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Julie.Evermore
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Sat Jun 23, 2012 12:22 am
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- Name: Tsubaki Kananu
- Titles: ninja, spartoi
- Gender: (female)
- Appearance Age: 16
- Age: 112
- Affiliation/Rank : evermore clan
- Appearance Picture: https://2img.net/h/i245.photobucket.com/albums/gg49/emmeoates/gewgewa1.jpg
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- Personality: Tsubaki is nice when she want to be she is caring and doesnt like to fight she is also very sensitive so be careful around her. she is very mature , She has a very magnanimous, polite and gentle personality and always tries to help or comfort her friends even when she has no idea how to help. She is caring and understanding and sometimes acts as the mediator when her friends fight, and her understanding and insight sometimes makes her the agony aunt figure for people who are troubled.

She cares deeply for her friends, and does not seem fond of things that might make them upset, she often worries about her friends if they are in danger, and is upset when the people she cares about are hurt. Tsubaki's soul is 'very co-operative and has a lot of space to accept people. Because of her accepting nature, she can see the good in people who, at first glance, do not seem to have anything likeable about them

- Likes: Tempest Evermore, candy, watermelon, music, people

- Dislikes: fighting, animal killers, bullies, people who talk shit, and vampires
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- History: Tsubaki is a member of the Evermore Clan, a family of famous Japanese Demon Weapons. Tsubaki lived with her family, and to agree with him all the time in order to please him. She has an evil brother.

Wanting to stop her brother, Tsubaki decided to enroll in Shibusen. On enrollment day, she saw Tempest on one of his grand speeches. Everyone ignored him apart from Tsubaki, who said that she thought he was great. Tempest, impressed that Tsubaki had been the first person to notice his 'greatness,' asked her to tell him her name. The two soon decided to become partners. The two have been a Couple ever since.

Tsubaki is shown to be very agile and a good fighter. She puts up a fair fight against her brother Masamune. However, this might not really count as Tsubaki is fighting with her soul and not with her physical body. However, she is shown to be very athletic. Shinigami states, however, that her true strength is in her soul and not in her other abilities. However, Tsubaki rarely fights alone, and usually fights with Tempest

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- Reiatsu Color:Purple

- Zanpakutô Spirit Name: Shingetsutan Tsukihime

- Zanpakutô Spirit Appearance: https://2img.net/h/i276.photobucket.com/albums/kk2/intoxicating-cherry/Girls/anime_girl-2.jpg

- Inner World: pink skies and hot tubs everwhere

- Sealed Zanpakutô Apperance : http://cdn.overstock.com/images/products/3/P11254742.jpg

- Sealed Zanpakutô Abilities: (Over the years, Shinigami have evovled to the point where they now have special powers even when sealed. As such, does your character have special ability or power when not released? Try not to go overboard. If you do not have one, just erase this section)

- Release: shine my love

- Shikai Description: tsubaki kananu Darkangle

- Shikai Abilities: flying speed and scorching attacks

- Bankai Description: tsubaki kananu Yumipurple

- Bankai Abilities: speed and darkness shatter ( as where when whe uses it darkness devoweres the enimies and implodes)

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To Find Out about what these skills are for, please READ THIS THREAD before you try doing anything to it. After you have read it, do not feel your skills out until a staff member has graded your thread. We will also do your will sheet for you upon grading your application.

General Skills
Durability: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
General Speed: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
Strength: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
Weapon Skill: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner


Racial Skills
Hoho: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
Kidō: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
Zanjutsu: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
Hakuda: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
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Sat Jun 23, 2012 8:40 am
this looks incomplete so in WIP it goes!
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Sun Jun 24, 2012 9:11 pm
All right... Julie there are unfortunately a large amount of things that do need to be fixed.

First off... The history is too short. The last paragraph doesn't seem like history, but instead a clarification of the characters skills.

Secondly... You need a bit of an explanation for your Shikai Description. Since it's currently an image, I am assuming that your character is supposed to transform into that girl with the wings and then the sword obviously changes, but this needs to be explained with much more detail.

Thirdly... Shikai Ability "Flying Speed and Scorching Attacks" You really need to be MUCH more specific in this. Explain each ability and what it does, how long it lasts, it's drawbacks, it's speed, how far it can go, and how people are able to dodge, counter, or block it.

Same goes for your bankai's appearance and abilities. Explain everything mentioned above as well. Detail is required. Do it to the best of your ability, and if you need any help, contact me on Xat, and I'll do my best to help you out. Also, for a bit more help you can look at some of the applications that have been approved. That's what I did when I first came to PH, and it helped a lot!

Final thing I currently have to say.... Since this is your first character, you NEED to put a sample of your role play skills on here, otherwise that will prevent approval as well.

Also, once your character is approved, remember that you can't have your character attain bankai or shikai immediately. You have to work for it through role play, fighting, and interaction through other characters. So, you CAN fill that part of the App out, but remember it can't be used until later on approved.
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Tue Jul 17, 2012 7:59 pm
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Chucking this in old WIP! find it there <3
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Wed Oct 10, 2012 5:08 pm
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Okay moved into Archives!
If you want it back, feel free to ask! It's just been sitting around way too long so yeah.
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