Grell Sutcliff

Tue May 24, 2011 10:53 am

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Basics

Name: Grell Sutcliff
True Age: At least a 2000
Gender: Male
Personality:

The Creep:

Grell has a very awkward personality due to his slight masochism and creepiness vibe that he gives off to everyone who's near him. He likes to act very feminine to add more to it which freaks out the people even a lot more than what they had expected him. But then, sometimes the girliness appears even when he's not joking around depending on the situation. He dislikes the word "family" as he never grew up without one which is why he grew up being a very horrible person in his lifetime.

Masochist:

As said, he's a partial masochist, whom, when gets hurt likes to enjoy it more than being afraid that they'll spill blood again. Yes, he loves blood so much that he even collects it on his free time from the ones he kills. Without even caring of what he does, he just loves blood. Even better when he sheds his own blood.

Smart-Ass:

Although, being a complete maniac in that situation can partially deceive you since he's actually a very intellectual person. He loves to anaylze structure data and dissect to see the exact conclusion. Then, he compares it to the hypothesis he made and change the experiment or so around a little bit. He likes to call battles either; "games," "experiments," or "parties." His IQ has been known that it was over at least a 200+ level.

The Red Valkyrie:

Grell has earned quite a nickname in his whole life; "The Red Valkyrie." This nickname was deprived from the fact that he likes to wear red outfits more than anything and has that red-long hair. After that, it was the fact that he likes to finish off what he does then go on with his life. That wasn't the complete reason however. It was the fact that he had all the animalistic trait a valkyrie can possibly have.

Naughty:

Yes, he's quite the smart one but he can't help but to laugh at a statement that sounds very sexual or contains a horrible pun. The fact is that he has the unnoticeable perverted mind that makes him quite deceiving to other people's view. He can't control this part of himself, but he can however, make it less intimidating by grabbing a book and reading it instead of having to look at women who jokes about "how hard it is" to them.

Bookworm:

Grell loves to read books thats sounds interesting to him; either something about mysteries or scientific magazines that finds new discoveries. He always tends to comment that he already knows it all, but by adding valuable information into his folder, he basically can make a much more revised plan that seems to be more organized and crucial to whatever he's trying to make a plan for. By just reading, he comments that it can increase your intelligence and IQ level which he doesn't need, he remarks after.

General Appearance

Appearance:

This young man here with the appearance of late teenage or looking as if he's a young adult, he carries a very crimson rosely scent around him. The aroma is strong enough to attract insects in which he ends up killing later on due to annoyance. He has a very long red hair and falls up to his abdomen. The hair spikes up softly to the sides as well. This man also tends to wear very red outfits whether it be a casual wear, a formal wear. Whatever he wears are mostly red. The only thing appealing and attracting to a person's eye will be his bright green eyes and Shinji-like teeth. The skull earrings are usually worn unless he decides otherwise.

People often mistakens him for a gothic person in which he responds with an ultimately rude comment back; basically a comeback. Also, doesn't he look ultimately badass here? Twirling his hair and shit...

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Animalistic Traits:

Valkyrie; his traits come exactly from the valkyrie legend in the Norse. Valkyries have been known for their swift actions and the praise of having a wing to take flight on in the air. They also have amazing healing abilities from their light magic simply being able to bend the light and bless the wound or injury by their own will. Valkyries also are very quick animals with bird-like feet and can endure most hardships with just that without having to get suffering from fatigue.

Appearance Age: 18-20
Height: 6'2"
Weight: 140-150 lbs.

Natural Abilities

Techinques:

Master Swordsmanship Specialist: Grell is a very proficient swordsman able to keep up with one of the most swordsmen there ever existed. His skills are proven when he was able to counterattack by dodging a past captain's attack then landing a hit on him which caused him to render his arms useless with carelessness. However, Grell has even appointed that past captain as a weakling 'compared to other captains' proving that the captain was one of the weakest ones there ever were during that period. His swordmanship abilities excels most other people however for some reason, he barely goes full out with this.

Flash Step Master: Grell has enough information and skills with the flash stepping ability as he could keep up with average captain-level shinigamis (or anyone around that level) with ease. However, being proficient, he currently dislikes the ability as the way it works is a very simple process and may have an improved modified version of it if Grell wants to have the time to work on the experiment. Also, by having light controlling in his hands he can basically move at that speed without any effort.

Expert Hand-to-Hand Combatant: Grell is also very excelling with the hand-to-hand combat able to use it willingly along with his swordsmanship abilities. By doing this, he can combine sword-fighting along with his actual physique. This ability was even proven when he tried to land a blunt blade attack on an opponent - in which the man blocked it - Grell decided to spin his body with his acrobatic body and had a kick to the man's head that caused him to experience a soft concussion for a while.

Genius Intellect: Grell has been known to be very intelligent, brilliant, knowledgable, and sophisticated. He holds great information on the methods of combat and planning able to analyze an opponent's attack without having to attack back. Oftenly, Grell holds philosophies of honor, respect and even mercy. Although, he tends to lose this intelligence depending on the situation especially around very childish people.

Around the code of his science researches, he holds a very sadistic favor in his hand.

Kasokudo (加速度, Acceleration): Basically, this is a special flash step for Grell only unless he teaches others how to do it which is less likely. This technique is based on light and its speed. As light is the fastest thing in the universe, Grell would naturally be a very proficient man in this technique. This flash stepping technique absolutely never makes any sorts of sound whatsoever. Unless, you are delusional and think light makes a sound when it reaches its destination. However, if he DOES happen to make a sound for some reason - it will come a bit late than when Grell reaches there. Let's get an example; you hear an electricity static from your back because Grell happens to be electrocuted on one part of his body, but before you even hear that sound you'll probably notice his foot is right in front of your face. That's how fast this technique may work.

[i]Master Scientist | Inventor: Grell holds a very nice status as of being a scientist; of course, making medicines, or body modifying machines. Although, he does find making useful stuff quite a hassle, when he is bored - he tends to make very useless stuff such as like... a chocolate with a melting lava inside, etc. However, he doesn't seem to be a very mad scientist like Mayuri Kurotsuchi.

Expert Strategist: He always have a plan up his sleeves no matter what he does - if the plan fails, then he uses a backup plan that has been analyzed beforehand.
Master Chemist: He has great knowledge of chemicals, acids, and other such plants that can help him make much more stronger versions of explosives.

Weapon | Body Modification Expert: Grell has a versatile ability to help with modifying with people's body if wanted to, or the weapons that people hold; either the shape, the spirit's appearance (if it hands one) and such as well. The only thing is that this is a very rare case in Grell's point of view as he finds the modification process a waste of immense time when he could be researching for better subjects than that.

Explosives Expert: He is known to be able to plant explosives or gunpowder weapons for his own good usages. Unfortunately, he finds it also a hassle to be planned to be used and keeps this as a last resort.
Organ Replacement Expert: Grell is able to replace organs that doens't function belonging to a person and replace them with artificial ones. Sometimes, the artificial ones tends to work better as they're usually fresh and clean. And, due to the fact that he adds some sort of chemicals in it to prevent it from happening such as creating antibiotics in that organ to prevent diseases from spreading that far.

Number One: Nadegiri (撫で斬り, "Clean Sweep" or "Killing Several with One Sword Sweep"): This basic technique allows for a precision cut of extreme force and speed, it can casually slice through large, multi-story high opponents protected by steel skin. The opponent can be killed with one swift slash so precise, that they aren't even aware of until after it has taken place.

Number Three: Aragari (アラバマ物語, "To Kill a Mockingbird"; "one step, sudden death"): Placing the sheathed sword upright and listening to the "heartbeat" of her opponent, the attack rapidly unsheathes, attacks, and sheaths the sword. This technique is done with with incredible precision and speed, as she cuts down her opponent in a matter of seconds. This technique is capable of leaving deep, precise wounds in an opponent's body in a matter of milliseconds.

Number Four: Kamishini (神キラー, "God Killer" or "Cutting down God with a Single Slash"): By swinging the user's sword across, they can make a sweeping motion that cuts everything within 4 m of the user. The force behind this technique is great enough to defeat even Adjuchas-level Hollow with little effort.

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Racial Skills

Shunpo: Advanced
Kekkai: Adept
Kendo and Fencing: Advanced
Sugiura Magic: Adept

Durability: Adept
General Speed: Advanced
Strength: Adept
Weapon Skill: Advanced

Magic:

Lightning: By grabbing a source of light nearby, he can basically charge it at one focal point and depending on what body part he uses to choose that focal point, the more powerful the magic is. What the ability does is not a simple lightning bolt, but after choosing a point, it will charge sources of light to bash onto the person. The light is strong enough to blind opponents and even hurt them if Grell adds a source of reiatsu into it.
Shine: Grell will simply bend a source of light and create an area focal point meaning it doesn't really focus on a target but more on to an area. When the light attacks strike, the area will be hit by three sources of light - and they will all cause minor explosions enough to cause a bit of injury on a person such as a burn or blinding for a minor moment depending on their own precision.
Crossed Penance: An orb of light in a perfect elliptical shape will be formed from the sides of the person or object that Grell created a focal point on. As the time goes, the orb will grow in size and at the right moment, the orb will fly out and hit the opponent from sideways creating a crossed attack. The orbs will also stay focused on the opponent no matter what as long as it has a source of light nearby.
Powered Flight: It is a simple light magic that Grell decides to use by creating set of wings made with pure light white feathers that obviously makes it available for flight. The flight is highly quick even than a person attempting flash step from the ground or on the reishi pathways in the air. The wings are also able to defend him from minor attacks such as a punch by a average seated officer level.
Hanger: By controlling the lights around, he can cause a reflection of a person if wanted and deceive others. If mirror effects were added into this, he can completely shroud himself or another person's presence without any evidence of being possibly available to be tracked down that easily. No, Grell is smarter than that.

Hoi: Designates a person as the target of the spell.

Joso: Designates an area as the target of the spell. Needs a high focus (Sacred drawn) and more Reiatsu.

Ketsu: Creates a barrier around the target enemy or area. The barrier can be used as a defensive messure around oneself, or to trap enemies for a short period of time. Enemies of the same or higher strength can break the barrier with a bit of effort. With a drawn Sacred, the barrier gets stronger.

Kai: Releases the barrier without causing damage.

Metsu: Collapses the barrier inwards, damaging all trapped inside. The more Reiatsu is used, the more devastating the explosion inside the collapsing barrier is. Can be used without a Sacred, the sword makes it stronger, however.

Tenketsu: Opens a dimensional rift in the barrier, disorting the Reiatsu of the one trapped inside, weakening the victim with time. Enemies that are far weaker than the user can be killed by this effect. Can only be used with a Sacred.

Zekkai: Using negative energy, the Suigara fires out an energy attack at the enemy, or repells an attack. A dark aura circles around the user of this technique. It does not require the use of a barrier beforehand, but a Sacred is needed. Since this increases negative feelings inside the user, frequent use is not recommoned, since it can cause depressions, destructive bloodrages or even suicidical thoughts.

Shinkai: Often called the strongest of the Suigara magics, this either creates a huge energy shield in front of the user to not only block, but reflect incoming attacks, or fires out many energy blades onto the target. This technique drains a huge amount of Reiatsu from the user, but has extreme force. If a target gets specified with the weaker spells, the attack has homing abilities. Without a Sacred, it can be deadly to even attempt to use it. Weaker Suigara would kill themselves by casting this.

Nenshi: Another way of binding, this creates a glowing energy thread in the collor of the Reiatsu of the user. It can be used to bind an enemy in place, struggle or torture him. It is connected directly to the palm of the user. This can be used without a Sacred.

Sekkai: Developed to be used against Suigara techniques and Bakudo, this can disrupt barriers by quite a bit, making it easier to break free.

Shuufuku: A healing spell that heals wounds and restores damaged objects. It first creates a weak barrier around the object or person, and then restoring Reiatsu is funeled into the barrier.

Shikigami: This creates small paper dolls that the user can use as measures of spying on enemies, since the user sees everything the small papercut does.

Musou: A technique to highten the body of the user. Pumping Reiatsu into the muscles, they get faster, react better and stronger, but give up capabilities with magic casting at the same time. Lasts for about 20 minutes.

Gekidou: is a Special Sugiura Magic that can, Create a strong Prism made out of the color of the user's Reaitsu around the opponent, effectively catching them and trapping them inside the prism. Similar to Six ways of binding light, it explodes when you make contact on the user, by an attack or even a punch, often causing damage into the body of the enemy from the powerful reaitsu being pushed down on their body. This Can be used without a sacred and depends more on the reaitsu of the user. In order to completely trap them however, you must be able to fully see them and they have to be at least a bit of a mile close into your radius to do so.

Kyuusaisha: is a technique that utilizes calling on the help of another sugiura, when in their respective area they can create a small telekinetic message throughout the area to one specific Sugiura to go to their aid if they are being ganged up on or even in a very horrible and unlikely situation. Depending on the Reaitsu Level and tier. they can send more messages. This can be used without a Sacred or with a sacred to call on more help.

Sacred Weapon:

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Raitoenjeru (ライトエンジェル, Light Angel): It is a very unique spear-shaped weapon with an axe-like feature as the blade part. The fact is, it's able to pierce like an actual spear but also able to be used as a mauling-type axe that can chop stuff up. The weight of this weapon is very immense in the hands of other people as they will drop it unless they have some sort of boost to increase their strength. This weapon has light element imbued on it purifying whatever evil there are when used.

This spear-like weapon has been known to be one of the most powerful light-based weapons there ever existed in this universe. It also happens to be one of the most elegant there ever are due to its specially natural shape and the type of weapon as a matter of fact. Basically, a legendary weapon to be a matter of fact.

Other Weapons: Imbued Tarot Cards are within his pocket and when thrown, it is able to destroy a whole building if wanted (sort of like Grimmjow's needles) and he seems to never run out of them during a fight at all. They're also hard enough to be considered swords as well.

Guardian Beast

Element: DivineLight

Guardian Beast:

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An impressive form of a winged warrior with humanoid arms along with wings on the back. Its feet is clearly shaped like an eagle's feet able to claw anything when wanted. This lady here also holds the spear that Grell holds except a little more color variant from the original that Grell's holding. This valkyrie lady's name is "Valah" but nicknamed "Angela" due to her angelic appearance and holyness spewing out of her body in bright divine glow. She holds all of Grell's strength except the realm where Grell is in charge of but prefers "not to change it" due to the peaceful environment that he can use wisely.

Valah is a dear beast with the same exact fighting style as Grell except she tends to find in the air. Her spear is also more imbued and enchanted with divine light magic so much that she can literally shoot devastating beams of light that can create a crater of 20-100 meters in diameter with the depth of around ten feet. She holds no expression unless she's with Grell and does not enjoy talking while she can be doing combat.

Grell highly likes her companionship and claims her as an assistant rather than his Guardian Spirit.

Guardian Beast's World:

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The realm is clearly a paradise and Grell has even remarked against it at his first sight; he described it bluntly as 'disgusting and too girly' despite all the male husbands controlling the place along with their wives. The wives would be seen doing the most feminine work; picking flowers with their children, weaving clothing. While the husbands would be seen doing the most masculine work; smithing, hunting, and along the such.

Animals made with golden color will be running around the place. When the husbands tend to kill the animal for supplies it begins to regenerate as a living being and a new clear animal along a new life.

Sacred Unleashed

Joushou:("Ascending")

URTEIL

Grell's Joushou form is clearly noted to be caused when Grell starts to force sunray down to the place he's going around in. The only difference is that his outfit gets bleached (turning it into a pure white) along with his hair. By doing that, he already has infinite source of light from everywhere that he can use his magics from. Even using them in a form of his own manifestation.

Aurora: By dropping a star shaped bolt of light from the sky, the area will feel intense heat burning them but without the sense of smoke. This absolutely doesn't affect Grell in any sort of way, but others who are next to it. Once the star shaped light reaches a solid matter it explodes into a huge blaze of light sprouting from the ground burning whoever is inside of it with intense heat as if they're in a half-assed magma.

Exorcism: By dropping a hint of pure water inside the ground, the ground will start to form a grid-shaped line and explode between the lines on the surface. When it does so, it blinds anyone who is inside of it permanently until the person inside can somehow get out of it. This attack also damages anyone who uses dark-property or shadow-property elemental attacks. This is due to the fact that this light is basically bright as a flash bang and until you get out of it... consider it as a zone of flashes.

Zenou: ("Almighty")

ALLMACTIGER URTEIL

Grell's Zenou form is when the sunrays starts to immensely grow in amount and grows twice as large in size. The sunrays move wherever he moves it and whoever is in it will be blinded without any sound available in there other than Grell's own voice. Whoever is in the light is completely in Grell's sight and can be shot with nearby sources of light as well - ie. the light magics can be used.

Abilities before this release is available.

Seele Streik: By creating a basketball sized sphere of light he shoots it out into an area and stops it mid-air whenever he wants. When done, he can usually command the sphere to shoot out lightning (look at magics again for this) almost instanteously and constantly until the sphere is destroyed by that person themselves. The bolts shoots at about 2 per every second so it gives most people the time to block it, deflect it, or whatever they could do to get the hell out of that sphere's range as it has a limit on how far it can shoot. When the bolts reach 10-30 meters away from it, they can either dissipate the exact spot or be left there until it's ready to be controlled all over again.

Kyuu Kyou:("Ultimate")

GOTTES LICHT

Completely forbid, Grell will rarely use this as it is already decided to be forbidden since its power seems to be analyzed as great. Grell's Kyuu Kyou form just like other Sugiura are powerful. Except this one, Grell will literally steal the light in the area of two thousand kilometers from him becoming light in that area himself. His body will glow magnificently with light floating around him. Every shadow he touches, it dissipates as if he's a walking flash bang. He has a passive ability to charge up reiatsu and light into an area of his body and create a scythe-like attack to spring out as he does it. So, if he kicks to the right - a light + reiatsu only scythe-like attack will spring out until it reaches its destination or goes somewhere that light doesn't exist.

Oh, and yeah, he does keep his abilities from before he even released this.

His body is imbued with all the light in the area and light comes from many sources so he barely and rarely runs out of supplies for his techniques.

Valkyrie Ray:

Grell just simply points to an area with a part of his hand and shoots out a large beam of light to engulf a whole area. The beam apparently has imbued and enhanced reiatsu within it to make it a lot more stronger than pure light. Anyone who gets caught it in with feel themselves burning without any sense of flames appearing on them. Even after the whole thing disappears they will still feel that burning sensation without their body causing smoke or something to rise.

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Peitsche: Grell would make a bright lightful essence to sprout from his palm of the hand as if it was miraculously growing a plant on it. The essence will grow fast into a long whip that is connected around his arm so that he doesn't leg go loose of it. And, since he has control over light in that area, he can basically make sure it swings where he wants it to swing. Even tying a person up with just one simple heave.

Segnung der "Walküre":

Grell will immediately be able to open up rifts inside the whole area that has the light that's controlling. By ripping of rifts, he can summon falcon-legged valkyries from his own Guardian Beast and command them to fight for all he cares. They're all about average Adjuchas-level except Valah who was known as the strongest valkyrie that ever existed in their realm. All these rift-valkyries are ranging from the tiers of usually 3-3. But, there are unlimited amount he can carry, but there is a limited amount of valkyries that can be in existence of the real world. The only limit is 3 and over that will make him end up getting a bit pressured as if tons of weight were put on him.

These valkyries are more hostile and not as intelligent as Valah but they hold their advantages with their swordsmanship abilities and speed to dodge most incoming attacks. They also hold air advantages - making them an air fighter.

Alter Form

Grell is known to have an Alter Form but he barely uses it as he describes it as "inappropriate, poor and makes it look like a child's play." (What this means is... I'm giving him the Alter Form a bit later for judgement.)

Alter Appearance: Unknown.

Alter Personality: Unknown.

Alter Powers: Unknown.

Past & Roleplay Sample

Character Background:

Grell had a pretty tragic past to say the least. His life was with a bishop of a shrine that believed in this Norse God named Odin. During his time there, it was known to had many valkyries living there killing whatever creatures surrounds them. The only thing about this is that the valkyries lived past a long stone bridge that was immune to any kind of attack by a ritualistic agreement by the both of their races. The agreement contained the fact that both had said whoever passes the boundary between them both shall be dealt with a death punishment. Not only did Grell lived with the Bishop, he was also a living with many priests and priestesses who worshipped that god. Ironically, Grell never believed in that Odin man upstairs making him the first person to ever not believe in him when he was absolutely born from the shrine.

Across the bridge from the shrine was another specific island with ruins and huts AND nests for the valkyries' eggs. The one who were ruling the valkyries had a name, a very specific one; Valah. The nickname for this leader was "Randgris" a word for destruction meaning not only she had the highest authority over her valkyries, but also the most powerful one that ever existed. People all over the world had put a bounty on just ONE of her feathers for millions of coins and bills. Grell was unfortunately a very greedy guy and to further his researches, he would steal without a care in the world. Which is what he did later on... that caused this event in the first place.

Grell literally had no books to study with and no absolute medical education to become a great scientist. His plan was to get the hell out of that shrine area and live his life out of there for the greatness of himself. But, to only make this dream come true... is to steal the "Randgris" feather. He infiltrated the valkyrie land with no supervision and even broke through the seal of the bridge as he was part of the important council in the shrine as well. After the seal broke, he went in carefully to not alert any of the flying Valkyries. Grell was a sneaky one to be able to hide from flying creatures like that.

He found a large hut as he went through the place picking up valkyrie eggs on the way as well. When he went into the hut, he found a beautiful humanoid body; this was the Randgris, Valah. The lady laid there beautifully and gracefully without any sort of thing to be afraid about her... other than her falcon-like feet which was normal for everyone. But, she had more of a humanoid face than other valkyries. As Grell was about to pluck out a feather from the Randgris in her sleep with a knife, it alerted a guard who went in to spray holy water around the area. The valkyrie immediately flew out with a caw and called out other guards to come and defeat the intruder. Grell was seriously pissed that one guard ruined it. As he tries to leave with one piece of feather, the valkyrie leader grabs his shoulder and tosses him across the whole hut onto a wall. The force of the impact was so great that Grell even spat out a bit of blood from his mouth.

Grell, was absolutely a shinigami but he was there to learn something of the human world and now he's caught in something like this; as he was thinking that he was going to die, he clenched his eyes closed very tough. The valkyrie didn't do anything bad however... as she only pointed toward Grell's forehead and smiled; "You're not bad. Follow." Her accent was highly normal for a valky - wait, did she just talk?

Grell went out with a slight back pain only to notice that Valah wanted him to get on her back. In which, he has and went to a faraway island. Soon, this place was going to be filled with patrollers of her people and that she would distract him. Valah also gave him a bit of holy water and left off to say that she was alright and that the man was dealt with personally. In shock, Grell stood there and closed his eyes... waking up already in the next morning. He thought it was a dream until he realized he was on top of a large tree branch. He looked down until the Randgris grabbed his back and pulled him. Grell was having the most freakiest moment in this life. The valkyrie lady smiled and pointed toward her village and over the bridge toward his own; a war.

All because Grell crossed over the bridge. All because the Randgris was "kidnapped." Grell was about to jump off with the zanpakuto in his hand and help until of course... the lady would grab him again. Complaining, Grell quickly shouted at her but before he finished his statement, the valkyrie shot a bolt of light into his head. His eyes flashed and the vision was gone.

He woke up in a building with luxurious designs with a nurse next to him. His clothes were probably new and the valkyrie was gone. Where has she go? Then, a voice rammed into his head in a huge damage. It was the Randgris. She congratulated him for what he has done to stop the war from continuing but with the price of the Randgris inside of him for the rest of her life until Grell tells her to get out for a short time being. Grell was in absolute surprise at this point and wanted her out immediately. She mentioned something about being more powerful with her inside of him and agreed to cooperate.

Grell has mastered all the abilities he could of the Sugiura and even the releases he had when the valkyrie came along. His skills seemed to be beyond his knowledge of having and that increased the chance of gaining the ultimate experiment of knowing everything in the world. That was his dream, a dream beyond a dream. Now, he just simple wanders around looking for work to do at the moment. Even fighting people, of course. He changed his behavior aftersince Valah joined him. Weird, huh?

Roleplay Sample: Cough.

Thu Jun 02, 2011 1:03 pm

Done, and ready for check...! Whew... probably a bit overpowered? I'm not sure.

I also do NOT want to write his whole history after that. Why? Because it's long. -_-;

Fri Jun 03, 2011 5:46 pm

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Comments/Notes: Everything is fine but when you say he can carry unlimited amounts of valkyries.. you mean he can have umlimited vals? Thats.. too much..
Tier: 1-2+ when fixed

Fri Jun 03, 2011 5:51 pm

Done! I fixed it.

Fri Jun 03, 2011 5:54 pm

Good. APPROVED

Sat Dec 03, 2011 8:21 pm

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