and the only way that they could do that is by having the world go under a completely rebirth even if the process managed to kill thousands or even millions of people.

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» Natural Attributes:
Genius IQ: Noctis is one that has spent a lot of his time reading books and learning all different things. This has made to be considered a Genius by others. Though Noctis does not seem himself being that way he does truly have a high IQ. As Noctis has spent most of his time trying to learn more about magic and science so that he can figure out if magic is real or if everything that they are doing is just some form of science. And because of this Noctis has become good with the studies of biology, chemistry, physics, and genetics. Threw learning these sciences Noctis has come able to do many things scientifically. Like chemical bombs and doing experiments on things. Though Noctis is not super smart in all of these subjects he I at least a decent knowledge in each of them that allows for him to conduct experiments that some kids his age would never be able to pull off.

Technology wiz: Noctis has one that has become that is good with all forms of technology whether it be a computer or a phone. As long as it is some form of technology Noctis can figure out how to work it like a pro in a matter of moments. This is because Noctis parents have gotten him lots of different technological devices for him to tinker with. And so because of this Noctis has take a lot of different devices and messed around with them learning all the things he could about technology. As during the times before Noctis started learning and studying magic all he really did was work with technology trying to make his own computers and networks. And even working on how to hack advance networks as well as do other things with computers. Through this knowledge Noctis has been able to do a lot of things to try and better his plans of rebirthing the world. As Noctis feel with the technology levels of the world today. Technology can be his greatest ally if he works it right and uses it to its fullest potential.

Hand to Hand combat: Though Noctis does not use hand to hand combat anymore as he has no use for it due to the fact that he has now learned how to control and focus his magical powers to use powers spells to fight his enemies. But before Noctis could use magic his parents had him train at a dojo starting at the age of 5. Due to this Noctis has come to be a very formidable fighter when it comes to pure hand to hand combat through all of his training and the great shape his body is in. Noctis was easily able to take on three boys of his age with decent fighting’s skills. And though Noctis does not tend to fight hand to hand anymore he still keeps his skills in tone as he practices his skills whenever he has a chance by just working out and sparing his friends. So this has allowed for him to stay a top of the line fighter.

Sword Fighting: This is the only skill besides magic that Noctis actually does use to the full of his abilities. As Noctis finds fighting with swords to be one of his favorite things as he just loves the use of swords. Though he does not get a lot of in combat experience with sword fighting, as most of his experience with swords come from his time in the dojo and the time he has spent training on his own and with friends. Though none of this as effected Noctis as he is still able to go head to head with those that have had way more in actual battle experience with swords. As Noctis is just very gifted when it comes to the art of using a sword.

» Racial Powers:
Elemental Stone: The Elemental stone is the first Anima stone of Noctis. This is the stone that Noctis made around the age of ten years old as it is the base of a lot of Noctis spells. As if it were not for the elemental stone Noctis would not be able to access his use of elemental spells. This stone is an internal stone making it unable to be stolen an also a possible reason for the changing of Noctis eye colors when he is using elemental magic. But also due to the fact that Noctis stone is infused with him and his Evolution powers resolve around his emotions and others things. Noctis has become able to freely manipulate the elements without using spells. Though this only allows for minor things like small fire balls and gust of winds or maybe a mild shock of electricity. This allows for Noctis to have quick attacks and not have to go through spells. But when Noctis uses the elements this way they are weaker than his spells as they are basic attacks. (Can only use the 5 basic elements this way for anything besides Wind, Fire, Lightning, Earth, or Water Noctis most use a spell. Think of this as like Noctis being able to send a bala of the five elements at his targets)

Soul Blade: The Soul blade is Noctis second Anima stone. This Anima stone is unlike Noctis other anima stone. As this stone is a external stone and shaped in the form of a sword. Through this sword Noctis has come able to accomplish more powers then just his spells. This is because the Soul Blade Anima stone is a stone that is based on two main things. This first ability of this soul blade is that it is a energy based stone. As the soul blade is able to draw the energy around it to not only charge itself but to also help in giving Noctis back his energy as the blade is able to draw 10% of energy every post. This allows for Noctis to be able to have more energy to fight as well as being able to keep him some back up energy. Just in the emergency that he is to run out of energy. The second ability of the Soul Blade is that it is not just a regular sword as the Soul blade is actually the key to a portal filled with hundreds of weapons. This allows for Noctis to change the sword into countless other weapons. All of these weapons may take on different shapes and forms. But all the weapons storied into the portal as of right now are just basic weapons. The soul blade can also open a portal to a dimension filled with everything that he has stored into it. This portal can only be opened by the soul blade. Noctis will do this by holding the blade out. A portal the size of a average door will then appear in front of Noctis.. Though the Soul Blade is also connected to this portal itself as this Anima stone is also connected into Noctis first stone. Allowing for Noctis to get his Soul Blade back through using his powers and being able to have the sword teleport to him.

Forms of the Soul Blade:

Soul Sorcery:

Spells to be learned later:

» Evolution Powers:
Through his evolution Noctis has gained access to taking his soul sorcery to a whole new level and has become able to use high level spells that most people would not be able to do. As Noctis has come to use old school Latin magic allowing for him to be a powerhouse with his magic as most do not use the type of spells he does. As Noctis magic does not only come from the enchantments that he says but as well as from his emotions and feelings. This is because his evolution has made him one with magic. This means that Noctis must always keep his emotions under control because if Noctis does not keep his emotions under control he can lose control of his magic and cause accidents like he use to when he was a little kid. This also can have its advantages as rage could help power Noctis spells though he would have a harder time trying to keep all of his spells under control.
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General Skills

• Durability: Adept
  
• General Speed: Advanced
  
• Strength: Adept
  
• Weapon Skill: Advanced
  

Human Skill Sheet

• Anima Stone Strength: Advanced
  
• Soul Sorcery: Advanced
  
• Soul Dash: Adept
  
• Soul Detection: Adept

Chi Skills

• Geppo: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  
• Vindeca: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  
• Tekkai: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  
• Yang Surge: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner

• Willpower/Determination: Adept
  
• Mental Deduction: Advanced
  
• Pain Endurance: Adept
  
• Focus: Advanced
  

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OOOOOH PRETTY AN APPLICATION. I BETTER GET OUT MY TOOLS. -picks up a marker-

This stone is an internal stone making it unable to be stolen an also a possible reason for the changing of Noctis eye colors when he is using elemental magic.

Um... The f#@$? How exactly did he do THAT?

(Can only use the 5 basic elements this way for anything besides Wind, Fire, Lightning, Earth, or Water Noctis most use a spell. )

Spells? Where the hell are these "Spells" listed? You're also going to need more detail on how he can manipulate each one of those five.

Soul Blade: The Soul blade is Noctis second Anima stone. This Anima stone is unlike Noctis other anima stone. As this stone is a external stone and shaped in the form of a sword. Through this sword Noctis has come able to accomplish more powers then just his spells. This is because the Soul Blade Anima stone is a stone that is based on two main things. This first ability of this soul blade is that it is a energy based stone. As the soul blade is able to draw the energy around it to not only charge itself but to also help in giving Noctis back his energy. This allows for Noctis to be able to have more energy to fight as well as being able to keep himself some back up energy. Just in the emergency that he is to run out of energy. The second ability of the Soul Blade is that it is not just a regular sword as the Soul blade is actually the key to a portal filled with hundreds of weapons. This allows for Noctis to change the sword into countless other weapons. As well as open a portal to a dimension filled with everything that he has stored into it. Because of this Noctis has become able to seal hundreds of things into this portal so that he may never lose them. Though the Soul Blade is also connected to this portal itself as this Anima stone is also connected into Noctis first stone. Allowing for Noctis to get his Soul Blade back through using his powers and being able to have the sword teleport to him.

Ummmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm....

Describe each sword he can make in detail, all hundreds of them, or decrease the number of weapons to ones that you can describe. Second off, explain the energy gathering better; how much energy can it gather per post? Last, how large is the area the portal leads to and what can go inside of it? How large is the portal itself?

...@Sorcery list thing

I'll check that after this is all done.

And that's all for this time around.

Unsure if proper changes were made, so...

Moving this to old wip.

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Alright, pick your favorite top five-seven spells from these. You can keep those, and maybe figure out the rest in thread. For the level I see him, that much variety is just... way overpowered. And second, add in a global limiter; such as one spell cast per post, AS WELL AS giving each INDIVIDUAL spell a description of how much energy you use in it.

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Name: Shroud of Black Steel
Type: Defensive
Incantation: Cutis nigri ferro
Effects: This will transform Noctis skin into a black steel that is sturdy enough to take on heavy attacks yet flexible enough so that he can still move. Though while Noctis has this armor on his speed is drastically slowed down as the steel effects his movement
Notes: Last for 6 post 2 post cool down

How much does it take to break the armor?

Name: Shadow Form
Type: Support, Defense
Incantation: Facere me unum umbris
Effects: This spell will turn Noctis into a all black shadowy figure. While in this form Noctis is able to travel through the shadows as if he was a demon. Though this is not the only effect of this spell, as Noctis is also unable to harmed by physical attacks in this form. Meaning that trying to punch or stab him will just phase through him as though he was just a ghost. This will make it hard for others to hit Noctis.
Notes: This spell last 5 post with a 2 post cool down

Define physical attacks better. Does that mean a zanpaktou could hit him since, in essence, it is made of reishi? Could an enchanted sword? Etc.

Name: Fireswarm
Type: Offensive Summoning
Incantation: Educ scorpiones ignis
Effects: This spell will bring forth 300 hundred swarming scorpions from the ground. These scorpions are not normal ones for the fact that they are covered in fire and able to breathe fire, as well as their sting is not poisonous but very deadly as it sends in a liquid fire that starts to burn a person from the inside.
Notes: The Scorpions are these size of a average house cat and at a tier of 2-1+

Change the number of scorpions to 15 and the tier to 4-1.

Name: Tendrils of Thuban
Type: Offensive summoning
Incantation: Cavernis exeunt egressus
Effects: a dozen green slimy tentacles will come from the ground and go to wrap up any hold any target that Noctis so chooses. As Noctis is able to control the tentacles once he has summoned them. This allows for him to restrain his targets as well as do other naughty things he may so please.

Notes:

..First off, you disgust me. Second off, how long do the tendrils last? Third off, how strong do you have to be to break them?

Name: Wings of the Fiend
Type: Support
Incantation: i vocant super alas ad adsurgere aethera
Effects: A pair of giant leather demon like wings will sprout from the back of Noctis. These wings will work like real ones allowing for Noctis to be able to fly and soar the skys of speeds at about 150mph on average.
Notes:

How long do the wings last for?

Name: Dark Embrace
Type: Offensive, Healing
Incantation: Mortiferum Apprehéndite
Effects: A Ribbon of twisting darkness will extend from Noctis hands to the chest of his target. And as long as this ribbon is connected to the chest of the target Noctis is able to draw from their powers healing himself and replenishing his strength. And as the longer this last the weaker Noctis victim will become till they are completely drained this will then not kill them but put them in a deep sleep.
Notes:Draining time till completely drained depends on the victim’s tier and energy level and health at the time of the spell.

You need a cap of how much energy he can drain, like 15% of his total. You also need to list how you can get out of it.

Eyebite looks fine.

Rest will be graded when you unlock them.

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• Name [X]
  
• Appropriate Age [X]
  
• Gender [X]
  
• Appearance Present [X]
  
• Appearance Described in Appropriate Length OR Picture is Visible [X]
  
• Appearance is Not Claimed [X]
  
• 10 sentences for personality [X]
  
• History is of appropriate length [X]
  
• Powers are not Godmod/Overpowered [X]
  
• Powers are described reasonably enough [X]
  
• Application/RP Sample is not in First Person [X]
  
• Skills are not filled in (Omit if a Hollow)[X]
  
• RP Sample Present (Omit if this is not the first character) [X]
  
• RP Sample is 10 sentences [X]
  

• Willpower/Determination: Adept
  
• Mental Deduction: Advanced
  
• Pain Endurance: Adept
  
• Focus: Advanced
  

Comments/Notes: SORRY FOR THE WAIT, APPROVED!!!
Tier: 2-2+