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Pockeh
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Thu May 31, 2012 3:28 pm
Reserving the right to check this.


I envy because of the heart.
I glutton because of the heart.
I covet because of the heart.
I am prideful because of the heart.
I sloth because of the heart.
I rage because of the heart.
Because of the heart...
I lust for everything about you.


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Pockeh
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Thu May 31, 2012 4:22 pm
Application Checklist
  • Name [X]
  • Appropriate Age [X]
  • Gender [X]
  • Appearance Present [X]
  • Appearance Described in Appropriate Length OR Picture is Visible [X]
  • Appearance is Not Claimed [X]
  • 10 sentences for personality [X]
  • History is of appropriate length [X]
  • Powers are not Godmod/Overpowered [O]
  • Powers are described reasonably enough [O]
  • Application/RP Sample is not in First Person [X]
  • Skills are not filled in (Omit if a Hollow)[O]
  • RP Sample Present (Omit if this is not the first character) [X]
  • RP Sample is 10 sentences [X]


Will Skills
  • Willpower/Determination: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Mental Deduction: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Pain Endurance: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Focus: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner


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Alright, before I give you your will skills, and approve this, there are some things i'd like to note.

» Shikai Abilities: In Shikai form, Aramand's "Super Solenoid" Function steps into full swing (It's usually always working albeit at a vastly diminished capacity). This allows him to use the sword to absorb/Assimilate, mass, and accelerate ambient or incoming Reishi for offensive or defensive use. Or metabolize that gathered Reishi for his own personal use (Augmenting his strength, speed, stamina, endurance even recovering from injuries and wounds or bolstering his durability or more commonly, adding it to his own Reiryoku and Reiatsu. This also applies to any type nature, dual, whatever). Manipulating the Solenoid function he can use his sword to disrupt the flow of Reishi or spiritual pressure, contact with the weapon (Being stabbed or slashed) Can diminish a persons Reiryoku and spiritual pressure drastically and directly.
This function can also serve as means of disrupting barriers, and countering Kidō with supreme effectiveness. More importantly, once his Shikai is activated it's functions can be utilized without being in contact with his Zanpaktou, infact, greater control and direction of these abilities take place when the Shikai is discarded (Often staked into the ground or left to hover next to him). Once having stored and assimilated ambient Reishi/Reiatsu/Reiryoku he can redirect it and reproduce it in various forms and elements (Usually lightning or fire, although he can use ice as well). It is unknown as to whether Aramand has a saturation point, or a known limit to the amount he can absorb into his persons, or the sword and for most intents and purposes it is assumed that his Reiryoku and Reiatsu levels are functionally limitless when his shikai is active.


» Bankai Abilities: As mentioned Aramands entire body (Skeletal, musculature and epidermis) undergoes an extensive change, conforming into an organic form of the metal composing his Zanpaktou and Hair. This “Colossus” form is said to have resistance matching or exceeding that of Espada Hierro, and has an affinity for the absorption and storage of Reishi. As a result of this change this greatly bolsters Aramands physical strength, speed, agility and durability to significant levels, combined with the nature of this change turns Aramands entire body into a weapon---and a Solenoid for Spiritual energy.
Another ability granted by the Bankai is the ability to redirect or absorb ambient or oppositional Spiritual Energy or Reishi for his own personal use or manipulation. The constant state of “Absorption” is the reason for the constant Aura seen in manifested around his persons. This energy can be exerted in raw form or a number of elemental variations vastly expanding his offensive and defensive capabilities, giving them much range and depth.

^See this? I have a problem with ALL of this. His seeming total immunity to attacks of any kind of reiatsu-base just irks me. No. Especially in shikai, this is a no. You NEED to specify where his LIMIT is, because he has to have a LIMIT of a strength of attack he can absorb. Like attacks of cero level, or a certain Kidō's level. And no, you can't set this bar super high, you're only going for third seat. SECOND, you NEED to specify EXACTLY what he can do with the little reiatsu he will be allowed to absorb once he has it.

Finally, you can't even have auto-bankai, not at third seat, so you need to strike out that entire section anyway.

Moving on.

Aura Cognative – An ability that allows Aramand to literally read the emotional spectrum of an objective and flatly sense and perceive the thoughts pertaining to those specific emotions.
Spirit Cognative --- An ability to see and sense the flow of Reishi, or ones spiritual pressure for purposes of tracking and identification, within or around an objective or object.

Neither of these will fly. They REEK of metagame. Please remove them.

So Aramand was released and added into the fold of the Soul Society as a member of the 11th division under Captain Zaraki Kenpachi, however, he is almost always kept out of the Soul Society---Where his powers are are their strongest.


Even if you're in someone's division, you CAN NOT mention a canon character in an application without express permission of the owner. In this case, Genpaku. Get his permission, then try again with this.

Next thing is, and i would like to firmly stress this, YOU. CAN. NOT. FILL. IN. THE. SKILL. SHEET. UNTIL. YOU. HAVE. A. TIER. Your tier DEFINES what level of skills you can have, and no, you CAN'T BE MASTER IN EVERYTHING, ESPECIALLY NOT AT A THIRD SEAT. ERASE. ALL OF THAT.

Beyond that, you can NOT have an auto-ressereccion, so please strike THAT section out too.

Lastly, if you want to make an app specifically for a position, you have to go to the actual, physical gotei listings, found here, and reserve the spot you're making the app for.

Until the above issues are all fixed, this app cannot be approved, and will be moved to the WIP board until it's complete.

Tier: Incomplete.


I envy because of the heart.
I glutton because of the heart.
I covet because of the heart.
I am prideful because of the heart.
I sloth because of the heart.
I rage because of the heart.
Because of the heart...
I lust for everything about you.


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Aramand Armageddus Empty Re: Aramand Armageddus

Thu May 31, 2012 4:26 pm
Another thing.
We have a Mask Claim system, and since that is ICHIGO'S mask, you obviously can't use it.


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Thu May 31, 2012 4:44 pm
Straight up moving this to denied, as the member was banned.


I envy because of the heart.
I glutton because of the heart.
I covet because of the heart.
I am prideful because of the heart.
I sloth because of the heart.
I rage because of the heart.
Because of the heart...
I lust for everything about you.


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Wed Oct 03, 2012 8:55 pm
Moved to archives because this user has left!


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