Kuyko Naibu Kara (Done)

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- Name: Kuyko Naibu Kara
- Titles: None
- Gender: Male
- Appearance Age: 24
- Age: 90
- Affiliation/Rank: Rouge

- Appearance Description: He has Aqua blue eyes and pink shoulder length hair. the tips of his hair are highlighted red. he wears a hoodie with a pink tie. usally wearing a black beanie. he wears a pink laced necklace, Chiness symbols under his right eye.
- Appearance Picture: Refer to picture below.
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- Personality: He is twisted and psychotic and with no fear or compasion in his heart. He despises most liveing things. He is very quickly angered takes along time too cool down. He holds a grudge over the smallest things and if you are able to befriend him he will be loyal and obedient. he listens to orders well and will die for hi ssuperiors.

- Likes: Fighting, Sake, Watermelon, Chocolate milk and his Zanpakutō

- Dislikes: Mostly everything he comes in contact with with a few exeptions
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- History: On earth he was born to a Very low income family. His mother was a always high or drunk and his father often came home and beat him and his brother. As he grew a spite and rage grew in his heart as he begain to have psychotic thoughts but he held them at bay. he died when he was sixteen his father came home one night and beat his brother he tried to fight his dad of but his dead beat him to death. He was born in district 80 in north Rukongai. It is unkown who his mother or father was as he was cast aside by them. he was found by a man and raised until he was 16 then he left to go to the soul society and become a shingami. A fight with a student got out of hand and his Zanpakutō was realesed and the other student was killed he was soon after exelled out o fseireitei told if he came back he would be executed. He left to travel back into Zaraki (district 80).He came across the man that raised him dead in the street with a stab wound from a Zanpakutō. He stared at the body for hours and swore to him self that all of shinigamis would pay.

As the time grew he begain to grow stronger and the heatred in his heart begain to burn deeper and deeper into his soul. he begain to search for Hollows and Arrancar to aid him in his journey. He begain studying ways of traveling to huco mundo to find the help he needed but he never reached his goal and begain to ponder on Zanpakutō and how distant he had become with Abisu and begain to talk to him and get his opinion.

Abisu was as corrupt or even more corrupted the Kukyo. Abisus words where cold and calculated as it struke deep and pulled at his strings causeing him to grow frustrated and begin to lose his mind. He ran deep into forrest hunting for Residents of the soul society a blood lust filling his heart and soul wanting to apease the anger burning in him. He had moved through many districts murdering at no stop Man, woman or child would not appease his thirst only angering him. Sooer or later he would find a single shinigami and on killing them his heart sunk deeper into darkness as his mind was twisted and torn.



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- Reiatsu Color: Pitch black with red trim.

- Zanpakutô Spirit Name: Abisu

- Zanpakutô Spirit Appearance: It is a dark shadow of a man with smoke poreing out of his eyes sockets. his hair is cut short and his tounge is forked. He is 7'3 and a shadowy smoke eminates off of him.

- Inner World: It is a long stretch of barren land. The sky is dark with a reddened moon and no stars. their are brunt trees littering miles in all directions and their is a howling heard at all times.

- Sealed Zanpakutô Apperance : It is a pink hilt tied with black ribbion in a diamond pattern. it has a chain connecting the hilt to the guard of the sword.

- Sealed Zanpakutô Abilities: It begins to create a shroud of smoke burning on contact

- Release: Absolve to nothing.

- Shikai Description: The blade it's self dissolves into a fine black dust consiting of his reastu and the blade

- Shikai Abilities: The dust invades into the body of the opponet and shuts down the nerves and cuases paralasis and soon after that death.

General Skills
•Durability: Master

•General Speed: Adept

•Strength: Advanced

•Weapon Skill: Master



Racial Skills
•Hoho: Adept

•Kidō: Beginner

•Zanjutsu: Master

•Hakuda: Adept

Roleplay sample:
"Where or where is the little sheep?"The blade Of Kukyos Zanpakutō sliceing a large grey barrel open. his Aqua eyes searing the small room for any signs of life. "Oh were can he be?" The tone of his voice in a sadistic tone as he begain to sing the two lines again and again. "Abisu what do you think should we stop playing?". Kukyo would nod his head in agreement to the voice that played through his head. "Abisu absolve into nothing."

His Lips lips would contort into a lupine grin as the Katana is his hand dissolved into patricals into the air. The dust begain to float up into the air and settle over a pile of bodys and soak in. "I think we have a winner." ..He'd begin walking over to the pile where a chocked scream begain to rise from. Kukyos right hand shot through the boys and latched onto the neck of a young shinigami. "Good bye." His hand would constrict the windpipe of the bow crushing it as a cloud of black dust shot from his mouth and formed a katana on the ground.

• Name [X]
  
• Appropriate Age [X]
  
• Gender [X]
  
• Appearance Present [-]
  
• Appearance Described in Appropriate Length OR Picture is Visible [O]
  
• Appearance is Not Claimed [X]
  
• 10 sentences for personality [O]
  
• History is of appropriate length [X]
  
• Powers are not Godmod/Overpowered [O]
  
• Powers are described reasonably enough [O]
  
• Application/RP Sample is not in First Person [X]
  
• Skills are not filled in (Omit if a Hollow)[O]
  
• RP Sample Present (Omit if this is not the first character) [X]
  
• RP Sample is 10 sentences [X]
  

Comments/Notes: Alright, there are quite a few problems here. For starters, you will need a longer description for your appearance, or at least have your picture under appearance. Also, your personality is nowhere near long enough. The minimum length is 10 sentences, and the "likes and dislikes" do not count for that. The powers are just a no go. Not only is there an extreme lack of detail, but you cannot have a power that just kills someone, so you will need to entirely rethink that. Oh, and one of the biggest problems; YOU DO NOT FILL OUT THE SKILL SHEET! That was posted in the template for the app, so you have no excuse for not knowing this. Overall, this app needs a lot of work before it can be approved. So for now, I must say:

DENIED

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