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Kiseichu - Evil Shinigami [APPROVED, 2-2+]
Wed Jun 13, 2012 4:19 pm
EVIL SHINIGAMI TEMPLATEBasic Information
• Name: Kiseichū
• Titles: The Parasite
• Gender: Male
• Appearance Age: 27
• Age: 849
• Affiliation/Rank: The Kokuryuteshi
• Appearance Description:
Kiseichū’s appearance is largely shaped by his history as a poor farmer during his life and a prisoner in the Maggot’s Nest for over 400 years. Naturally a rather towering individual, though by no means the tallest, at an even 6’0”; Kiseichū has a rather gaunt and lithe frame, more bones than anything else. In fact he is so underweight that when he removes his clothing it looks as if someone has stretched human skin over an old skeleton. Besides his rather emaciated appearance, Kiseichū’s skin is also crisscrossed with a plethora of scars from the variety of experiments that have been performed on him by both the members of the 12th Division and himself. Kiseichū’s skin is rather pale, almost translucent, from his several centuries of imprisonment that not even a couple decades have been able to get rid of. Kiseichū prefers to let his hair grown out as long as he can, it being one of the few things he was allowed to control during his time in the Maggot’s Nest. As such, his hair hangs down much lower than his waist and can touch the back of his thighs, and as one would expect such log hair takes a long time to take care of. Kiseichū spends a large portion of his time making sure that his hair is always luscious and smooth as silk in the off chance that someone might come feel it. Another aspect of his appearance is his golden metallic eyes that are actually an add-on from the Phantom Tech brain implanted into him by the 12th Division. Besides Kiseichū overall eccentric appearance there are three more little accents that draw his whole look together. The first is the nails on his hand, which Kiseichū has allowed to grow to an inch and a half long, filed to claws, and then painted a deep rich purple. The second accent is Kiseichū’s teeth. Considering the taste of toothpaste to be abhorrent, his teeth have suffered quite dramatically and have become a nasty yellow color that makes people he talks to cringe a little. It’s a miracle that all of his teeth haven’t fallen out of his head yet. While the nails and teeth are certainly disgusting, it has widely been decided that the most repulsive of all Kiseichū’s features is his tongue, which has turned black. It is still red to a certain extent but for the most part it is covered in a dark black shade. Besides the color his tongue is also abnormally long, being able to just curve up under the tip of his chin but this is due to a self-performed surgery than any natural occurrence.
For clothing Kiseichū prefers to abandon his old uniform that he wore as a Shinigami and accepted a much more unique outfit. Generally Kiseichū can be found wearing a large robe with a split that goes all the way up to his waist. The inside of this robe is lined with a multitude of pockets where Kiseichū likes to stash the little treasures and devices he makes and finds during the course of his duties. The inside of the robe is also lined with a silver silk that make it feel as soft as sin against Kiseichū’s skin. The robe is held together by three silver buttons that go up the front; one at his waist, on at his sternum, and the last at the top of the collar. Underneath these robes Kiseichū chooses to keep his outfit simple. For a top he wears nothing more than a black shirt with no sleeves that he wears tucked into his pants. The pants themselves are black leather and covered in belts that have been tightened almost to the point where they begin to cut off the circulation to his legs. The reason Kiseichū does this is that during his time in the Maggot’s Nest he was considered a . . . violent prisoner and was often bound by a variety of harnesses. Eventually one just gets used to the feeling and feels even worse without it.
• Appearance Picture: Kiseichū
_________________________________Personality
• Personality:
Kiseichu's basic personality it the stereotypical mad scientist/sadist personality type. He enjoys inflicting pain on other and will often go out of his way to do things the harder way only to see other in pain. Besides this Kiseichu has a penchant for blood and has in the past used it as paint for his living spaces along with dismembered body parts. But that's not what you want to know about Kiseichu is it? I mean the darker parts of him are covered in the first two sentences. No what you wanna know is that Kiseichu is an extremly happy and sunny person.
Always laughing and smiling Kiseichu loves to tell jokes and grace others with his corny puns. All of his co-workers despise them but the last one to say something about them to him ended up in 50 different pieces in 50 different jars. See, Kiseichu thinks of himself as one funny guy and is always laughing at his own jokes which does nothing to facilitate good feelings between himself and other. This is due to the fat that not only are those people just annoying but Kiseichu has one of the most obnoxious laughs in the world. It's one of those high nasally laughs where the person snorts a lot and their eyes begin to water. Incredibly annoying on regular people, on Kiseichu its given and even sharper edge due to his rather disgusting appearance. Kiseichu loves his jokes so much that he even tells them to inanimate objects, in fact he even talks to them.
This attribute is due to the long periods of solitary confinement that Kiseichu was forced to spend when he was locked deep within the bowels of the Maggot's Nest. He would notice little stone or pebbles and name them, then give them personalities and histories. Those little stone, and most inanimate objects, became his friends. Kiseichu talked to them like he would anyone else and they seemed to talk back. Of course this can only be expected when one is confined to the depths of darkness but even after his release he continues to do it. The one item that Kiseichu personifies the most is an old human skull that he keeps in his laboratory. When he is stuck on some problem, Kiseichu puts his hand inside the skull and puppets it; talking to it as he works through the various problems he is dealing. The skull is named Alister and considering that Kiseichu spends a lot of his time in the lab it can easily be considered his best friend.
The laboratory is Kiseichu's home and lover, the math his brother, the physics his sister, and the chemistry his dark sultry mistress. When working in the lab Kiseichu gets a drug like high working through problems and developing more ideas for the K to use. In fact, Kiseichu spends so much time in his lab that he as brought a small cot into it and placed it in the back so that he could just sleep there. Kiseichu's lab is rather disturbing with a plethora of dead specimens and vials and containers filled with different limbs and eyes and brains. All in all the perfect home for Kiseichu.
Of course in order to use all this fancy equipment and not just butcher the things around him Kiseichu needs some knowledge to draw on. Never considered a genius like some, Kiseichu is a naturally sharp individual who is able to pick something up after being shown it once or twice. Besides this his rather unique mind allow Kiseichu to think outside the box and take a rather unorthodox approach to problems. The majority of Kiseichu's knowledge was complied during his time in the Maggot's Nest where he was forced to spend long amounts of time by him self. Of course the basis for his knowledge was built during his time in the Shinigami Academy and his brief tenure in the 12th Division.
• Likes:
- Sweets
One of top three of Kiseichu's vices is sweets. It doesn't really matter what kind they are even; hard, soft, fruity, fudge, chocolate, if it's candy Kiseichu will eat it even if its rotten. Since his escape Kiseichu has started to fill on of his many pockets with peppermint hard candies for him to suck on when he is working or in the field. Kisechu's favorite type of sweet is cotton candy! He loves the fluffy airy feel of it and then the way it melts on his tongue just blows his mind.- Children
A rather unexpected attribute of Kiseichu's personality is his love of children. Perhaps a leftover sentiment from his human life, Kiseichu will do many, many things in the name of science and under the orders of his superiors but the only thing he will not do is harm children. In fact, every once and awhile he can be found lurking in the human world at a candy shop passing out free sweets to the children.- Books
An extension of his natural intelligence and the subsequent knowledge gained during his studies as a Shinigami has instilled within Kiseichu a love of books and a deep respect for them. Over the decades after his escape Kiseichu has complied a small library of medical and science journals as well as the occasional steamy romance novel and children's book. Kiseichu has taken to carrying around a small notebook covered in human skin to jot down his field observations in.- Flesh
Perhaps the most disturbing of all of Kiseichu's little quirks is his love for flesh. Ever since becoming a soul and then being allowing into the Shinigami ranks Kiseichu has always felt a gnawing urge to bite down into the flesh of those around him and taste their blood. It was his inability to control this impulse that would get him locked away in the Maggot's Nest after murdering his patrol mates as well as a hollow and gorging himself on their flesh. Now that his is a member of the K, Kiseichu no longer has to run and hide in the darkness to indulge in his perversion.
• Dislikes:
- Soul Society
One of his most obvious dislikes is for the Soul Society, this dislike is created by a number of factors the most obvious being Kiseichu's imprisonment with the Maggot's Nest. Besides this, Kiseichu feels that the Soul Society's refusal to see his work as anything other than brilliant a case for their willful ignorance which is something that, as a scientist, Kiseichu cannot stand. In order to educate the Shinigami, Kiseichu is especially cruel to any he catches as a method of educating them.- Stupid People
This is rather a misleading dislike, for it is not the naturally stupid that Kiseichu has and hate for, he just feels sympathy for them, it is those who are willfully ignorant. The individuals who choose to ignore the lessons of their predecessors and those who just refuse to learn and expand their existence. Kiseichu has very little patience for these people and they can quickly find themselves on his bad side if they persist in annoying him.- Butterflies
Kiseichu doesn't so much dislike butterflies as have an overwhelming fear of them that can send him into a sniveling fit of screaming and crying. When asked why he fears them so, Kiseichu was stated that he finds their wings creepy and their little nose mouth thing absolutely terrifying.- The Color Pink
For no particular reason Kiseichu hates the color pink. The reason changes every time that you ask him so many people have just chalked it up to his unique look on life.
_________________________________History
• History:
Life (1563-1585)
Born deep in the winter of 1563 during the end of the Muromachi period to two peasant farmers, Kiseichū’s life was one of misery and hard work. From the beginning it was nothing but trouble for a child born in the depths of winter during that time was almost assuredly meant to die. But no, even from the moment of his birth Kiseichū lived up to the parasite within his soul. He latched onto the milk of his mother and as he drank and got stronger, his mother began to fade away as her child slowly sucked the life from her. Slowly the people of the village in which Kiseichū were born began to shun the family under the belief that a child who could not only survive the winter but thrive must be a demon. Their fear was solidified when three months of Kiseichū was off the teat his mother died. The villagers thought that the demon child had disposed of his caretaker when it was done with it. The truth was something quite different. Kiseichū was no demon, he was a child and like all children demanded the heart and soul of those who looked after him. His mother was a naturally frail woman who just could not handle the strain on her body that having a child in the middle of winter faced. But the villagers did not see this, the saw only the child grow strong as the mother grew weak.
So with a rather unfortunate start Kiseichū was forced to grow up in a village that thought of him as a demon. The other children were forbidden to play with him, to even associate with him or his father. Naturally, Kiseichū began to look to alternative options to just working for his father all time and began to spend a large portion of his time deep in the woods bordering the village. This did nothing to alleviate the fears the villagers had about the dark haired boy who ate his mother, in fact this belief was compounded when one day some of the village children follow Kiseichū deep into the woods and witnessed him trapping and then torturing a bird. From that day on the entire village refused to do any business with Kiseichū, threatening and beating them when he got too close.
Home was no better than the village was. Kiseichū’s father never laid a hand on him due to the fact that his son looked so much like his mother. But this did not protect Kiseichū from the hate his father felt towards him for taking away his beloved. Instead of going to his son’s side when he was beaten and cut by the villagers and their children, he turned a blind eye when Kiseichū would turn up on their door step beaten and bloody. Occasionally Kiseichū would do or say something to infuriate his father and he would turn him out in the cold and wild for the night. Of course, being familiar with the area with was more a blessing than a curse. Things at home got no better when Kiseichū’s father took another woman who proceeded to bear him more sons. All too soon Kiseichū faded from his father’s site and was replaced with his half brothers and sisters. Additionally, while he father was above hitting Kiseichū, his step mother was not. She would mercilessly beat him for every little offense that she felt was done to her or her children.
Back in that time one was not able to leave their home and venture out into the world on their own. Kiseichū stayed with his father and worked on the farm as his brothers and sisters were given occupations and husbands to marry. Kiseichū lived and worked on the farm and saw two eras end and the beginning of one of the greatest in Japanese History. The uneventful and rather sub-par life Kiseichū ended with his death in the cold, as it began, due to a sickness in the winter of 1585.
Death (1585-1694)
Almost immediately upon his death Kiseichū was recruited by the Shinigami and put through the academy. It was here that Kiseichū’s mind and soul really blossomed into the sadistic bastard that he would later become. Already anti-social from his life, this was merely enhanced by the sudden presence of a multitude of individual who wanted to be Kiseichū’s friend. Unfortunately, not having grown up learning the social skills needed to interact with people on a day to day basis all of their efforts fell flat. Slowly their attitude towards him began to harder, they started to avoid him, then they stopped talking to him, they started to ignore him, stopped even looking at him. Slowly the air of the academy began to feel as oppressive as the village had, and like he had before Kiseichū sought out a refuge from the eyes and judgments of those around him. Luckily, Kiseichū managed to find just that in the science labs at the Academy. Always a curious individual, Kiseichū quickly began to learn as much as he could about science and all its disciplines. Quickly Kiseichū began to evolve and become smart. He began to excel at areas that others failed at.
Never one for physical combat, Kiseichū chose to focus his efforts in the Academy towards the expansion of his Reiryoku and Reiatsu. This naturally meant Kiseichū spent a lot of his time practicing Kidō, he was eventually said to be one of the top 10 Kidō users in his year. All of this meant nothing to Kiseichū; every one of his thoughts and abilities was directed towards his experiments, his science.
Kiseichū never rocked the boat too much during his time at the Academy and graduated in the top 10% of his class. Eventually he settled into an uneasy alliance with the rest of his classmates, they would leave him alone and he would assist them on their homework. Upon graduation Kiseichū was recruited by the 12th division and was thrown head first into the world of his dreams.
The Fall (1694-2008)
For a long while, things were great in the after-life of Kiseichū; he was working with science and being allowed to experiment and think and solve problems like never before. He began to develop relationships with those around him. Of course, all good things must come to an end. In retrospect, Kiseichū is never quite sure when it began. Perhaps it was the chemicals or maybe just the thought of the power at his fingertips, but slowly he started to change. It was only barely noticeable at first, he would give less anesthetic to the test subjects just to make them feel some pain, but slowly it became more and more of an issue. Soon Kiseichū began to cause pain to the specimens on purpose . . . he came to be regarded as a dark and disturbed man. When there was a particularly gruesome or unseemly experiment, it was passed to Kiseichū who would happily perform it.
It was also during this time that Kiseichū began to hear the voice of the spirit dwelling within him. Deep in the throes of ecstasy as Kiseichū watched fountains of blood burst from his specimens and their screams reverberated in his head; he heard it. A slight slithering sound. At first it was indistinct and Kiseichū wrote if off as nothing more than some machinery that needed to be oiled or something of that nature. But as time passed and Kiseichū grew more and more cruel the voice got louder and louder, but Kiseichū could not summon it at will. Only when bathed in the blood of others could he hear it.
Things finally came to a head several months after the voice began to talk to him. Truly disturbed by the viciousness of Kiseichū’s methods his superiors banned him from the laboratory and he was sent on patrols with other divisions of the Soul Society. It was on one such patrol where thing finally ended. Sent out with three other problems Shinigami to hunt a particularly potent hollow, no doubt as a way to take care of them easily, Kiseichū would indulge in the finest meal ever provided to him. Just as Kiseichū suspected, the mission turned out to be nothing more than a mission to rid the Soul Society of problem people. The hollow they were sent to fight was MUCH more powerful than anything they were told to expect. They were cut down like weeds before a strong wind. But it was there, deep in the trenches, surrounded by death and blood that the voice came to him. Louder and much more powerful than before, it commanded Kiseichū. And he obeyed. Kiseichū fell to his knees and began to tear the still lukewarm flesh from the body of one of his teammates. As Kiseichū feasted on the tough sinewy flesh of his teammate the spirit within him drug Kiseichū deep within himself. There it they confronted each other, fought, talked, and dealed. By the end of the matter Wamu no Anahoru had agreed to give Kiseichū his power in return for the flesh of others, a deal that Kiseichū was more than happy to agree too.
When another squad arrived for cleanup they were disgusted by what they saw. Covered in the blood and gore of the hollow and his teammates, Kiseichū was kneeling on the corpse of the dead hollow consuming its flesh. As the look around they noticed that not only have Kiseichū devoured the flesh of a hollow but that of the other Shinigami as well. After they finished vomiting and subduing Kiseichū, they took him before the Captains who determined that he should be locked away in the Maggot’s Nest, the prison where only the most depraved criminals were sent.
Escape (2008-Present)
Sealed deep in the bowels of the Maggot’s nest for decades, the already weakened mind of Kiseichū completely broke. Locked and forgotten deep in the darkness Kiseichū was forced to hold a mirror to himself and what he found was atrocious. Kiseichū coped with this by choosing to abandon his sanity in the night and embracing the darkness deep within himself. During his time in the deep Kiseichū expanded his knowledge of the sciences by reading book after book until he had finished every single one of the books within Kiseichū’s grasp. And while he learned, he planned and prepared for the moment when he could escape.
This moment finally came in the year 2150. The population boom of the Hollows, Arrancar, and Demons the Shinigami began to grasp at straws in order to deal with them. They began to pull Shinigami from duties that were considered non-essential. One of these duties was guarding the Maggot’s Nest. The weakened security provided Kiseichū with the perfect chance to escape. Using the other inmates as a distraction, Kiseichū caused a mass riot that took what few guards they had off of their other positions. While they were distracted, Kiseichū managed to ambush a lone guard and steal his keys. With the keys to his freedom in the palm of his hand, Kiseichū stopped long enough only to grab his sword and eat before leaving.
Once free he floundered for something to do until the K found him and brought him into the fold where he was been faithfully serving ever since.
_________________________________Zanpakutō
• Reiatsu Color: Kiseichū is a dull decaying swampy green that is reminescent of a swamp.
• Zanpakutô Spirit Name: Wāmu no Anawohoru
• Zanpakutô Spirit Appearance: Wāmu no Anawohoru has a rather disgusting and nightmare inducing appearance. At first glance the spirit seems like nothing me than a completely bald emaciated decomposing corpse that has been stuck in the mud. The color of its skin is the shiny bright white of maggots, it has no teeth and talks in a hissing voice. The eye sockets of been covered with a layer of skin so it can not see. It's arms are also abnormally long, being twice the length of the part of its body above the mud. The arms end in curved talon like nails that have a diseased yellow appearance.
However, the body of Wāmu no Anawohoru does not end here. Hidden beneath the mud is the rest of its terrifying body. When completely exposed Wāmu no Anawohoru looks like a giant worm with a massive mouth filled with razor sharp teeth and a plethora of tentacles designed to grasp prey and drag it into its mouth. All together the worm is 50 feet long and is 20 feet tall when measured from the top of the human part to the bottom. The human part of Wāmu no Anawohoru extends from the top of its body, about three feet back from the voracious mouth.
• Inner World:
The inner world of Kiseichū is a dark and dreary swamp that seems to extend forever is all directions. Trees have fallen down all across the land and some have sunk deep into the mud. Curtains of moss hang from the trees making it impossible to see for long in any direction. This coupled with the fact that the swamp is almost always covered in a low light fog makes traversing this area extremely dangerous. At the center of this swamp is a large mud pool that is constantly bubbling, in the middle of this pool is Wāmu no Anawohoru with the human part of his body sticking up.
• Sealed Zanpakutô Apperance :
In its sealed state Wāmu no Anawohoru takes the more of a base katana. The handle is wrapped in black leather and lacks a guard. The sheath for the sword is made of unlacquered petrified wood that seems to constantly creak. The blade its self is a complete wreck. Broken about half way down the sword, the blade its self is chipped and dull and has started to rust. All in all it looks like something that belongs in a horror movie or an old smithy than any sort of weapon.
• Release: Sono niku o horisageru, Wāmu no Anawohoru.
• Shikai Description: After uttering the release phrase and drawing his blade, Wāmu no Anawohoru begins to secrete a black viscous liquid that covers the entire blade and handle. After being completely covered the sword starts to writhe in his hand, transforming and shrinking into a two foot long worm that is roughly two inches thick. The worm has the same appearance as the inner spirit of Wāmu no Anawohoru with a few differences. The first is the color, rather than the disgusting slimy green of the spirit; the shikai is black is color and secretes a clear fluid that is akin to a mucus. The second is the removal of the human part of Wāmu no Anawohoru. In the shikai there is merely the mouth and the tentacles.
• Shikai Abilities:
Overall Ability:
The overall ability of Wāmu no Anawohoru have to do with its parasitic nature. The following three techniques are just specialization of an over all basic ability. The basic ability is that when in shikai, Wāmu no Anawohoru can bore into things and then animate them. The only specifications is that the whatever it bores into must be dead, considered inanimate, or of extremely low intelligence. The animation part of this basic ability is better explained within in each tech.
Name: Ishi ītā
Info: The most basic ability of the animation form of Wāmu no Anawohoru. With this technique the worm is drop onto the ground or onto stone in which it begins to burrow. Once it reaches a certain depth it extends its power into the surrounding dirt and rock, pulling it cohesively together and giving it a form. Wāmu no Anawohoru acts as the heart and brain of this creation with can change form and shape depending on the will of Kiseichu. Altogether, this technique tends to form a being that is relatively strong physically but is very slow. This form is used most often as a battering ram or some sort of shield. Additionally, these creations have the ability to communicate telepathically with Kiseichu at any distance.
Name: Tsurīītā
Info: This is the sister ability of Ishi Ita. In this ability instead of Wamu no Anawohoru burrowing into rock or dirt, it burrows into plat life. Once burrowed it does the same thing as before and draws the surrounding plant life to it and forms a being out of it where, once again, Wamu no Anawohoru acts as the heart and brain. This technique creates beings that have lower defense and offense but much higher speed. These beings are used in order to do reconnaissance and rapid battle. Additionally, these creations have the ability to communicate telepathically with Kiseichu at any distance.
Name: Niku ītā
Info: This technique is the epitome of Kiseichu's shikai is the Niku Ita ability of Wamu no Anawohoru. This technique has the same basics guidelines as the two previous abilities, except that instead of burrowing deep into rock or plant life; Womu no Anawohoru buries into dead flesh. The kind of flesh does not matter, so long as it was at one time alive and is now dead. This can lead to a variety of atrocious creations when this ability is used and hollow, human, and shinigami flesh are drawn together. These creatures are the best of both worlds in that they have slightly above average physical attributes. In addition to this they can use any of the weaker spiritual arts known by Kiseichu. It is, however, important to note that these creations DO NOT gain the abilities of those who form the creature.• Bankai Description:• Bankai Abilities:
_________________________________Phantom Tech
• PhatomTech: Yes
• Phantom Tech Abilities:
Name: Cyber Eye Model Prototype
Info: This Cyber Eye add-on was one of the first and most basic of the Cyber Eye models, and as such it abilities reflect that. This model of Cyber Eye only has a scope effect, a night vision effect, and a reiatsu sensing effect for up to 10 miles.
Name: Detachable Appendages
Info: A variation of the detachable limb add-on, the detachable appendages allow Kiseichū to not only remove his arms and legs, but his hands and fingers and feet and toes as well. For the most part a rather useless add-on, it does provide him with hours of entertainment.
Name: The I-Hand
Info: This add-on is one of Kiseichū personal designs and additions to his body. Part of his prosthetic arm, Kiseichū has altered his left hand and included with it a "Mind Jack", a receiver, a transmitter, and a camera in the middle finger as well as a projector. Besides this, when the hand becomes detached from Kiseichū the tendons within it relax and the frame components become flexible and allow the hand to twist into a variety of shapes and poses.
Name: Remote Control Appendage Control
Info: This is an add-on that allows Kiseichū to control his I-Hand as well as any other I-Appendage that he has put into his body.
• Phantom Tech Powers: The power that Kiseichū gained from the addition of his Phantom Tech mind is an ability known as Archive. This ability allows Kiseichū to retrain all the information he has ever heard and seen. Besides this it allows him to cull this information at will and dispose of superfluous information. Additionally, this ability allows him to take the knowledge and memories from an opponent after their death. This is done my a small add-on in the I-Hand that allows him to reactivate the brain and access the memory cortex. Kiseichu then uses his Phantom Tech Brain to copy these patterns and record their memories. This ability does not work on living beings because the neural impulses from their brain can override the pulses from the jack. It is important to note that this last part of his ability does NOT allow him to perform their techniques, just how they do it which is rather useless after they have died.
_________________________________Skill Sheet
General Skills
- Durability: Adept
- General Speed: Advanced
- Strength: Beginner
- Weapon Skill: Adept
Racial Skills
- Hoho: Adept
- Kidō: Advanced
- Zanjutsu: Adept
- Hakuda: Beginner
Will Skills
- Willpower/Determination: Adept
- Mental Deduction: Master
- Pain Endurance: Beginner
- Focus: Advanced
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Name: Tsurīītā
Info: This is the sister ability of Ishi Ita. In this ability instead of Wamu no Anawohoru burrowing into rock or dirt, it burrows into plat life. Once burrowed it does the same thing as before and draws the surrounding plant life to it and forms a being out of it where, once again, Wamu no Anawohoru acts as the heart and brain. This technique creates beings that have lower defense and offense but much higher speed. These beings are used in order to do reconnaissance and rapid battle.
OwO These powers were very cleanly done. However, you will need to explain how they do "reconnaissance" when I do not see anything listed as communicating with the host or sending him messages.
Name: Niku ītā
Info: This technique is the epitome of Kiseichu's shikai is the Niku Ita ability of Wamu no Anawohoru. This technique has the same basics guidelines as the two previous abilities, except that instead of burrowing deep into rock or plant life; Womu no Anawohoru buries into dead flesh. The kind of flesh does not matter, so long as it was at one time alive and is now dead. This can lead to a variety of atrocious creations when this ability is used and hollow, human, and shinigami flesh are drawn together. These creatures are the best of both worlds in that they have slightly above average physical attributes. In addition to this they can use any of the weaker spiritual arts known by Kiseichu.
You'll need to just mention how it doesn't allow him to use their former powers; this is just a precaution to make sure everything goes smoothly.
• Phantom Tech Powers: The power that Kiseichū gained from the addition of his Phantom Tech mind is an ability known as Archive. This ability allows Kiseichū to retrain all the information he has ever heard and seen. Besides this it allows him to cull this information at will and dispose of superfluous information. Additionally, this ability allows him to take the knowledge and memories from an opponent after their death. It is important to note that this last part of his ability does NOT allow him to perform their techniques, just how they do it which is rather useless after they have died.
You'll have to explain how he takes their knowledge and memories and give us an example of how it's done, or otherwise remove the bit about taking things from dead bodies. Also, what happens if he tries taking memories from a living mind?
OwO Finish those and your check will be all done~!
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- 10 sentences for personality [X]
- History is of appropriate length [X]
- Powers are not Godmod/Overpowered [X]
- Powers are described reasonably enough [X]
- Application/RP Sample is not in First Person [X]
- Skills are not filled in (Omit if a Hollow)[X]
- RP Sample Present (Omit if this is not the first character) [X]
- RP Sample is 10 sentences [X]
Will Skills
- Willpower/Determination: Adept
- Mental Deduction: Master
- Pain Endurance: Beginner
- Focus: Advanced
Comments/Notes: So he's CENTIPEDE, lol@I-arm, and overall *W*@Eating people
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2-2+
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Re: Kiseichu - Evil Shinigami [APPROVED, 2-2+]
Wed Jun 13, 2012 5:10 pm
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Re: Kiseichu - Evil Shinigami [APPROVED, 2-2+]
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Re: Kiseichu - Evil Shinigami [APPROVED, 2-2+]
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