kata

name:kata
age:???apears to be in late teens
gender:male
apearance:(personality)kata is very quiet and serious, haveing of been attacked by a menos grande at a young age, he did'nt relize his own inexperiance and thought himself naturaly weak. causeing him to pity himself and mourn in silince.he absolutly hates hollows.he'll kill them on the spot the moment he sees them.after leaving the irashama homeland he apeared as a young human man.abiut the age of 17 or so.so he devoloped some form of human traits. the most noteabole is fear of blood(besides hollows)he untenses a bit around human girls with pretty faces but is still serious.(i'll have a picture soon hopefully)

backround:one day kata was trying to master his seishun buki, when somehow, a hollow apeared. haveing of been very inexperianced and VERY off gaurd, kata was easlily deafeted, but he somehow survived.
kata wanted revenge, when he went back to all of his freinds and family they where all dead, killed by what looked like the same hollow, he wrote in a mixure of his brothers, his mothers, his fathers, and his best freinds blood and the wall of his room:"i will slay all of the hollows"

seishun buki name:haminanomusta(master of lightning)
sieshun buki apperance:haminanomusta appears as a instant lightning bolt that either attacks or defends in katas battles. when not in combat , however, he apears as a large yellow bird, with blue thunder and lightning taattoos, kata can communicate with him in this form, but not in combat form.

sieshun buki abbility:haveing what seems instant transfromation. haminanomusta's lightning can strike down inbetween the enemy and kata, defending him, or skrike down dirictly on the enmy, acting as a super fast blade.(theese are kata's signiture attacks)

powers:can "enchant" weapons with lightning,set traps that burst out thunder, use lightning to enhance mortal abbilitys(running, jumping, and flying)and in extreme caseis searing a wound close with light stichs or just white hot lightning.

chaos move's:summoning of creatures that are created by the "will of the storm" kata says every time he needs a collosal compaion, such as a giant thunder eating giant, a bat formed out of dark clouds, or a wyvern made completly out lightning.

hybrid 1 apearance : in this form kata looks like a pale skinned human with purple taatoos on one side, and the other unhindered.on the pale side he has huge, black, bat-like wings.yet on the taatooed side he has huge,white,dove-like wings.most of his face is covered by his cloak,though his eyes apear to be purple.his clothes are comprised of, black gloves, black boots, black under shiirt and pants, with a white belt and sash, all the time wearing a dark green cloak.

hybrid 1 abillities: in this form kata's abbility revolves around silver and steel of that sort. he creates speres , sheilds, and, most often, swords.and lots of them.able to levitate a grnad total of 200 silver swords and have them strike at once, his possibilitys of creation are very wide.

hybrid 2 apearance: in this form the light clothing is replaced by golden and dark red armor. they gain a smaller opposing wing on each side(ex. the huge bat wing would gain a smaller dove wing under it.)and instead of bat wing's the dark sides wing is a black dove wing.

hybrid 2 abbilities: the only differince is flight manuverabbility, speed, strength, and instead of just 200 swords, the grand total in this form is 2000, offering a larger amount of possibilities, however, katas control over theese now more powerful abbilities are weaker.

custom form:not decided or not allowed

class title:hybrid of silver

class triats:allready explained...silver power

branch: a distant relative or "peasant" familiy branching off of the hybrids miko irashama and azure irashama.

race:hybrid

skills:not givin permissoin

general skills: durabillity:adept general speed:advanced strength:begginer weapon skill:advanced

will skills: determanatoin:begginer mental:advanced pain enduranece:advanced
focus:master

racial skills: chaos energy skill:adept chaos warp:begginer seishun buki:advanced
race control:adept

roleplay sample: i have never roleplayed online...

@_@ Sorry for taking so long…

Alright, looks like your biggest problems… are style and detail. Try cleaning up your words a bit; putting capitalization an punctuation where it rightly goes. For detail… you just plain need MORE of it, in all your powers. I’ll go over things more in detail after you fix it up a bit; just post in here when you’re done.

Application over two weeks old... my back is sore... moving to old WIP