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Devon Born [APPROVED, 2-1+]
Sun Aug 14, 2011 7:37 pm
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Character Name:Devon Born
His name is Devon Born.
Character True Age:
Devon is around two thousand four hundred
Character Appearance Age:
He looks to be twenty or twenty-five.
Character Gender:
Devon is a Male.
Orientation:
Devon is a loner so at the moment he is a Freelancer.
Personality:
Devon is a cocky Arrancar to say the least he thinks his powers are the strongest out there and that's that and with his level of strength that could be true. He is not shy about drinking and he does so quite often even though he usually ends up really drunk after two or three cups.Devon's age makes him quite full of himself to the point where many find him to be egotistical. Devon loves the ladies and is considered quite the ladies man to them as well. Devon loves the thrill of fighting and the adrenaline it gives off and when he dies he wants to die by the hands of the first or second strongest Arrancar ever.
Devon is a party type person even though he is almost three thousand years old. He can drink with everyone fight with everyone get layed by any female and can party with the best of them. Besides all of his negative personality traits he is a pretty generous guy in his mind. He gives the weak a chance to scram before they die unless they really piss him off. Devon loves killing his opponents slowly and methodically as possible as it in his mind is how battle is supposed to be your opponent shouldn't die quick he should die slowly for crossing you.
If you haven't crossed Devon or he likes you he is polite and minds his manners overall and is quite a good person though he loves to gloat. He is friendly to those more powerful than him as well so he does not cross them unless they are complete dicks. Devon fears dieing greatly but if it is going to happen he will not plead for life. He often in battle begs for death if he has lost. He does not want to die outside battle so if he is going to die in battle he welcomes it.
Devon is a very serious man usually and almost never smiles at anyone, or anything. He hates to lose in battle as irregular as it is when it has happened he often cusses curses screams and yells like a five year old who dosen't know any better. Devon feels fighting is the only solution to problems and talks with his swords not his mouth and in in some cases this can be his downfall. He is a very spiteful man and can hold grudges for years. Overall he is unless he likes you a very unpleasant Arrancar.
Devon in many people's mind has a nice side if he likes you or your his friend even though being his friend or having him like you are both hard to do. Devon loves little cute animals like puppies and kitties and all of that cute stuff so he has a soft spot for all things soft and cuddly. Devon hates to see other Arrancar's die that don't deserve it makes him feel pretty bad unless you've crossed him before then its like he's oblivious to the fact.Devon is also quite childish and sometimes quite childish if he loses a fight or a game of some sort. Devon dosen't feel life has true meaning himself but adores every moment of it.
Devon loves anime and is known as quite an anime freak and loves animes such as Naruto, One Piece, Bleach Et Cetra and finds them quite entertaining. He is known to be spoiled to much and always gets what he wants one way or another. He is known as a sex addict and his hero is Hugh Hefner. He sometimes sits outside the Playboy Mansion and protects it from Hollows and if they attack kills them on sight without remorse. Devon loves the ladies and is quite a perv always staring at woman's boobs though he despises Hentei or Porn.Devon as you can see is quite unique in character.
GENETIC LOOKS
Appearance:
https://2img.net/h/i955.photobucket.com/albums/ae31/Yuneria/Anime/Friends%20Characters/hot_anime_guy-1.jpg
Devon wear a standard Espada cloak and a tank top under it with boxers and Skinny Jeans. He has blue eyes deep much like the sea in dark coloring. His hair is snow white and well upkept and he always fixes it up nice.He is around six foot seven inches and one hundred-seventy pounds and easily one of the biggest Arrancar out there.
The bone appearance is located around his stomach as a plate of armor almost that is also used in that way as well.
Bone Appearance:
The bone appearance is located around his stomach as a plate of armor almost that is also used in that way as well.
Hollow Hole:
Devon's Hollow Hole is located where his belly button would be.
Reitsu Colour:
Devon's Reitsu is black with traces of red in it.
ZANPAKUTÔ
Sealed Zanpakutô:
https://2img.net/h/i39.photobucket.com/albums/e166/Raven1134/claymoresanny--wip.jpg
Racial Abilities:
He can launch his sword 150 yards away and move his hands as if he had the sword in his hand and it will make the same motions. He also has an eye that allows him to see someones power and race.He also knows Cero and Bala and is very good at using them.He knows Pequissa and is decent at using it as well. His Heirro is one of his best known traits of his. His second best attribute is Sonido and he was helped in training by Zommari.
RESSERECCION
Resereccion Name:
The Demons Entity of Hell
Resereccion Release Phrase:
"Entity of the demon in Hell awaken"
Release Actions:
To Release Devon puts his sword to his mouth and says "May The Demon In Hell Awaken".
Resereccion Appearance:
In Resurrección Devon's skin hardens and his whole body turns into a red hardened skeleton. He gains a hard spiky spinal cord and a long sharp tail that he can use to stab people. He grows about five inches taller and drops about 30 pounds as well. He also gains a mouth full of sharpened teeth and his sword grows about a full foot longer. He also gains an extra scythe in his left hand. He then wheres a long white cloak that goes clear to his ankles. He also gains sharp claw like finger nails that can tear away at Advanced Heirro like paper.He also gets a shark fin like Hollow bone on the top of his head that is extremely sharp and can be used for headbutts. Devon whom was skinny before grows even skinnier now and is very thin and tall in this form and very muscular as well. His Reitsu in this form gains more red to it though the dominant color remains black.In this form his hands get holes in them that he can shoot lightning and fire from.
Resereccion Abilities:
Devon in this form gains numerous ability's.
Fade to dust-Devon is able to turn dust and reappear somewhere else once every five post and cannot attack when he is a dust form.
Tail Powers-His tail can reach up to 300 yards away for a stab and can launch Cero's and Bala and even cloak itself in Reitsu so that it pierces very tough Heirro.
Sword throw-His next ability is that he can launch his sword at his opponent up to 150 yards away and call it back like a frisbee and cover it in Cero type power much like Ulquiorria Schifter's spears throwing technique.This does puncture damage and it blows up at Cero damage.
Sharpner-His other sword in his left hand is identical to his other sword except its ability's are different. For every sword, Heirro and skin it touches it gets sharper and sharper up to 10 times sharper.
Claws Headbutt and power increase-His claws are able to tear through Advanced Heirro like paper as well. His head bone can be used in headbutts with terrible effects on opponents due to sharpness.He becomes quite muscular and robust making him much stronger and much more intimidating.
Fire and Lightning Blast-In this form he can shoot a lightning beam from his hand strong enough to pierce Advanced Heirro. Devon also can shoot Reitsu enhanced fire from his left hand that if used 0n Heirro that is Master it ill melt it after three turns it will be down to advanced and then it will stop. If used on Advanced Heirro it will burn the skin enough where moving will be quite painful. If the Heirro is adept it will give third degree burns. If the Heirro is beginner it will melt whatever area it touches.
Energy Blast-From Devon's mouth he can launch a special energy blast that's power is equal to a Gran Rey Cero.
DUES EX RESSERECION
Dues Ex Name:
(what name does the second resserecion go by?)
Dues Ex Release Phrase:
(what do they say to release their final form?)
Dues Ex Release Actions:
(what do they do to release their final form?)
Dues Ex Appearance:
(describe what their Dues Ex Segunda looks like)
Dues Ex Abilities:
(explain the several powers and abilities this final form grants them)
SKILLS
(leave the skills alone until the application is approved. You can then go back and add them if you want to)
Skill Level: Hierro: Beginner/Adept/Advanced/Master
Skill Level: Pesquisa: Beginner/Adept/Advanced/Master
Skill Level: Sonido: Beginner/Adept/Advanced/Master
Skill Level: Cero/Bala: Beginner/Adept/Advanced/Master
PAST
History:
Devon as a human was a tall individual and loved to have sex with woman and was a great warrior in Imperial China. Everyone loved him even though his skill made him quite cocky even though he was always able to back it up. Devon was in line to be the king of his nation and he was celebrating in style. There was wine and other alcoholic beverages everywhere along with tea Juices milk and plenty of woman.
He was parting as always however rebels of the empire were upset and feared that if Devon became king they would be wiped out. One snuck in and poisoned some of his wine when he drank it he immediately felt sharp pains in his stomach and chest. He then dropped dead an hour later and the thrown was taken by some crazy dude who ran the empire into the ground.
The person who poisoned him was caught and sentenced to death via hanging. This satisfied Devon greatly as he watched as a Hollow from a few yards away.
Devon became a Hollow and worked his way through the ranks all the way up until he became an Adjuchas.He resisted sex by simply watching girls in the shower then killing them and eating there souls.He continued growing and becoming more powerful as a Hollow It was then then evolved into an Arrancar like he dreamed of being. He was quite powerful easily one of the most powerful Arrancar alive and was able to put up a fight against the best of them. He grew bored and wanted more but he knew no one stood a chance. He was tired of winning all of his fights but he continued training none the less. He was content when he was training and continued doing so for years.
One day Devon was walking around when he met a women her name was Jessica. She unlike many others didn't fear Devon and made him feel much more alive knowing he had friends. They walked together every day they chatted they laughed they spared but never hurt the other and Devon vowed to never hurt her or let anyone else hurt her. One day an Arrancar killed her Devon was enraged when he learned this and swore he'd find the Arrancar. The day he did was the day the Arrancar died Devon killed him with all of his power and had not one regret about it.
When Devon was about 1700 years old he trained with Zommari the for 7th Espada to train and to improve in Sonido. Though he never got as good as Zommari he became one of the fastest Arrancar alive. Devon tested it out on a lowly Gillian class Hollow and was almost immediately behind it and with a downward slash killed the lowly Hollow and Devon laughed with delight. He was a few 100 years later asked to join the Espada to which he declined. He did not want to become a puppet in such a plot and completely denied Aizen by not looking at his Zanpokuto.
As the years went on Devon decided he needed a home he fixed himself up a shelter in the middle of the White Desert and laughed at it but it was all he needed. Devon was tired of running around like a wild man and decided to calm down there but he always stepped out of his house each day and massacred the strongest Arrancar around him. He still does this to this day. He still loves to fight and will do so whenever possible. He says the first opportunity he gets he will join the Espada. He resides in the middle of White desert in a circle of bones.
RP Sample:
Bloodhound Sonido'd away and got his face cut slightly and his arm he would have them regenerated in no time though. He saw the man help him by flaming towards him and knocking him out of the way it broke a rib but that to would regenerate. He saw the man go for an attack and before the man could move to get away he used a power roar on his foe knocking him into the flames of the Shingami and as the flames were about to hit he Sonido'd towards the man. He used Iron Reaver on him and started cutting him up. He was sure he drew blood.
Bloodhound did not say a word and checked out the surroundings there were tall abandoned buildings everywhere rubble, a landslide hazard, trees, and bushes. He did not mind this at all and was making a plan for his next attack. He then even though his Pequissa was below average felt a Spiritual Pressure equal to his own. It was hard to miss and it was coming that way. He thought he recognized it but could not be positive but it felt like Arturo Platedo. He realized that if Arturo join the fight would be greatly in there favor. He smirked and was preparing for an attack. That was if the man was stilll alive and able to move.
Bloodhound walked up to the man his Fang and Claw Zanpokuto's out ready to cut anything they could and they could cut through almost anything that of course was their power. He used Power Roar once more at the foe. he then launched Cero at him and Sonido'd towards the mans back. He then slashed across his back and at his speed it would have to cut him. He Sonido'd back and dodged the incoming attack by Robin at the man by inches but he did give warning so their was no surprises.
Robin was about to lose his head when he stopped the attack with his Reitsu knife and Hirenyaku'd away from the kick it caught him but not enough to do much damage. He was shocked the kick missed by 3 inches but it still hurt him pretty bad.He then saw the flawless attacks of the other two men and felt a similar presence coming to that of the Arrancar here's power. He felt it coming but disregarded it completely. He was in a shit fight and worried about some other man joining? None the matter he thought.
Robin Hirenyaku'd forwards at the man from the left with his bow and after getting ready to launch his attack Hirenyaku'd inwards and slashed the mans side. He then jumped back out of some smoke and awaited to see the damage that they had made. He continued to feel the Pressure coming towards them and launched an arrow at the sky so the man would come. He did this and saw the attacks Bloodhound was launching and mouthed the words get away and launched explosive arrows at the mans back.
After the arrows he Hirenyaku'd in to gut the man with his knife and then after making the attack Hirenyaku'd away. He then addressed his injuries a cut on his forehead and a bruised rib was all really. He was shocked at this because of the mans power and he was sure the rib would be broken and his forehead would be pouring blood. The blood was flowing however and it trickled down his face in an orderly fashion almost. It was no matter he Hirenyaku'd to about 2000 yards out and prepared an attack.
ARRANCAR
GENETICSCharacter Name:Devon Born
His name is Devon Born.
Character True Age:
Devon is around two thousand four hundred
Character Appearance Age:
He looks to be twenty or twenty-five.
Character Gender:
Devon is a Male.
Orientation:
Devon is a loner so at the moment he is a Freelancer.
Personality:
Devon is a cocky Arrancar to say the least he thinks his powers are the strongest out there and that's that and with his level of strength that could be true. He is not shy about drinking and he does so quite often even though he usually ends up really drunk after two or three cups.Devon's age makes him quite full of himself to the point where many find him to be egotistical. Devon loves the ladies and is considered quite the ladies man to them as well. Devon loves the thrill of fighting and the adrenaline it gives off and when he dies he wants to die by the hands of the first or second strongest Arrancar ever.
Devon is a party type person even though he is almost three thousand years old. He can drink with everyone fight with everyone get layed by any female and can party with the best of them. Besides all of his negative personality traits he is a pretty generous guy in his mind. He gives the weak a chance to scram before they die unless they really piss him off. Devon loves killing his opponents slowly and methodically as possible as it in his mind is how battle is supposed to be your opponent shouldn't die quick he should die slowly for crossing you.
If you haven't crossed Devon or he likes you he is polite and minds his manners overall and is quite a good person though he loves to gloat. He is friendly to those more powerful than him as well so he does not cross them unless they are complete dicks. Devon fears dieing greatly but if it is going to happen he will not plead for life. He often in battle begs for death if he has lost. He does not want to die outside battle so if he is going to die in battle he welcomes it.
Devon is a very serious man usually and almost never smiles at anyone, or anything. He hates to lose in battle as irregular as it is when it has happened he often cusses curses screams and yells like a five year old who dosen't know any better. Devon feels fighting is the only solution to problems and talks with his swords not his mouth and in in some cases this can be his downfall. He is a very spiteful man and can hold grudges for years. Overall he is unless he likes you a very unpleasant Arrancar.
Devon in many people's mind has a nice side if he likes you or your his friend even though being his friend or having him like you are both hard to do. Devon loves little cute animals like puppies and kitties and all of that cute stuff so he has a soft spot for all things soft and cuddly. Devon hates to see other Arrancar's die that don't deserve it makes him feel pretty bad unless you've crossed him before then its like he's oblivious to the fact.Devon is also quite childish and sometimes quite childish if he loses a fight or a game of some sort. Devon dosen't feel life has true meaning himself but adores every moment of it.
Devon loves anime and is known as quite an anime freak and loves animes such as Naruto, One Piece, Bleach Et Cetra and finds them quite entertaining. He is known to be spoiled to much and always gets what he wants one way or another. He is known as a sex addict and his hero is Hugh Hefner. He sometimes sits outside the Playboy Mansion and protects it from Hollows and if they attack kills them on sight without remorse. Devon loves the ladies and is quite a perv always staring at woman's boobs though he despises Hentei or Porn.Devon as you can see is quite unique in character.
GENETIC LOOKS
Appearance:
https://2img.net/h/i955.photobucket.com/albums/ae31/Yuneria/Anime/Friends%20Characters/hot_anime_guy-1.jpg
Devon wear a standard Espada cloak and a tank top under it with boxers and Skinny Jeans. He has blue eyes deep much like the sea in dark coloring. His hair is snow white and well upkept and he always fixes it up nice.He is around six foot seven inches and one hundred-seventy pounds and easily one of the biggest Arrancar out there.
The bone appearance is located around his stomach as a plate of armor almost that is also used in that way as well.
Bone Appearance:
The bone appearance is located around his stomach as a plate of armor almost that is also used in that way as well.
Hollow Hole:
Devon's Hollow Hole is located where his belly button would be.
Reitsu Colour:
Devon's Reitsu is black with traces of red in it.
ZANPAKUTÔ
Sealed Zanpakutô:
https://2img.net/h/i39.photobucket.com/albums/e166/Raven1134/claymoresanny--wip.jpg
Racial Abilities:
He can launch his sword 150 yards away and move his hands as if he had the sword in his hand and it will make the same motions. He also has an eye that allows him to see someones power and race.He also knows Cero and Bala and is very good at using them.He knows Pequissa and is decent at using it as well. His Heirro is one of his best known traits of his. His second best attribute is Sonido and he was helped in training by Zommari.
RESSERECCION
Resereccion Name:
The Demons Entity of Hell
Resereccion Release Phrase:
"Entity of the demon in Hell awaken"
Release Actions:
To Release Devon puts his sword to his mouth and says "May The Demon In Hell Awaken".
Resereccion Appearance:
In Resurrección Devon's skin hardens and his whole body turns into a red hardened skeleton. He gains a hard spiky spinal cord and a long sharp tail that he can use to stab people. He grows about five inches taller and drops about 30 pounds as well. He also gains a mouth full of sharpened teeth and his sword grows about a full foot longer. He also gains an extra scythe in his left hand. He then wheres a long white cloak that goes clear to his ankles. He also gains sharp claw like finger nails that can tear away at Advanced Heirro like paper.He also gets a shark fin like Hollow bone on the top of his head that is extremely sharp and can be used for headbutts. Devon whom was skinny before grows even skinnier now and is very thin and tall in this form and very muscular as well. His Reitsu in this form gains more red to it though the dominant color remains black.In this form his hands get holes in them that he can shoot lightning and fire from.
Resereccion Abilities:
Devon in this form gains numerous ability's.
Fade to dust-Devon is able to turn dust and reappear somewhere else once every five post and cannot attack when he is a dust form.
Tail Powers-His tail can reach up to 300 yards away for a stab and can launch Cero's and Bala and even cloak itself in Reitsu so that it pierces very tough Heirro.
Sword throw-His next ability is that he can launch his sword at his opponent up to 150 yards away and call it back like a frisbee and cover it in Cero type power much like Ulquiorria Schifter's spears throwing technique.This does puncture damage and it blows up at Cero damage.
Sharpner-His other sword in his left hand is identical to his other sword except its ability's are different. For every sword, Heirro and skin it touches it gets sharper and sharper up to 10 times sharper.
Claws Headbutt and power increase-His claws are able to tear through Advanced Heirro like paper as well. His head bone can be used in headbutts with terrible effects on opponents due to sharpness.He becomes quite muscular and robust making him much stronger and much more intimidating.
Fire and Lightning Blast-In this form he can shoot a lightning beam from his hand strong enough to pierce Advanced Heirro. Devon also can shoot Reitsu enhanced fire from his left hand that if used 0n Heirro that is Master it ill melt it after three turns it will be down to advanced and then it will stop. If used on Advanced Heirro it will burn the skin enough where moving will be quite painful. If the Heirro is adept it will give third degree burns. If the Heirro is beginner it will melt whatever area it touches.
Energy Blast-From Devon's mouth he can launch a special energy blast that's power is equal to a Gran Rey Cero.
DUES EX RESSERECION
Dues Ex Name:
(what name does the second resserecion go by?)
Dues Ex Release Phrase:
(what do they say to release their final form?)
Dues Ex Release Actions:
(what do they do to release their final form?)
Dues Ex Appearance:
(describe what their Dues Ex Segunda looks like)
Dues Ex Abilities:
(explain the several powers and abilities this final form grants them)
SKILLS
(leave the skills alone until the application is approved. You can then go back and add them if you want to)
Skill Level: Hierro: Beginner/Adept/Advanced/Master
Skill Level: Pesquisa: Beginner/Adept/Advanced/Master
Skill Level: Sonido: Beginner/Adept/Advanced/Master
Skill Level: Cero/Bala: Beginner/Adept/Advanced/Master
PAST
History:
Devon as a human was a tall individual and loved to have sex with woman and was a great warrior in Imperial China. Everyone loved him even though his skill made him quite cocky even though he was always able to back it up. Devon was in line to be the king of his nation and he was celebrating in style. There was wine and other alcoholic beverages everywhere along with tea Juices milk and plenty of woman.
He was parting as always however rebels of the empire were upset and feared that if Devon became king they would be wiped out. One snuck in and poisoned some of his wine when he drank it he immediately felt sharp pains in his stomach and chest. He then dropped dead an hour later and the thrown was taken by some crazy dude who ran the empire into the ground.
The person who poisoned him was caught and sentenced to death via hanging. This satisfied Devon greatly as he watched as a Hollow from a few yards away.
Devon became a Hollow and worked his way through the ranks all the way up until he became an Adjuchas.He resisted sex by simply watching girls in the shower then killing them and eating there souls.He continued growing and becoming more powerful as a Hollow It was then then evolved into an Arrancar like he dreamed of being. He was quite powerful easily one of the most powerful Arrancar alive and was able to put up a fight against the best of them. He grew bored and wanted more but he knew no one stood a chance. He was tired of winning all of his fights but he continued training none the less. He was content when he was training and continued doing so for years.
One day Devon was walking around when he met a women her name was Jessica. She unlike many others didn't fear Devon and made him feel much more alive knowing he had friends. They walked together every day they chatted they laughed they spared but never hurt the other and Devon vowed to never hurt her or let anyone else hurt her. One day an Arrancar killed her Devon was enraged when he learned this and swore he'd find the Arrancar. The day he did was the day the Arrancar died Devon killed him with all of his power and had not one regret about it.
When Devon was about 1700 years old he trained with Zommari the for 7th Espada to train and to improve in Sonido. Though he never got as good as Zommari he became one of the fastest Arrancar alive. Devon tested it out on a lowly Gillian class Hollow and was almost immediately behind it and with a downward slash killed the lowly Hollow and Devon laughed with delight. He was a few 100 years later asked to join the Espada to which he declined. He did not want to become a puppet in such a plot and completely denied Aizen by not looking at his Zanpokuto.
As the years went on Devon decided he needed a home he fixed himself up a shelter in the middle of the White Desert and laughed at it but it was all he needed. Devon was tired of running around like a wild man and decided to calm down there but he always stepped out of his house each day and massacred the strongest Arrancar around him. He still does this to this day. He still loves to fight and will do so whenever possible. He says the first opportunity he gets he will join the Espada. He resides in the middle of White desert in a circle of bones.
RP Sample:
Bloodhound Sonido'd away and got his face cut slightly and his arm he would have them regenerated in no time though. He saw the man help him by flaming towards him and knocking him out of the way it broke a rib but that to would regenerate. He saw the man go for an attack and before the man could move to get away he used a power roar on his foe knocking him into the flames of the Shingami and as the flames were about to hit he Sonido'd towards the man. He used Iron Reaver on him and started cutting him up. He was sure he drew blood.
Bloodhound did not say a word and checked out the surroundings there were tall abandoned buildings everywhere rubble, a landslide hazard, trees, and bushes. He did not mind this at all and was making a plan for his next attack. He then even though his Pequissa was below average felt a Spiritual Pressure equal to his own. It was hard to miss and it was coming that way. He thought he recognized it but could not be positive but it felt like Arturo Platedo. He realized that if Arturo join the fight would be greatly in there favor. He smirked and was preparing for an attack. That was if the man was stilll alive and able to move.
Bloodhound walked up to the man his Fang and Claw Zanpokuto's out ready to cut anything they could and they could cut through almost anything that of course was their power. He used Power Roar once more at the foe. he then launched Cero at him and Sonido'd towards the mans back. He then slashed across his back and at his speed it would have to cut him. He Sonido'd back and dodged the incoming attack by Robin at the man by inches but he did give warning so their was no surprises.
Robin was about to lose his head when he stopped the attack with his Reitsu knife and Hirenyaku'd away from the kick it caught him but not enough to do much damage. He was shocked the kick missed by 3 inches but it still hurt him pretty bad.He then saw the flawless attacks of the other two men and felt a similar presence coming to that of the Arrancar here's power. He felt it coming but disregarded it completely. He was in a shit fight and worried about some other man joining? None the matter he thought.
Robin Hirenyaku'd forwards at the man from the left with his bow and after getting ready to launch his attack Hirenyaku'd inwards and slashed the mans side. He then jumped back out of some smoke and awaited to see the damage that they had made. He continued to feel the Pressure coming towards them and launched an arrow at the sky so the man would come. He did this and saw the attacks Bloodhound was launching and mouthed the words get away and launched explosive arrows at the mans back.
After the arrows he Hirenyaku'd in to gut the man with his knife and then after making the attack Hirenyaku'd away. He then addressed his injuries a cut on his forehead and a bruised rib was all really. He was shocked at this because of the mans power and he was sure the rib would be broken and his forehead would be pouring blood. The blood was flowing however and it trickled down his face in an orderly fashion almost. It was no matter he Hirenyaku'd to about 2000 yards out and prepared an attack.
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- Mental Deduction: Beginner
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Re: Devon Born [APPROVED, 2-1+]
Sun Aug 14, 2011 7:51 pm
The appearance is taken by Genpaku, change it? D:<
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Re: Devon Born [APPROVED, 2-1+]
Mon Aug 15, 2011 12:05 pm
The hollow hole is worded with reiatsu color. Change it?
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Re: Devon Born [APPROVED, 2-1+]
Mon Aug 15, 2011 12:15 pm
If UHCM already looked at it, I'm fine. 2-1.
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Re: Devon Born [APPROVED, 2-1+]
Sat Oct 15, 2011 4:18 am
moved to inactive
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Re: Devon Born [APPROVED, 2-1+]
Wed Nov 30, 2011 5:51 am
Why Inactive its approved...
Devon Born 2-1 Arrancar
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Re: Devon Born [APPROVED, 2-1+]
Sun Apr 08, 2012 2:39 pm
Moved back to unchecked for the look over below!
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Re: Devon Born [APPROVED, 2-1+]
Sun Apr 08, 2012 2:43 pm
Application Checklist
- Name [X]
- Appropriate Age [X]
- Gender [X]
- Appearance Present [X]
- Appearance Described in Appropriate Length OR Picture is Visible [X]
- Appearance is Not Claimed [X]
- 10 sentences for personality [X]
- History is of appropriate length [X]
- Powers are not Godmod/Overpowered [X]
- Powers are described reasonably enough [-]
- Application/RP Sample is not in First Person [X]
- Skills are not filled in (Omit if a Hollow)[X]
- RP Sample Present (Omit if this is not the first character) [X]
- RP Sample is 10 sentences [X]
Comments/Notes: Firstamundo, your powers are a bit confusing dearie. I suggest you clean 'em up and make different sections for each ability you have. also, I suggest you keep in mind that your power of cutting hierro/similar things will depend on your skill sheet! Also add in the skill sheet below, since it's your will powers. Post in the topic to let me know you've edited <3
Tier: 2-1 on re-approval
- Code:
[b][center][u]Will Skills[/u][/b][/center]
[list][*][b]Willpower/Determination:[/b] Adept
[*][b]Mental Deduction:[/b] Beginner
[*][b]Pain Endurance:[/b] Advanced
[*][b]Focus:[/b] Adept
[/list]
Re: Devon Born [APPROVED, 2-1+]
Thu Apr 12, 2012 1:02 am
Since ya fixed what Aivee asked, I'll be approving ya for 2-1+ like she said.
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Re: Devon Born [APPROVED, 2-1+]
Wed Dec 05, 2012 8:56 pm
THIS IS BEING ARCHIVED! USER HAS NOT SUBMITTED A REQUEST TO STAY ON THE SITE DURING THE REBUILD! EITHER REGISTER TO CONTINUE ON THE SITE OR SAY GOODBYE TO IT! WE CANNOT KEEP APPLICATIONS OF INACTIVES AT THIS POINT.
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