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[Arrancar] Valdis - Segunda Espada Fraccion Uno - The Bakemono [Approved 2-2] Empty [Arrancar] Valdis - Segunda Espada Fraccion Uno - The Bakemono [Approved 2-2]

Tue Nov 22, 2011 10:18 pm
ARRANCAR

GENETICS

Character Name:
Birth -- Carmen Maria Alma
Second -- Liora Amada
Third -- Krystyna Ceynowa
Chosen -- Valdis

Character True Age:
615

Character Appearance Age:
26

Character Gender:
Female

Orientation:
Segunda Esapada - Fraccion Uno

Personality:
Valdis is a sweet, gentle, and almost kind girl. She almost never talks to anyone else but Diablo, and even then, her voice is soft and quiet. She is discrete, and quiet : never disturbing her master is her way of life. Using elements from her noble upbringing, she is a demure, and very gentle girl. At least to apperances, which might be off putting to a hollow. She is very shy to her master, and blushes easily, stuttering often and sometimes not even able to speak. A picture of almost innocence, Valdis seems to keep her master's health and needs before her own.

However, there is obviously a darker side to her, as if with anyone else : any grudge she forms, she holds forever. She will destroy those that betray her : she never forgives or forgets insults and is only appeased at large amounts of offerings. Even then, she is very dangerous when angered : only then will her near socipathic laughter and crying start to echo. She will not stop until her target is completely destroyed. That is the nature of Valdis : there is no method other then her master's order to stop her. She is methodical, manpulative, intelligent, and very clean. That is to say, she is an almost perfect murderer, even when in rage : because her rage is a calm, dangerous fury. If per any reason her rage turns into hot rage, she will begin to tear things apart with her own bare hands. She does have a light shade of Yandere.

She likes Diablo-sama's orders,art, blood, cooking, cleaning, serving Diablo-sama and most of all, Diablo-sama. She dislikes anybody in Diablo-sama's way, insults to her sama, arrogant and loud people, people that show off and people that do not seem to understand that she likes Diablo-sama. She is a total stalker for him and holds a lot of things : discared cloth pieces, blood samples [over 9000 of them] hair samples.. you name it, she has it. Including pictures. So many pictures.

GENETIC LOOKS

Appearance:
Valdis likes to change clothes around : with her long blonde hair, lithe physique, and wide eyes, she is a very pretty woman. Her clothes tend to shift from a blouse and dress combo with nice, black tights. She can switch then, to a regular maid outfit, or more regular fitting clothes : it does not really bother her what she wears. However, she likes to play with her hair, experiementing with different styles. Sometimes, she'll let her ears out and have her bone ears out, but relatively most of the time, she likes her long, blonde hair, since it flows so much smoother.

Bone Appearance:
On her back, are wing like appendages, that are meldable into her back. She also has a pair of cat like ears made of bone, able to be flattened against her head. She also had bondes that make a glove around her fist, and slightly elongate her nails into a claw like form.

Hollow Hole:
Right side, directly opposite of the heart.

reiatsu Colour:
Rose Madder, sometimes Rusty Red.

ZANPAKUTÔ

Sealed Zanpakutô:
An almost regular blade, being able to be held in one hand. However, the tip of the blade is hooked, almost as if able to sink into the oponent's organs and pull them out. The blade is light and easy to weild and manipulate. Therefore makes it easier to dual weild with the Shinigami's Zanpakto. [Shinigami Zanpakto is a normal blade.]

Racial Abilities:

Reiatsu Sense Valdis is able to smell and taste Reiatsu, like a hunter. A person's Reiatsu will tell her in what condition the person is : hurt, damaged, tired. It will also allow her to comprehend some of their emotional ties as well, due to her former empathic state. It is a great prelude to allow her to use some medical skills.

Extended Balance Valdis is extremely well balanced : almost nothing throws her off guard and off balance. She is almost a master at going onto things that most beings could not imagine, with the sheer sense of balance. Walking on a wire? That is clearly possible for this well balanced girl.

RESSERECCION

Resereccion Name:
Baile de Venganza [Dance of Vengence]

Resereccion Release Phrase:
Canta de muerte por mi, Guarida [Sing of Death for Me, Haven]

Release Actions:
A 30 second flicking sequence, that spin around the user, as if to mask the transformation.

Resereccion Appearance:
Her wings and cat like ears become permanently showing, along with the bone on her finger tips becoming into long, accelerated claws. Her fangs also get a bit longer and she gains a pair of bone tails, swirling behind her. She seems more graceful and her entire body seems to be much more lithe, as her Resereccion seems to be a little less flashy then everyone else's. Her eyes also turn a blood red as well.

Resereccion Abilities:

Campo de Eleccion: ''Field of Choice'' is an ability that Valdis is able to use, once attached to someone dear to her. This is due to her hollow nature : once loyal, always loyal unless betrayed. Once a bond is broken, that person's form is lost unless the bond is remade. If she becomes sufficiently drained of anything vital to her health, the ability will stop on it's own. The ability in itself is simple : it uses her method of utter loyalty and bond, to be able to use the person's main element or style of attack, and find a way to produce or facillitate the materials needed. Examples are like an ice user that needs water to freeze. She could produce water with her Reiatsu for them, and only for them. Sometimes, these things require an extra step, like with Diablo, and sometimes they don't. Each thing will be a -case by case- matter.

-- Diablo-sama : His method is simple. Valdis will have his exact blood copied into her own system, via a small drink of it, or something of the like, and then her own blood becomes like his : therefore he can manipulate it freely once it is released from the confines of her body. She will also be able to clone her own transformed into his blood, and make a 5m field of 2m deep full of that blood, as long as she is uninterrupted for 2 posts.

Cortina de Vida: ''Shade of Life'' this is an ability very unique to Valdis. After jumping over a corpse or something of the like, she can use part of her own Reiatsu to manipulate that body, much like one would a puppet. This is done with simple, mental commands. These bodies cannot use abilities or anything of the sort : they will just rely on pure, melee combat. This is a Shade of the corpse's former life. If the corpse was someone stronger then she was, then she cannot manipulate it back to puppet life. The puppet may be stored in a perservative unit [coffin like thingie] if unused.

Afliccion: ''Affliction'' is a strange, unique ability. Once she has marked the opponent with an attack either from her, one of her bonds or one of her puppets, she may call a curse. Depending on the person that afflicted the damage, the curse may be laid. If one of her puppets attack and land a hit, she can inflict a minor curse [singular status effect on attacked body part for 1 post.] if one of her bonds attack and land a hit, she can land a medium curse [an effect that lasts for 2 posts, including now, diseases and non-lethal poisons that run their course.] However, should she land a hit, she can land a full-blown curse [same as the above, but for 3 posts] or once she has managed to inflict 5 injuries without cursing, a ending curse [all effects above last for 5 posts, whilst opening access to lethal methods, such as poisons, diseases or accidents. All of these ''death'' curses will follow proper death rules but occur several topics later. A mark of the curse will be made, and any further injury upon the cursed area will shorten the span. The mimum span will end up in that topic proper, unless conditions cannot be met. The maximum span is 10 threads. Should an innactive been afficted, their ending curse will take effect that same topic.] If a person dies to the ending curse, their soul will merge with Valdis and their Reiatsu becoming a floating ball around her released form.

[Minor Curses include, but not limited to - Paralysis, numbness, slight burns, sleep, slight pain.

Medium curses include, but not limited to - same as the above. Flu, stomach aches, poisons that cause illness. [like poison ivy]

Full curses include the above, with resonable amounts of possibly lethal substances, like mercury, belladonna, a light plague - as long as it does not kill.

Ending Curses are death, more or less. These will follow proper rules.

ALL OF THESE USE LOGIC FOR THEIR LEVEL.]

Jiron: ''Wisps'' are the balls of Reiatsu when a person is death claimed by Valdis. Their soul merges into her body and their Reiatsu become a floating ball. Other then that, they have no ability at the moment. Although, the balls are the color of that person's Reiatsu and feels like that person as well.



DUES EX RESSERECION

Dues Ex Name:
(what name does the second resserecion go by?)

Dues Ex Release Phrase:
(what do they say to release their final form?)

Dues Ex Release Actions:
(what do they do to release their final form?)

Dues Ex Appearance:
(describe what their Dues Ex Segunda looks like)

Dues Ex Abilities:
(explain the several powers and abilities this final form grants them)


SKILLS

Skill Level: Hierro: Beginner/Adept/Advanced/Master
Skill Level: Pesquisa: Beginner/Adept/Advanced/Master
Skill Level: Sonido: Beginner/Adept/Advanced/Master
Skill Level: Cero/Bala: Beginner/Adept/Advanced/Master

PAST

History: The Second Treaty of San Ildefonso was a momentus day : not only for Spain, gaining french allies in their struggle against Britain, but for a pair of near noble parents, as they finally produced an heir after 10 years of marriage. It was a long time, back then. Of course, they were a bit unhappy, since they gained a daughter : but if they raised her right, she would marry into nobility : and thus gain more prestige that way. It was the way, the best way back then : to get their family closer to Reyes [''King'']. It was only then would their blood, sweat and tears be accomplished in honour. Of course, the little girl was born perfectly healthy and raised accordingly to her roles for the next twelve years. A very quiet, and passive child, she was perfectly fine with her upbringing. At least, it kept them safe and quiet during France's take over : or the politcal aspect of it. She pretty to bat her lashes at French nobles, her beauty already eye catching, to say the least. She was slightly spanish, due to her father's eccentric tastes : that was only associated to the slant of her eyes, and the curve of her body. The rest belonged to her french-germanic mother, with her long blonde hair and catching eyes. The girl certain made for a flavorful foreign girl : but yet, held a touch of home. She was catholic as well, which made a great many french nobles approach her, and her parents were glad. At least, they seemed to be so : in fact, the girl cared little about spain, bored with how poor and plain it was, and longed for the beautiful cities of France. At twelve years old, she was quite impulsive, following the crowd on that fateful day, seeking something amusing. However, amusing turned into terrifying immidiately.

Her parents had rushed out to protect her as the revolution began. It was Dos de Mayo : the second of may. 1808, she was there, watching things crash and burn, as the french military began too take over Madrid. Running, she was shoved in front by her parents, even as the artillery rained down, the soldiers sweeping. Fear swept across her, as her father took up arms : he died on the spot. Her mother, stricken with grief, stayed at his side, and took up arms, if only to join him in death. Screaming, the young girl was in the street, as a woman with a veil went by, picking her up suddenly. The woman was Jewish, to say the least, as the girl's eyes were empty : beautiful and unique this girl was her light : together, they escaped the city of Madrid and managed to make it to France. After all, the woman was a French one, one of the nobility, visiting Madrid for some reason or the other. She was a secret Jew, pretending to adore The Lord, Jesus Christ. However, when the girl could not remember her name, she named her Liora : My Light. Many thought it was a pun on Lion, and as for the girl's last name, the woman explained that the poor girl had lost her parents due to the filthy Spaniards, and could only repeat the word Amada, which meant beloved. The woman assumed that it was her last name, and endeavored to find her family in france : because the girl did not look spanish. That was her reasonning, and those around her kept all objections under their sleeves. Of course, eventually, she sensed unrest in France : this was around in the 1812's, very shortly before Napeoleon's defeat. The woman would take her child, and escape to Prussia, in exchange for valuable information on some pieces of France. Thereforre, she was allowed Sanctity in Poland, where she shortly died afterwards of a disease. At the age of 18, when the war ended, she was no longer a ward of the orphange, and quickly found her perfect target : Krystyna. Murdering her and taking her place, since they were like twins, she married a fisherman, who died at see some ten years later. Crows would always come to visit the woman that smelled of blood, and she never went to church, still feeling the sting of the Christain faith in her childhood. This was eventually her own demise.

In 1836, a lynch mob took her, and then drowned her to death. Rage and anger filled her body when she died, her soul festering on the world, lingering. As Shinigami were not quite present in the area, in almost no time, she was a hollow. And in rage, she slowly murdered those part of the lynch mob : and finally, her revenge was complete, when she began to move on in the world, searching, seeking more food. Human souls, one was want to say. However, she was stopped in her rampage, some 200 years later, by a man. A shinigami, that did not wish for conflict, but peace : after injuring him in her fear, in her rage, she slowly became tamed by him, acustomed to his prescence. He was promising that none would hunt her, as long as she fed on other hollows. Agreeing, she followed him, eating other hollows he could not finish : that was how she, a hollow, began to power up. Eating others. Soon, her body would shift and change, grow stronger : and she was definitely fluttering, for her whole heart was not black. But one day, she was betrayed : the man turned on her after a feast, and attempted to kill her. He named her a threat, and that the only reason he took care of her was because she was weak. Now, she was strong : a challenge. The man hated weak things : in the defense, he injured her. The last parts of her heart went black, as she devoured him, leaving his Zanpakto on the ground. Taking it, her body was shaking, as pain wracked her entire self. Her mask was on the ground, as her hand took it, as well. Letting out sounds, she crawled into a hole, and let the transformation wash over her. Eventually, she came out of that hole, not knowing where she was, or what she was doing anymore : all she knew, was that she had two swords.

The girl was just newly born into her life as an Arrancar, as she could feel shivers all over the core of her body : power. For the first time, she stepped into Hueco Mundo, her long blonde hair flowing behind her. The Shinigami, and her grudge, had allowed her to keep her mind, for the most part : new memories flodding into her were new, as she shivered. The stares of a many hollow were on her : and almost starving, knowing that the new born Arrancar was still weak, they turned their sights on her. Her lip snarling, her body went to work : initially with her hands, but it didn't do too well after a while. Without thinking about it, she drew the two blades, and moved like a whirlwind : eventually, a path of blood was waded, and she stood in the center, panting slightly, some blood sticking to her hair. Her eyes wandered over, seeing another prescence, but she simply slipped into a guard position. However, no move was made, and as the person started walking away, the girl sheathed the two weapons, and ran after the man, her steps hitting the ground. Since that day, she has followed Diablo, not even knowing his name for a good 200 years, and yet still followed him. Eventually, she was being called his Fraccion, and he acknolwedged her existance. She simply gave the name of Valdis, as she continues to serve him, her master Diablo. Who cared about the rest? He was all she needed, in her eyes, as the blonde spanish girl was simply content with the status quo.

RP Sample:
- Look at Shisome~ -


Will Skills
  • Willpower/Determination: Adept
  • Mental Deduction: Advanced
  • Pain Endurance: Adept
  • Focus: Beginner


General Skills
  • Durability: Adept
  • General Speed: Advanced
  • Strength: Adept
  • Weapon Skill: Beginner



Racial Skills
  • Perquisa: Advanced
  • Sonido: Adept
  • Cero/Bala: Beginner
  • Hierro: Adept


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Wed Nov 23, 2011 3:44 pm

Its all cool and all but i really find that most of your powers are not explained well enough. I blame this entirely on the number of examples you have decided to not give me. Just saying it does 'one of these effects' and then not telling me what these effects are or to 'use my imagination' is not what the application is there for. Give SOME examples otherwise you have half a power.

I could go and say 'this gives them a poison' but tell me what the hell this poison does! what they are! etc etc. But be careful, poison is VERY edgy on the site. If it's too intoxicating then I can;t approve it.
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Mon Nov 28, 2011 3:42 pm
Totally cleared up some stuff <3 Lemme know how it rides.
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Application Checklist
  • Name [X]
  • Appropriate Age [X]
  • Gender [X]
  • Appearance Present [X]
  • Appearance Described in Appropriate Length OR Picture is Visible [X]
  • Appearance is Not Claimed [X]
  • 10 sentences for personality [X]
  • History is of appropriate length [X]
  • Powers are not Godmod/Overpowered [X]
  • Powers are described reasonably enough [X]
  • Application/RP Sample is not in First Person [X]
  • Skills are not filled in (Omit if a Hollow)[X]


Comments/Notes: Approved
Tier: 2-2


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Sat Jan 14, 2012 4:24 pm
STOP!

The puppet may be stored in a perservative unit [coffin like thingie] if unused or sealed within the sealed Zanpakto.


Unless your Zanpakutō is the Gate of Babylon or a hammerspace, I'm afraid you can't store anything inside the sealed form.


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Sun Jan 15, 2012 10:39 am
removed ''or sealed within the sealed Zanpakto.''

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