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Human application- Kronsire
Tue Apr 26, 2011 6:17 pm
Name: Kronsire (Knochen en Vlees)
Race: Human
Age: 27
Height: 5ft, 3in
Weight: 165
Gender: Male
Race: Human
Age: 27
Height: 5ft, 3in
Weight: 165
Gender: Male
Personality: Adept at anything he takes interest in, Kronsire is bright, with a hint of laziness. Since, Kronsire is gripped by sloth he rarely actually does anything benifical to himself or others. Even from a young age the bad habits he created could not even stay with him as he grew too lazy to even keep up with the habits. Unfortunatly, This works both ways only doing what was neccesary, in all situations of his life, Kronsire became the outsider in society. The short man started a life of solitude, never seeing the point of friends or family.
Kronsire is pessmistic to a fault, however these comments are mostly complaints he does not mean seriously. Due to his solitude, the 27 year old never had experienced having true friends, he understood family, but he became depressed in the last years. Kronsire himself loves to laugh, though he has basically no sense of humor in his body. Considerate to those worse off than himself, most of every penny he earns goes to help other people, taking only a small percent to buy food and other neccesites.
A few knick knacks about Kronsire are: he is obbessed with oranges, second guesses himself continually, loves people for their personality and not their strength, finally, Kronsire enjoys ceramics.
He is a very down to Earth man who seeks order and is out to stop chaos from spreading. The one goal in his life that sloth cannot touch is to grasp immortality or the closest thing to it. He does not fear death, however, he wants the power which comes with immortality.
Appearance: To start of, Kronsire has lightly browned hair, which extends to the back of the neck. No bangs are present and never will be, as he hates the hair getting in the way of his eye sight. Pale to an extreme degree, Kronsire always puts on special lotions on his skin to keep it from being burned, it is not to say he is albino. Kronsire just has very sensitive skin. The eyes are hazel in color and do sometimes change day to day from greens to browns. They are sunken into his skull, and the eyes are rather small, but wide open. The 27 year old's nose is partially misshapened from an accident when he was young, it functions perfectly, yet it has a bulging bridge and the bottom cartiledge is uneven. Thin lips, also slightly damaged from the incident, are small also close to the small broad chin. (A picture is being made, but for now ill use the older one i made of his face, at the bottom as in attachment.)
Background: Born and raised in the domed city of Chicago, Kronsire lived a sheltered life; seeing only the outside world through the windows of his home, the short man, who was even short as a child, experienced little pain and suffering. Kronsire's parents were, to say the least, wealthy. They afforded him a good education with some of best tutors money could buy, he was taught the sciences, mathamatics, the English language, and even philosophy. The outside world having no real influence on the sheltered child, besides the German and Dutch background of his family.
Orignally named Knochen Vlees, Kronsire made his greatest thoughts in science, learning about chemistry along with the human anatomy. Years past, as Knochen lived his daily schedule. Waking up at 7:00 AM, showering, eating breakfast, and then being tutored until 6:00 PM. Life went well for most of his early years. Once at 17 Knochen decieded to choose his own path: Science.
Knowing of the increasing market for defense weaponry, Kronsire went to work as an apprentice to Doctor Hessen, the lead director of the science institue in Chicago. Young Knochen quickly adapted, soon surpassing his mentor whom he learned not only science, but how to keep alive in the open world. To know how to persuade people from violence, setting a broken jaw, and even how to make a quick buck on the streets Kronsire learned it al lfrom Dr. Hessen for the three years he was present at the lab.
January 15th, 2438 A.D, a poison was released into the air ventalation of Chicago by an unknown group. It took mere seconds before citizens started to drop like flys. Dead laid in the streets, some still gasping for air. All defense personnel were summoned to combat this threat of tainted oxygen, but to no avail. One week past, the poison finally dissapated from the air system, though the results were gruesome. A total of half the population of the Domed city of Chicago were either dead, or had permenant health issues. Kronsire's parents were victims in this catastophe, at the age of 24 Kronsire was left alone in the world. All family ties were severed by the poison, every person he ever met were burried 6 feet deep into the ground. After this experience, Knochen had never been the same, depressed beyond belief he lost himself in his work. He had a new goal in mind, whether it would break him was irrelevant: he wanted these things called hallows, which he had learned from his history tutor.
It took two years to finally be able to allow experimentation on a hollow. Due to Knochen's success in his field of work he had been promoted to head researcher of the institute. Through his numerous findings he found that hollows are compatiable with humans in a few ways, and through this information he disected these hollow's closest thing to D.N.A., taking the strands and testing them on himself, as it was deemed to dangerous to lower the population any further. The result, after two more years of testing, training, and researching Knochen found himself with the ability similar to hollows, but with one odd side effect, he could not use any chi energy some people display. It baffled him, but in the end Kronsire decieded to forget this small setback and proceed with honing his new found skill. Perhaps in due time, he would be able to use this universal energy, as these so called awakened humans have.
The hollows being tested on soon broke loose from their confinements in the lab, they were all destroyed, though numerous researchers were killed in this accident, leaving Knochen to flee the Domed city for this research was entirely on the premise that no one would die. With no where to go, Knochen took a caravan with mercenaries to this japanese settlement called Karakura. Once there, he changed his name to Kronsire, leaving the meaning of this new name only to himself.
Roleplay Sample: Decay filled the air, as the door opened wide. A gust of wind from an unknown age escaped its prison of dust and silence. Coughing, Kronsire stepped aside for the Captian to enter this new found labyrinth. Each footstep the Captian took echoed through out the long hallway, were the constant sound of dripping water could be heard.
Shaking her head slowly, the Captain merely gestured too the scientist to lead on. An unheard sigh escaped Kronsire's thin lips, entering the impentrable darkness. Utter blackness descended upon mercenary company, as one by one they entered the small room. Underlings using their spiritual energy to create an eerie glow, lighting up a seemingly new world around them.
Books sat on their shelves all across the study, ancient texts dating back to the 21st centruy, many had rotted away, however, leaving behind only scraps of information. Though, this finding is undoubtidly a great find. The Captain, now holding onto the hilt of her blade ordered her mercenaries to search. Her eyes glowing in the dark, like two moons at the strike of midnight. All the while, Kronsire stood next to their leader, waiting for these filthy cutthroats to discover their valuable treasure.
He never knew what these people searched for, but he had enough sense not to ask, sensing the danger staring infront of him.
Tip: Most of Kronsire's power comes from the human body. He restores his fats, calories, carbs., etc. passively. At higher stages Energy renewal takes less time. The drawback of energy renewal is that, until Kronsire finds other sources of energy the body is all he has.
Power Development Stage 1 Appearance: Kronsire appears as he normally does, without any changes to his physical appearance.
Power Development Stage 1 Abilities: Hybrid Generation
Expansion: Kronsire is able to expand his body at will, however this ability consumes energy to use. At stage one, Kronsire is only able to expand one type of tissue, organ, area at a time. Muscles may be expanded all at once, but he will become off balanced for a short period of time due to this unwieldy extra strength and mass. Bones may be lengthened, but it is not recommended as Kronsire would have to expand his skin first. However, if Kronsire chooses to expan an area of his body, all tissues expand accordingly, though he can only expand a specified area such as a limb, head, or torso region. It is also possible to expand parts of his body to change the way he looks.
Compression: Kronsire is able to compress his body at will. This ability consumes less energy than Expansion, it is meant to be used right after expansion. Expanding an arm would increase strength and density, but with compression Kronsire can compress all his new found strength into a smaller area. Keeping the added benefits. The drawback of this is that Kronsire can only compress something for so long if it had been expanded before. Now, compression, without an expansion of a body part, lasts much longer the benefits being a decreased size also to manipulate his looks.
Regeneration: At stage one, Kronsire is able to passively regenerate his body, but not to extremes. If his head is destroyed Kronsire would become dead. The upside of regeneration is the fact he can recover his original limbs, tissues, cells, and so on of his body. This process is far from instant. It is not entirely slow, however, it does take time to heal wounds. By focusing on regeneration Kronsire is able to increase or decrease the time needed to regenerate. This consumes much energy, causing Kronsire to go on the defensive until he regains enough energy to fight back. He can not regenerate anything that was generated, so he can not regenerate a third arm made by generation skill.
Generation: The creation of cells, tissues, fluids, and among other things in the human body. At stage one Kronsire is able to create anything found in the human system, but to a low level. For example, Kronsire can create bone to layer his skin, or perhaps "transform" his hand into a weapon. Generation uses the most amounts of energy compared to all other abilities, since he is making things not originally on/in his body. Stage one generation is limited to small changes such as one extra limb, a small covering of bone, extra blood, etc. It is possible for Kronsire to create small doses of stomach acid, or appendix fluid (which is poisonous) however these are used to distract and cause small damage to the opponent.
Attachment:Kronsire can reattach fallen or lost pieces of himself. This also serves as a healing ability for other people. Connecting his own body with others to secure them a supply of blood, or perhaps reattach a cut off limb, etc. This requires the least amount of energy to perform. It is merely a way to heal, and possibly help Kronsire as he is defending himself.
Power Development Stage 2 Appearance: Kronsire appears as a muddled mess of bone and flesh, his spine may start protruding from his back, skin may start to look like melting candle wax, and extra limbs may be added, or preexisting limbs may be lengthened. Everything is continually changing outside and inside his body at this stage. One minute his elbow may protrude, the next minute it might not be.
Power Development Stage 2 Abilities: Grotesque Hybrid Generation
Grotesque Expansion: In stage two expansion is increased to the entire body. The limit of one area or type of body item is no longer existent. Of course, the energy consumption is much greater than in stage one.
Grotesque Compression: In stage two, Kronsire can compress half his body, that has already been expanded. Without any expanded body parts, Kronsire is able to compress his entire body. Of course, this lasts for a certain amount of time and uses more energy to start compressing. After the time limit is up, the body reverts to its expanded form, causing imbalance with in his own body.
Grotesque Regeneration: The time of passive regeneration decreases greatly. Allowing Kronsire to move about easier, of course if Kronsire's head is destroyed he is dead. Though, if his head is partially damaged he can heal himself. All head injuries cause temporary imbalance throughout the body. It is possible for Kronsire to loose some memories, but not the current situation. Not to mention, senses may be shut off for a small amount of time. Regenerating has a lower time for Kronsire to be on the defensive, and focusing on regeneration has greater effects. If all focus moves into regeneration, generated body parts can be regenerated, this is not wise as it is harder to attack.
Grotesque Generation: Generation increases in speed, and more than a small amount may be generated. Thicker layers of bone can be made in less time, but generation still uses up a lot of energy. Transforming all several parts of the body is possible, the more he generates the more time it takes to create. Where as smaller generations happen faster.
Grotesque Attachment: Still consuming the least amount of energy, Attachment speed increases, and so does its effects. The drawback of using Attachment at stage two is that stress levels in the body increase, the more that is reattached.
Awakened Appearance: Kronsire has no chi energy, that he can muster as he had just discovered his own man-made ability, in due time perhaps he will train himself to use chi.
Awakened Powers: N/A
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Re: Human application- Kronsire
Sat Apr 30, 2011 2:14 am
Application Checklist
- Name [X]
- Appropriate Age [X]
- Gender [X]
- Appearance Present [X]
- Appearance Described in Appropriate Length OR Picture is Visible [X]
- Appearance is Not Claimed [X]
- 10 sentences for personality [X]
- History is of appropriate length [X]
- Powers are not Godmod/Overpowered [O]
- Powers are described reasonably enough [O]
- Application/RP Sample is not in First Person [X]
- Skills are not filled in (Omit if a Hollow)[X]
- RP Sample Present (Omit if this is not the first character) [X]
- RP Sample is 10 sentences [X]
Comments/Notes: Alright.. First off.. Regeneration is a hollow ability..so even if you state it as a human power and explain its slowness compared to a hollow.. I have to say no. Your basically making a human regenerator. You can ask TheFrost to override this or you can debate with me about it..but I am strongly against non hollow/demon regenerations and in this case your making it sound like a human has instant regeneration.. IN regards to your organ poison.. you state it stuns your opponent..but how does it do this? If it is just acid..then all it would do is burn them. if it is to be compared to stomach acid it would hurt..but not stun. Maybe I misunderstood this part. With the regeneration bringing up an issue.. I must clarify that regenerating a limb is also something only hollow have been seen to do. Your a human.. not a demon or a hollow. Sorry if i seem to be shutting down your ideas..but..This really seems like your trying to make a human with a hollow's high-speed regeneration.
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Re: Human application- Kronsire
Sat Apr 30, 2011 9:43 am
Yes, i was wrroied about that, luckily i did have a stroke of genius yesterday but i never got around to editting the appplication (sorry about that) and if it not too much trouble i want to red edit everything about this application. Sorry again. and once i re edit it the abilites will be much more acceptable i hope.
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Re: Human application- Kronsire
Sat Apr 30, 2011 9:13 pm
All changes were made, if i forgot something please tell me, but i believe i have everything.
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Re: Human application- Kronsire
Sat Apr 30, 2011 11:27 pm
RP Sample is 10 sentences [X]
Comments - Excellent. This reminds me in a way of choji from naruto however..I can clearly see the differences. Approved!
Tier - 3-3 (sorry mate. Gonna have to raise it via posting like the rest of us.)
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Re: Human application- Kronsire
Sun May 01, 2011 12:17 am
I have no problem with that, i want to have my first character rise through the ranks normally. No challenges would be boring. And sorry for having you read an entirely extra application, due to my laziness to move it to WIP.
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