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Zero-akasku
Zero-akasku
Starter Member
Joined : 2012-06-20
Posts : 1

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Wed Jun 20, 2012 9:48 am
- Name: Zero Akasku
- Titles: Ghost
- Gender: Male
- Appearance Age: 19
- Age: 17
- Affiliation/Rank: Rouge

- Appearance Description: White medium hair about to jawline light skin (slight tan) about 5'9 wears a black jacket with hood over head black pants and black leather boots that go over the pants about half way up to shin. eyes light blue almost white.
- Appearance Picture: Zero Akasku Anime_boy1
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- Personality: Zero himself is extremely smart yet easily bored and lazy a good fight would intreats him. His talking patterns are that of a genius and yet one of dull boredom when not in a fight he is an extreme know-it-all and would be glad to prove it. Zero isnt one much for work but will get up if need be. Over all he is a great fighter but his over thinking sometimes leads him into his own defeat

- Likes: All like a good fight, being lazy, and sleeping.

- Dislikes: Irritants, pests, Over confident people, and power hungry people.
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- History: Zeros life on earth was one of a disturbed child. his parents were both killed by some unknown entity. (a hollow) his life after was filled with sorrow and anger. after dying of a horrible death of being murdered by a gang of thugs a single Shinigami was able to bring him up to Shinigami status. but soon Zero grew bored of the same routine and soon broke himself off from it all and wondered around the outworld. now he does what he pleases for the sake of entertainment. There is no real good or evil to him... just what isnt boring.

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- Reiatsu Color: a light blue ice color.

- Zanpakutô Spirit Name:

- Zanpakutô Spirit Appearance: Akiyo

- Inner World: A large man with a mask over his mouth. His eyes white as snow. his skin pale now lower half. his hair spiked and black. wearing a white robe.

- Sealed Zanpakutô Apperance : a double sided blade handle laces with metal string. bar covering fist

- Sealed Zanpakutô Abilities: able to make snow flares and control where it goes.

- Release: Temeture around user decreases greatly and a small snow flurry hovers around user.

- Shikai Description: the sword spits and bends into hooks knives at the other end of the handle stick out (in other words twin hooks)

- Shikai Abilities: The snow is able to freeze into Ice and also able to control wind around the area of 50 feet around the user. also user gets faster due to burst of wind behind him.
Kenshin
Kenshin
God of Wind
Joined : 2010-07-09
Posts : 662
Age : 32
Location : Hilliard, Ohio

Member Info
Platinum Points:
Zero Akasku Left_bar_bleue5/0Zero Akasku Empty_bar_bleue  (5/0)
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Wed Jun 20, 2012 10:27 pm
Application Checklist
  • Name [-]
  • Appropriate Age [X]
  • Gender [X]
  • Appearance Present [X]
  • Appearance Described in Appropriate Length OR Picture is Visible [X]
  • Appearance is Not Claimed [X]
  • 10 sentences for personality [O]
  • History is of appropriate length [O]
  • Powers are not Godmod/Overpowered [X]
  • Powers are described reasonably enough [O]
  • Application/RP Sample is not in First Person [X]
  • Skills are not filled in (Omit if a Hollow)[X]
  • RP Sample Present (Omit if this is not the first character) [O]
  • RP Sample is 10 sentences [O]


Will Skills
  • Willpower/Determination: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Mental Deduction: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Pain Endurance: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Focus: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner


Comments/Notes: Cannot Approve this at this time, you need to do a lot more with everything really, I would like to see about 3-4 paragraphs of history, the personality needs to be at least 2 paragraphs or 10 sentences.

Your powers need to be described much more, look at some of the other peoples applications in order to figure out how they describe their own as well as how long and how in depth other people describe their powers.

Release, this means release phrase, like when Kisuke Urahara said "Awaken, Benihime."

If you need more information you can even look at a application that I have done, or that other people have done. If you need any help just ask me (Avenheart) or (Kenshin) for help or advice whenever you see me on xat or shoot me a PM, or my skype is richard.davis32.

Other then that if you need and want help right away then ask one of the janitors or moderators or a long time member on the site.
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Tsubine
Tsubine
Ye Olde Guarde
Joined : 2010-07-09
Posts : 3940
Age : 30
Location : Gracemeria

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