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eir journey around the demon world led them to one of Savak's generals a dragon named Shenbo. Enja demanded to find his master so he could have his revenge. Shenbo's refusal led to one of the greatest battles within the demon world called "The Dragon-Demon Wars". Enja went to war

...For something like that, you need to have it run by an admin, because it's "One of the greatest battles within the demon world".

Ryo actually revealed in a TV broadcast around the world that Akira was Devilman and that a demon virus was sweeping the nation. Akira then confronts Ryo and discovers that his friend Ryo is really an demon iramasha named Savak Javado in a dormant state. Javado reveals to Akira that he

See above.

The final fight between Devilman and Savak and his armies ensues. The Earth is totally destroyed during this battle, and Devilman dies at the

Earth destroyed? NO. #@!$ING. WAY.

[quote]Ziamichi Powers: Massive Demon Reiatsu: With his deadly reaitsu, he use can it into something like ae explosion or like a bomb going off. The massive demon reiatsu can increase physical strength and speed within a demon. The power starts off when the demon gets mad then reiatsu started surging within him giving a explosion about 500 meters long. Leaving the demon cover in lightning surges around his body as the body as the smoke clears.[quote]

No. Just no. 500 Meters is way, way, WAY too large. Reduce that HEAVILY.

Unbelievable Insane Strength: When Devilman was created he absorbed the Lord of War's brute strength turning into stronger demon of legend. Yet after every battle and every person he beaten to death, Amon would absorbed their strength and power into his wellbeing. Almost similiar to an succubus, Devilman would trained constantly because the first rule of living within the demon world is survival. Devilman would train within volcanos and high mountains to increase his strnegth to higher proportions Yet whenever he would lose in battle, Devilman would start a training regiment and begin working on his weaknesses of that battle making them his strengths. He could easily break human's bones with two or three punches. The demon could violent decap a person in mere seconds with onme claw swipe showing off his true power.

ALL OF MY NO. LOOK AT YOUR OWN ADJECTIVES! DOWN POWER THIS HEAVILY!


Stored Demon Reiatsu: It almost a storage container which is living inside his stomach. He was the 8th demon to ever created by an ceremony of demons ritual. The container was created when Akira took in the Lord of War within his human body the power from the lord of war was locked within a black box. The container is called Black Sabbath which allow Devilman to create various and violent attacks against rivals or enemies.

How about no. Form the looks of this, he is already quite powerful, and doesn't need anything ELSE lopped on top of it.

True Regenerative Powers: At first, Devilman didn't have regeneratiion abilities at all he would wait for other demons to heal him. After his battle with Siren. Devilman took her healing abilities and made them is own. At times whenever he lost an arm or leg, Devilman regenerative powers were slow. After a few battles, the regenerative powers starte growing in strength giving him the ability to heal faster at higher speed. Devilman thought he finally mastered the demon bird's healing ability for himself using it whenever.

You aren't a regenerative type; lower the amount of maximum regeneration to like one arm per thread or something similar.

Strong Brute Durability: The demon skin's is made from a combination for dragon and gargoyle skin but the skin is actually smooth like a human's skin. He was able to withstand a number of attacks like large explosions, physical and various elemental attacks in his battles with demons. Yet the skin isn't that strong too many attacks make cause tears of torn off parts of his body. His final battle proved that Devilman wasn't invincible like other people.

Too much. Greatly lower it; overall, YOU CAN'T HAVE SUCH HIGH STUFF IN EVERYTHING!

Supreme Pyrokinesis Master: Devilman was trained into the pyromancy by oother demons that he respected over the years. He began learning quickly how to use fire magic in many ways yet he became a master of it using full magic firepower against his enemies. He can create an assortment of fire attacks and defenses it would make enemy run in terror. He learn the natural enemy of fire is water or a strong attack may weaken to destroy his fire attacks. Yet Devilman pulls full concentration into his fire magic he truly wants to his enemies burn to death.

No being a master, you've already said you're a "Master" in quite enough. And remove "Burn to death."

100% True Rage of the Lord of War: After Devilman defeated Amon in dark mirror mind battle. Devilman took the Lord of War's power for himself. This is almost like a power up which he can use with his different forms. The power up bulks up his muscles, increases his speed and sharpens his claws yet the power up only lasts for a limited time. Enja always uses it a desperate situation whenever it battle or hsowing off to the other demons. Yet his personality chnages while in this power state almost becoming like a berserker with pure rage within his heart.
Just how long is this limited time?


Healing Powers: Because of the Devilman's regenerative powers the knowledge has been past down into the host. However his healing powers act a lot different then expected. Whenever he's hurt demons started appearng from his own flesh healing any forms of damages which the iramasha had taken. Their process of healing is painful but their done in mere seconds yet once their dissapear, Enja is healed completely.

Subject: Enja Hagokumo [Ziamichi] [FINISHED] Wed Mar 28, 2012 6:16 pm
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BASIC || I N F O R M A T I O N
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Name: Enja Hagokumo
Gender: Male
Age: 5,982 years old
The Host Race: Iramasha
The Ziamichi Race: Demon(Once Human)

Appearance: Being a demon iramasha, Enja Hagokumo carries the dark complexion and distinctive red irises like some demons. He is fairly tall with a teen-adult muscular build and his hair is curly tribal cornrow bleach blonde. Because of the demon ziamichi, Enja's left arm is somewhat mutated in demon monster arm with his bleached-like claws on his fingers and most parts of the arms. The mutant arm is demonic purple with some red and few light-blue glow spots around the shoulder and wrist.

Enja sometimes wears sunglasses to hide his red eyes from view and sometimes bears a distinctive demonic-colored jacket emblazoned with a cross on the back and sleeves. Additionally, he sports a pair of black baggy slacks with a satanic cross on the left leg and a red stripe running down the right.

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PERSONALITY || TRAITS

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Personality: Enja is a decidedly brooding and angry man, almost totally consumed by hatred toward the people who destroyed his way of life so long ago. Knowing full well that his actions go against many of the teachings of his religion, he still fashions himself an Death Dealer of severe and justified punishment and takes his fury on his enemies. However, vestiges of his former life's kinder nature are prone to seep through. Even in the middle of his bloody vengeance, Enja is willing to show compassion toward others, honoring last requests and offering a chance to pray before dying. He is reasonably wise and a skilled demon warrior, though his misguided thirst for vengeance clouds his greater judgment and leads his arguments in circles. Having had his life and his mother stolen from him, Enja sometimes sympathizes with those who care for their loved ones and looks after those who have lost their place in the world. Additionally, he is protective of innocent people and takes the their words of encouragement or chastisement to heart from people.

Dark Hero: Because of the Devilman's persona, Enja feels some of the ziamichi mind rubbing off on him. He still to this day doesn't know why but truthfully, Enja isn't all evil he doesn't still believe in the code of honor among things. Enja may sometimes break the law but after a while he'll take a chill pill and forget about what ever evil act he about to commit. Yet Enja will play the heroic part doing things for the needy and helping perople sometthing like a mercenary. Even though, Enja stills hates his own clan he'll believe the word evil should take over his whole life. The guy somewhat ha some morals that he does believe in.

Vengeful & Smart Tactician: He is particularly observant, taking into consideration even the smallest details of his surroundings in order to better understand and deal with challenges and, despite his lofty position, is not above using cheap tricks or questionable tactics to ensure his own survival. Being singularly ambitious, Enja also has a remarkably tenacious will that allows him to overcome virtually insurmountable obstacles and accept inhuman burdens for the sake of his ultimate goal. He has considerable pride that will not stand for having his iramasha-hood insulted or condemned by his enemies, but he is also capable of shelving his pride if it becomes something that will stand in the way of his objective

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BACKGROUND || THEIR PAST
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Background/History: Destroyed, Burned, Poisoned, Buried & Torn apart by a Chainsaw. The former Christopher Iramasha made an assortment of enemies throughout the years being killed by each one of them trying to make a statement. He did outlived some of them but his greatest victory was finally dragging Suzume Iramasha into the pit of darkness. Enja got rid of his ultimate enemy at last even though the son Takuya swore that he'll get revenge . How did it all begin?

In the beginning, Enja was known as Christopher Johnson born and raised by a wealthy family. Truthfully his real parents gave him up for adoption because they weren't ready to have a child yet. Chris's parents thought maybe by giving their child to a new family perhaps it would give them time to think things through. Chris was found by William Iramasha and brought into the Iramasha Devila estate which seemed like a fancy mansion. Throughtout his childood, Chris was calm a caring kid to seemingly have no problems at all but his father though one day, he might have to tell his son the truth. School wasn't a problem for him either, Chris was something of a teacher's pet back then. Rhoda Iramasha would always slap him she was the bully of the school when he was growing up. He managed to ignore her and get throught his studies. Then his whole life took a dramatic turn when he heard a noise inside the house. Naturally he would back to sleep but then he heard scream and then he ran downstairs to see what it was. Chris's father was cover in blood and his mother was lying dead on the floor as the child saw a dark and crazy look in his father eyes like a demon had taken him over. He tried to run away but his father stabbed him repeatedly in the back killing him as he was trying to figure out what happen. Unknown to Chris, William was practicing black magic to summon a demon which he was about to do by using his own son's body. The Satanic ritual needed a sacrifice as some people were preparing the room that was actually downstairs. William started the ritual saying some weird incantations which started shaking the ground as the circle of death started to form. A demon started coming from the ground and went inside the child's body then with one more spell the ritual was completed. The demon Zenotic Amon was completely in control of the child's body as William started telling his followers that demon was among us to led them. The demon smirked as he rips out William's eyeballs telling the human that he wasn't going to lead anybody. The demon was a savge beast killing everybody who took part in the ritual as he was cover in their blood which a devil's bloodbath. However the demon took the name for the forgotton demon Enja. Humans playing with magic was such a pain to him as he torched the house taking money and wealth along with him. In those times, Enja got away with murder and the local villagers would just turn the other way. He tried making good and evil with his new body.

Throughout the years, Enja was a dangerous killer with a dangerous high bodycount also helping vampires luring humans so they could feed. The demon has a dangerous record of destruction which finally led him into New York. Things were going well until a young warrior who Star knew who he was the stench of blood couldn't wipe off the death toll. Enja attacked the superhero but the human managed to kill the demon. Enja couldn't believe finally somebody had taken him out but it didn't stop there. Star alerted people about this demon and what they should do about him which started pissing him off. Some other demons tried helping Zen but they were killed too by Star and new gang which started getting on Enja's nerves. Until one day when Star brought was doing some superheroism his so called superhero wife called him by his real name. It was music to Enja's ears which he started slowly to destroy everything Suzume Iramasha cared about making sure that he was invisible to the superhero's eyes. The superhero's life started to crumble slowly then finally, he got his revenge sending the poor soul into Hell. The Iramasha Clan & Soul Society wanted to know what happen to Star even his son Takuya Iramasha cried at the funeral.

After Star's death, Enja finally got some control over the ziamichi after discovering what happen to the Devilman. Their was blood on his hands, Zenotic blame the Iramasha Clan for what happen to his army and the Makimura family. Their relationship started off badly, Enja and Zenotic made an agreement that they would work together to find this Savak and kill him. Their journey around the demon world led them to one of Savak's generals a dragon named Shenbo. Enja demanded to find his master so he could have his revenge. Shenbo's refusal led to one of the greatest battles within the demon world called "The Dragon-Demon Wars". Enja went to war with the dragon demons of the demon world having demons created sneak attacks and enemy assaults throughtout the war. Enja's armies were ordered to snatch demon drag-eggs from the enemy breeding grounds and destroy them in front of the dragon castles. The Dragon-demon wars lasted for about 30 years which each side winning a battle and losing an ally each side pain andd victory. Until Judgment day, A few demon dragons including their leader were still alive the women dragons were completely slaughtered by the demon armies. Enja ordered the sneak attacks killing the remaining dragons by brute and deadly force in the heat of the final battle. Enja killed Shenbo in a bloody rage then his enemy showed up looking at the carnage then looking at the demon. Savik confronted Enja which their fought even thought the angel iramasha was stronger, Enja managed to gain the upper hand. He had his demons attack his weak point, Enja waited and killed the angel iramasha. The Devilman living inside the demon was pleased but the spirit wanted one last thing, Enja teleported into Karakura town and hanged Savik's decapitated body to a billboard floating upward. Delivering an message for the Iramasha clan in blood stating "Devilman is back". Most of the Iramasha clan couldn't believe it then though Savik would have handle it better then this yet it found it they actually created the demon. Now their worse nightmare which they thought was dead had resurface, with Enja strength and Zenotic Amon's power....Devilman is back.
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THE BEAST || WITHIN
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Ziamichi Spirit Name: Zenotic Amon

Ziamichi Spirit Appearance:
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Ziamichi Personality: Once as Akira Fudo, Akira Fudo was very shy, modest and gentle, trying to avoid conflict in most situations. Due to this he was frequently picked on by bullies at school as he grew up and on even into high school. However, after he becomes Devilman Akira is no longer timid and shy. He became very aggressive and no longer lets anyone push him around. This changed shocked those that knew him before and in some ways tends to alienate people as he comes off as a troubled kid or a bully himself. Despite this, the pure heart of Akira is ever present. He holds genuine concern for others and tends to be very devoted to his friends. He is resigned to the task of protecting humanity, primarily from demons, but he won't stand idly by when he knows he has the power to help regardless of the threat.

As Devilman, Akira was more aggressive and gives in further to his demonic side. In combat he will always go for the quickest and most determined victory and feels zero remorse about the death of his opponent if they happen to be a demon. Against humans he is obviously more restrained. However, while being his greatest asset Devilman's human heart is also his greatest weakness. Enemies willing to exploit the emotions and concern of Devilman can put him at a marked disadvantage. Now as Zenotic Amon, Zen is ruthless in his actions he does consider himself to be a dark hero and a violent leader because of the past. Because of the demon united with him, Zen is viciously ruthless yet he does care about his human host and his actions. Yet he doesn't care about anybody else unless it a benefit to him and his host. The demon became more violent in his actions yet the dark hero persona still kicks in with his mind.

Ziamichi History: Zenotic Amon wasn't always a violent yet heroic sonuvabitch the demon started out as a human. Nobody knew it but Zenotic Amon once lived by the name Akira Fudo. Akira had a rather normal childhood and grew up as a friendly, but timid child. However, once he was in high school everything began to change. When his parents left on an expedition to the Arctic, Akira was sent to stay with childhood friend Miki Makimura and her family; long time friends to Akira's parents. Though Miki and Akira were quite close she lamented his timid nature that easily let bullies at school walk all over him. Mysteriously, Akira's parents never returned from the expedition and after much confusion. One day shortly after this Akira was greeted by Ryo Asuka, his best friend from middle school who had moved away. Ryo sought of Akira a favor; a favor that would completely change Akira's life forever. Ryo was burdened by the legacy of his father; left to him by his recent death. Unsure how to deal with it on his own he desired Akira to share the burden with him.

Ryo's father had discovered the existence of demons when he found a mask during an excavation of the ruins of an ancient Mayan temple. This mask turned out to be a fossilized demon skull, which showed whomever wore it what the world was like eons ago when demons freely roamed the Earth. Ryo showed Akira this and informed him about the demons' revival. Akira then saw Ryo's plan: "To fight a demon, one must become a demon."Demons have the ability to possess and control humans. However, Ryo believed that people like Akira may be able to harness a demon's powers when possessed, due to the fact that Akira had a pure heart. Ryo took Akira to a nightclub and picked a fight to draw demonic attention to the club. Demons possessed the clubbers and threatened Ryo and Akira, until a demon known as Amon the Lord of War, also called the Beast of Hell, and also one of the strongest demons attempted to possess Akira.

However Akira managed to gain the upper hand of the possessing process with Amon and transformed into Devilman. Devilman contained the strength and power of the demon Amon, as well as the heart and soul of Akira, giving Akira complete control. Using his newfound powers Akira, as Devilman, fended off the demons and rescued Ryo; though his friend was left badly injured. Ryo was hospitalized for the time being to heal his wounds. Since becoming Devilman, Akira found his personality beginning to change. His once timid nature was slowly giving away to greater confidence. Using his newfound powers, Akira began to fight back whenever demons appeared hoping to use Devilman to protect humanity. However, it seemed as if more demons were breaching the human world every day. Deep down, Akira knew that the longer he stayed with the Makimura's and attended his current high school the greater the chance that one day someone he cared about deeply would be put at risk.

Years later, Ryo was attacked by a demon iramasha and that demon took over his body yet taking his very life and memories. Something bad was about happen during the years, Devilman actually formed an army of demons known as Devilmen which helped people around the world. On March 14, Ryo actually revealed in a TV broadcast around the world that Akira was Devilman and that a demon virus was sweeping the nation. Akira then confronts Ryo and discovers that his friend Ryo is really an demon iramasha named Savak Javado in a dormant state. Javado reveals to Akira that he convinced Akira to become Devilman in order to survive in the world he was planning to create. After Miki and her whole family are brutally slain by a paranoid human horde (in a particularly famous scene, Akira retrieves Miki's dismembered body from her burned house and later is seen holding her head in his arms), Akira states that he has no one left to protect, thus has no reason to exist except to have his final fight with Javado.
The final fight between Devilman and Savak and his armies ensues. The Earth is totally destroyed during this battle, and Devilman dies at the hands of a regretful Savak. Devilman was later revive within a soul chamber it appears both Devilman's soul and Amon soul fused themsleves together. Yet Devilman was like a ghost and he needed a body as he searched through the demon world for one. William Iramasha had killed his son Chris preparing a ritual with the book of the dead using a an ancient spell. Devilman soul was bonding with ancient magics which changed him completely. Devilman was no more and only a shadow of his former self remained naming himself Zenotic Amon. William Iramasha bonded the demon spirit with his son's dead body fusing them together which Chris was alive again. Chris killed his father in a rage and his followers to the ritual thus the demon spirit was actually helping the boy. Zenotic Amon and Chris actually reached an agreement but the demon spirit wanted vengeance over his death. Zenotic Amon blames the Iramasha clan for what happened to Makimura family and his life. To this day Zen's human host chose the name Enja Hagokumo to find this Savak Javado Iramasha and kill him.

Ziamichi Powers: Massive Demon Reiatsu: With his deadly reaitsu, he use can it into something like ae explosion or like a bomb going off. The massive demon reiatsu can increase physical strength and speed within a demon. The power starts off when the demon gets mad then reiatsu started surging within him giving a explosion about 500 meters long. Leaving the demon cover in lightning surges around his body as the body as the smoke clears.

Unbelievable Insane Strength: When Devilman was created he absorbed the Lord of War's brute strength turning into stronger demon of legend. Yet after every battle and every person he beaten to death, Amon would absorbed their strength and power into his wellbeing. Almost similiar to an succubus, Devilman would trained constantly because the first rule of living within the demon world is survival. Devilman would train within volcanos and high mountains to increase his strnegth to higher proportions Yet whenever he would lose in battle, Devilman would start a training regiment and begin working on his weaknesses of that battle making them his strengths. He could easily break human's bones with two or three punches. The demon could violent decap a person in mere seconds with onme claw swipe showing off his true power.


Stored Demon Reiatsu: It almost a storage container which is living inside his stomach. He was the 8th demon to ever created by an ceremony of demons ritual. The container was created when Akira took in the Lord of War within his human body the power from the lord of war was locked within a black box. The container is called Black Sabbath which allow Devilman to create various and violent attacks against rivals or enemies.

True Regenerative Powers: At first, Devilman didn't have regeneratiion abilities at all he would wait for other demons to heal him. After his battle with Siren. Devilman took her healing abilities and made them is own. At times whenever he lost an arm or leg, Devilman regenerative powers were slow. After a few battles, the regenerative powers starte growing in strength giving him the ability to heal faster at higher speed. Devilman thought he finally mastered the demon bird's healing ability for himself using it whenever.

Strong Brute Durability: The demon skin's is made from a combination for dragon and gargoyle skin but the skin is actually smooth like a human's skin. He was able to withstand a number of attacks like large explosions, physical and various elemental attacks in his battles with demons. Yet the skin isn't that strong too many attacks make cause tears of torn off parts of his body. His final battle proved that Devilman wasn't invincible like other people.

Supreme Pyrokinesis Master: Devilman was trained into the pyromancy by oother demons that he respected over the years. He began learning quickly how to use fire magic in many ways yet he became a master of it using full magic firepower against his enemies. He can create an assortment of fire attacks and defenses it would make enemy run in terror. He learn the natural enemy of fire is water or a strong attack may weaken to destroy his fire attacks. Yet Devilman pulls full concentration into his fire magic he truly wants to his enemies burn to death.

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Unique Traits: The Dark Seal of Fate: This is dark seal which holds the ziamichi within his place when it was created the ziamichi ran wild. Finally with the seal finally transformed and created, Devilman's soul rested inside Enja'a body. This was build to keep Zenotic Amon going out of control like when he was demon at that time. Zenotic Amon would lose control and his ater ego Amon the Lord of Battles would run amuck. This is almost a prison within Enja's body keeping the ziamichi clam an relaxed allowing to obtain the number of abilities which the power demon Zenotic Amon had when he was a demon known as Devilman.

Access to Devilman's Reiatsu: Because of their dark friendship, Zenotic Amon came to terms with his new master. At first, Enja would use the demon's reiatsu during battles or deadly confrontation when it seemed like hewas going to lose. Enja is able to maintain his different forms The power from the demon reiatsu almost pulsating from his ground like a sudden heartbeat with a rush of adrenaline. Yet it take concentration and willpower to control the demon reiatsu yet he can lose control and almost making him insane and truly demonic. Because of the demon's reiatsu, Enja is able to fight at the higher demon level able to take on shinigami, vizards, iramashas even ziamichis like him.

100% True Rage of the Lord of War: After Devilman defeated Amon in dark mirror mind battle. Devilman took the Lord of War's power for himself. This is almost like a power up which he can use with his different forms. The power up bulks up his muscles, increases his speed and sharpens his claws yet the power up only lasts for a limited time. Enja always uses it a desperate situation whenever it battle or hsowing off to the other demons. Yet his personality chnages while in this power state almost becoming like a berserker with pure rage within his heart.

Control to Use Kage Chokyo shi: Kage Chōkyō-shi is the ability for most demons with adept Za Koa users to travel through different dimensions, travel throughout the battlefield or even use it for defense. By channeling Za Koa's energy in addition to the various seals throughout their body in addition to their Shadow Movement, they are able to create many different holes in the area's around them that can range from small to extra large depending on their Za Koa skill. These can lead to other realms, can be used to shield against attacks if they are not more powerful then the demon and be used on the offensive by attempting to create these holes to slice someone's head off.

Enhanced Pyrokinesis Abilities: Zenotic Amon actually taught Enja the many ways to use the fire power known as pyrokinesis. Which can use it create an assortment of attack fire types from his hands. During his battles with dragons, Enja learn vast knowledge into pyromancy using fire to enhanced some of attacks and some abilities.

Healing Powers: Because of the Devilman's regenerative powers the knowledge has been past down into the host. However his healing powers act a lot different then expected. Whenever he's hurt demons started appearng from his own flesh healing any forms of damages which the iramasha had taken. Their process of healing is painful but their done in mere seconds yet once their dissapear, Enja is healed completely.

Kidō & Cero Copycat style: The copycat style came when Devilman defeated his rival the bird demon Siren. He actually mimic her ability to clone people's attacks. Whenever an enemy fires off an attack like cero or any sort of Kidō, Enja's eyes started glowing meaning her learning the ability as quickly as possible. Then attacking with the opponent Kidō or cero with it being 25% percent more powerful then the original attack. It starts off when the opponent fire a Kidō or cero attack then Enja must said "Enemy Skill and the name of that attack"

Forms: Originally, Devilman had about 5 forms each of them being worse as hell and more frightening then the next. Yet after his death, Devilman's soul and Amon's soul fused together leaving the Devilman within his fifth form Zenotic Amon. Yet because of the dark seal of fate, Devilman can no longer use his previous forms or can't back to normal Akira Fudo.

In the past Devilman had about five forms, a blue demon form which he could only use strength and speed. The original hellbeast form tto deliver punishment and rage whenever he saw fit. Their was upgrade hellraiser razornoid form for using extreme methods. Yet he could also summoned Amon from his flesh which things. Then the final form Zenotic Amon the most ruthless form to date.

I do not understand what you are saying. At all.

Demonic Hierro: A newer version which is similiar to an arrancar's hierro which created steel skin. This demonic version allows the armor to create an armor plating around certain points of the body (Head, chest, shoulders, back arms and legs) giving the armor body a better chance of defense. However stronger attacks like bankai might penetrate the armor destroying some of the demonic hierro. Yet the strength of of the demonic hierro solely depends of the user power and their own strength.

A mere TOOL that can stop up to BANKAI? No. Lower it.

Strong Durability: The dragon armor is able withstand various attacks because of the many dragon skins which were bonded together to create the armor. The armor could take an attack head on and Enja could attack after the smoke clears there is not telling how strong the armor has become. Enja notices it can't withstand number of bankai or segunda attacks yet the armor could break from the punishment.

BANKAI AND SEGUNDAS? LOWER. IT. A LOT.

Demonic Dragon Sword: With a wave of his right armored hand, Enja can create a sword for himself. The sword is made of an neo-adamantium steel, Cast metal dragons affixed to the blade, Wire wrapped grip with gold dragon tail relief. Dragon claw pommel with blue acrylic ball. The sword is able withstand attack for long amount of times depending on how strong the enemy's attack is.

Again, it's just a tool. Lower the durability.


The an unlocked ability form of the armor when the armor is completely destroyed and Enja is wounded badly the aura around him begins to pulsate as a red crimson dragon begins to shield his body. The dragon and irmasha begin to fuse togteher and the dragon armor is reborn into a super version of the original. He can use all the previous attacks & abilities of the original armor at 50% more power. The armored has itself a final attack called Dragon Dark Kane. Dark Kane is the attack where, Enja absorbs the energy within the air and fires an apocalyptic fire beam at his opponent. The drawback is Enja's arm will go numb from using it and another possible drawback is that he loses his sight in left eye for a brief time.

Increase the drawbacks to justify the large amount of power gain, and detail the fire beam more.

to tear apart iron, making it easy for him to rip his enemies in half. Interestingly, despite being Enja's most rudimentary demon-powered attack, it is still very strong and powerful.

A. Rip enemies in half needs to be taken out, try "Making it easy for him to TRY and rip his enemies apart."

B. No justification for it to be so powerful when only rudimentary demon-powered attack, lower it to medium strength AT THE LEAST.


Pyromancer powers: Even his ziamichi spirit trained him, Enja learned the many ways for using fire to his advantage. With his imagination and willpower, Enja can create an various assortment of attacks with fire. The attack patterns are very strong weak, strong and deadly fireball attack. They can be weaken by 50%the natural enemy of fire which is water. Yet stronger opponents wouldn't be kill by his attacks but they would be hurt bad by them. Enja can create an unknown multitude of fire attacks and fire defenses with this power but this power doesn't hurt him at all. Enja can create the following attacks and defenses [Fireballs, Firebombs, Firewall, Fireball split, Hot Lava Breath (Fire Golem which takes 2 posts to create) Firestorm, Firaga] The stronger attacks would be [Super Firaga, Fire Ember Wall(which is also a deefensive type mode), Supreme Moleten Bomb. The Deadlier Attacks are the dadliest which drawn energy so he can only use them one time and never again these [Ultima Firaga and Terra Destroyer]

First off. You already discussed him having fire powers. Second off, you need more detail. IF YOU'RE GOING TO ALREADY HAVE SO MANY MOVES, YOU NEED TO DESCRIBE EACH OF THEM IN REASONABLE TERMS! Also, you know by now how we feel about the word "Deadly"

Demonic Flight: The demon has unique freakish ability to fly yet it had two abilities which still freak him out to this day. The first is that he can fly or sumper jumps without wings or anything else yet he flies whenever or whereever he wants or chooses to. The second happens when he around sub zero temperatures, whenever he wants to fly strange wings start forming on his back allowing the demon to fly yet it only happens wehn extreme cold.

Wherever, whenever? Way too general. That means he can ALWAYS escape when he's being attacked; fix it.

Devil Shin Goku Satsu(Raging Demon): A different version to the warlords Oni's raging demon. Yet Enja watched the warlord ability many times on the battlefield before making it his own. Enja created the ultimate hell move into the ultimate dispel move. The move starts when Enja saids "Raging Demon" and his right hand starts glowing red like an burning aura. If an attack was comes his way like shikai or bankai, etc then the attack would be greatly weaken by 75%. Instead of the raging demon murdering at victim like Oni had design it. Enja made a different yet similiar technique from murdering attacks or spells.

REDUCING AN ENTIRE FORMS POWER BY 75%? HA, HAHAHA, THAT'S A GOOD ONE, MATE!

No. 10-20% MAX. IF THAT.

Will not check the next post until these are fixed.




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Amon was actually the 3rd demon created by Lord Touketsu his strength on the battlefield was truly strong the demon was created from both humans and a breed of /Yet after so many victories in battle Lord Touketsu granted him the title as "Lord of War"

You did not receive ANY kind of permission from Frost to mention Touketsu-

UNTIL YOU TAKE THE TIME TO ACTUALLY FIX WHAT I TOLD YOU TO FIX, THIS APP IS MOVED INTO DENIED! ESPECIALLY AT THE STORAGE UNIT AND THE HEALING. AND SHIKAI AND LOWER FEELING NOTHING IS ALSO QUITE, QUITE WRONG.




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*Walks n00bs around to tour PH to look at some apps and points*And here is a prime example of what not to do.


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