Irikani Hatsugai [Approved; 4-2]

Name:Irikani Hatsugai
Gender:Male
Age:518(looks about 25)

Appearance


(Except without the katana, and instead hook swords)

He has long silver-grey hair that goes down to about his waist. Has bright green eyes that sometimes appear to be white.Hes about 6'2" tall and has a muscular build.He wears a black Tai Chi Gi with traditional Geta sandals. He has a grey sash that holds his Zanpakutō in place on his back.He is almost always smiling, even in battle. His Zanpakutō is blue and has an elongated hilt. He has very sharp facial features, with his cheek bones rather high.

Personality

He is a highly intelligent individual that has an air of calmness. He can stay calm and relaxed even in the worst situation. However, if he is mocked or his intelligence is insulted, he will become furious. If he comes into contact with someone as, or more intelligent as him, he will become nervous and uncomfortable. He likes to point out peoples flaws and taunt them for fun. When he meets someone new, he tests their intelligence by attempting to confuse them. Likable, huh?

When in battle, he tends to remain calm even if he is losing. Because of this, he tends to surprise the opponent quite a bit. If his opponent mocks him, he might become enraged and attack at his full strength even if other people tell him not to. Because of his intelligence, he is a great strategist that can outmaneuver his opponent at almost every turn. He also comes to understand his opponents abilities quite quickly and easily, though he is talkative, which can lead to his downfall.

History

He was born in a small, poor human village. Because his family was so poor, he grew up with just the bare necessities. Even though he was poor, he was a natural genius and was always the top of his class. This, however, was cause for other children to bully and pick on him, which is the main reason why he cant stand being being mocked. When he was just 15, his village was attacked by rogues. He hid in a small wine cellar when his village was being attacked. An aged rogue discovered him hiding in a barrel, and after seeing him fight back, decided to make him his apprentice. He was taught how to use Hook Swords until he was 20 by the group of rogues that took him in. 3 months after he turned 20 years old, the rogues' hideout was raided by a large group of barbaric warriors. He fought valiantly and managed to escape, however he was mortally wounded. As he wandered aimlessly, he was attacked by by a Hollow. He did not know what he was fighting, so he tried his best but failed because he couldnt even harm it. All of a sudden, a man in a black kimono-like robe appeared and began to fight off the Hollow. After defeating it, he explained what had happened to Irikani and that he sensed a high level of spiritual energy in him. However, after just a few minutes, he bled out and died. He woke up in an area unknown to him. When he regained his senses, he noticed the man from before smiling down at him. After introductions, he told him he was going to become a Shinigami and that he needed to start training. After joining, and eventually graduating from the Shinigami Academy, he began his duties as a Shinigami. However, after only 40 years as a Shinigami, he left and began to train on his own. He trained for almost 500 years alone. The rest of his story has yet to be told......

Zanpakutō

His Zanpakutō takes the form as a Katana when sealed. However, it turns into 2 Hook Swords about 3 and a half feet long when released. His Zanpakutos name is Reitō wa Tsundora, meaning Frozen Tundra.



Sealed Powers:

Kōri no hahen (meaning Ice Shard): Shoots a few small Ice shards at the opponent at high speed.

Aisushīrudo(meaning Ice Shield): Covers own body in ice as a shield. Absorbs damage, but only lasts 1 post.

Shikai:
Release Phrase: "I wont give in!"

Description: After unleashing his Shikai, his hair and clothes gain a blue tint and look like ice. His Zanpakutō turns into light blue Hook Swords with elongated hilts that can combine and form a Katana.

Abilites: Yukiyake: Unleashes a wave of Ice so cold, it burns all foes in the nearby vicinity. This ability appears to form a mist-like substance that is at sub-zero temperatures.

Bankai:
Kōri sanshouuo: Grows a tail out of Ice, and covers self in super-hard Ice scales. Can deflect most low-level attacks, and multiplies strength by 4-5 times.

Skill Sheet

• Durability: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  
• General Speed: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  
• Strength: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  
• Weapon Skill: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  

• Hoho: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  
• Kidō: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  
• Zanjutsu: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  
• Hakuda: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  

Role-Play Sample: "What ARE you? I've hit you over 10 times, and theres not a scratch on you!" Frustrated, Irikani lunges at the unknown moster again, but misses and the creature knocks him over. "Silly human. You cant even touch me. Now give me your SOUL!" The monster than began pulverizing Irikani in a series of blows that could destroy a house. "I.....wont....give....in..." " You 'wont give in'? You must be pretty STUPID if you cant even admit defeat!" "Dont......you....dare....call....me....STUPID!!" After dodging a blow from the monster, Irikani began attacking it, but to no avail. The monster launched Irikani towards the ground. "This is where I end things. Take this!!" The creature threw a giant fist in the air, and dropped it down on Irikani- but then out of nowhere, a man is flowing black robes appeared and deflected the hit with his katana. Then the mysterious man launched a series of hits, eventually ending the fight with a slash to the monster chest. "If youre gonna kill me.....do it already..." is all Irikani could say while gasping for breath. After moving over towards Irikani, the man said "You should be thanking me. I just saved your life. Although the fact that you an see everything thats going on tells me you couldve done the same thing if you were like me. You have a lot of spiritual energy. Heh. You may even have potential to become a Shinigami." "A shini-what?" "A shinigami. Shinigami are what you humans call reapers. We hunt down Hollows, which is what i just defeated, and protect people. We also......" Slowly everything faded to black, and Irikani lost all senses........

Before I continue with the app. Please fix the appearance and personality.

Personality needs 10 sentences. I counted 9.
Appearance I believe also needs to be out in full sentences~
Also. Shikai needs more detail towards it. E.G Release command, what happens when release.

http://bleachplatinumhearts.forumotion.com/t2-shinigami-template

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Here is the original shinigami template. You'll see what you have to include within Shikai here.



center]Application Checklist[/center]

• Name [X]
  
• Appropriate Age [X]
  
• Gender [X]
  
• Appearance Present [X]
  
• Appearance Described in Appropriate Length OR Picture is Visible [-]
  
• Appearance is Not Claimed [X]
  
• 10 sentences for personality [-]
  
• History is of appropriate length [X]
  
• Powers are not Godmod/Overpowered [X]
  
• Powers are described reasonably enough [X]
  
• Application/RP Sample is not in First Person [X]
  
• Skills are not filled in (Omit if a Hollow)[X]
  
• RP Sample Present (Omit if this is not the first character) [-]
  
• RP Sample is 10 sentences [X]
  

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Alright, all fixed

Alright, thanks for everything!

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