Yako Grim [APPROVED 0-3]

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Name: Yako Grim
Age: 89 but appears a lot younger
Gender: Male


Personality: Yako is a very friendly person outside of his job but he often a prankster and will often make people walk into his traps by just approaching him. He often called a person who switches mood a lot. By simply saying a word it can turn him from friendly to dead serious and angry. Either way his mood changes at a fast rate. So can his train of thought. One minute he can be found writing reports and next he's on a new project. This is one of his weakness if you can stay out of his sight and make him think of other thing he'll completely forget what he was doing.
With little help of a note book that he constantly carries can help remember it. Another about Yako is that he can change to a serious and depressed mood on the battlefield for some reason. Also he acts like this when you talk about death and family. Some say it's because of how his parents died of a mysterious death. Every time he kill some he say sorry to them because when he kills there no where for them to go. He completely destroys there soul in process of killing them.
Yako can often be seen on the street because he enjoys it since he was a child. The best time to see Yako in the best mood is on the streets of K-world. It bring back a lot of great memories to him.
He is very disorganized because of his forgetfulness. His office is made up of four rooms, the first one you enter will have his desk and few chair. Then there are three doors behind it. One leads to a project room that is filled with computers and papers scattered across it. Each pile of papers is a different project that he is working on. Each of them are to assist the ruby cross in a certain way.

Appearance:
Height: 6 ft tall
Weight: 181 lbs.




Power Development Stage 1 Appearance:Is his current appearance. He has been in this stage since he achieved it only thing that happen in this stage is that he gain his weapon and abilities.
Power Development Stage 1 Abilities:
Soul Ripper/ Yako can rip a soul out of a quincy's,human, or even a shinigami out of the gigai. This also lets him do damage to both the body and soul at same time. Anybody killed by Yako has there soul killed at same time. This makes him better at fighting humans and quinces. Also as he kills the soul he takes a part of it. This part keeps him at his current age for a month to 6 months depending on how strong the victim was. This gives him another reason to kill.

Reversal Cut/ Yako can cut a ally in the same spot they've been cut before and instead of more damage it will seal the wound instantly. This can also be used to reattach limbs. This ability can only be used 7 times a thread unless Yako has killed someone then it resets. If he give permission to someone hands them his scythe they too can use this ability on Yako himself.

Shadow Travel/ This ability allows Yako to travel in between places where it is completely dark as long as it's within 250 ft of his current position when he does it. There is a second that he'll be transferred from one spot to another. Others can travel with him as long as they touch him and are also in the shadows.

Strength Transfer/ Yako can transfer the amount of power a person and he has as long as they both hold on to his weapon for two posts. The will switch there amounts of power. This can work with any race and it won't give him different type of power they just change amounts. This can be useful if Yako needs power or another person needs power. If the other person dies with Yako's amount of power it can't be regained.

Pain Stealer / If Yako's Scythe gets inside of a person's body he can take your wounds. In this case it's a transfer of wounds but can't be done other way through. this can get Yako very hurt but he can take the damage of moderate wounds if it gives someone more useful than him able to return to battle.

Healing Circle/ Yako swing his scythe in a clockwise circle. This swing creates a ring that will heal cuts and stop bleeding. After 2 posts of circle being formed Yako and anyone else in it will be healed. The diameter of this circle is about 12-13 ft. This will only last for three posts and heals up to life threating stabs if in for all three posts.
If Yako chooses he can use it on just him self. In this case it is less power draining on time but on the injury. If he uses it on himself he will place the scythe on the ground and let it hit one time. by holding it 6there for one post a small ring will appear around his body like a belt. It will only last for 4 posts and only heal average to small cut and stabs. but stops bleeding for all thing temporarily.

Prison Square/ Yako makes 4 cuts that connect each make a purple mark in the ground. When it is complete anyone inside will be unable to leave that area for 3 posts after it's complete. This is difficult to break out of because it rejects all teleportation and entering another world while inside.
This square cannot be entered once complete, this is used so either Yako can rest or wait for back up to assist him. This move can effect him just as well anyone else. Only person on out of square and have a strong enough attack can this be destroyed. This make as dangerous move for anyone who doesn't have time because any attack that is targeted the square will be block by the barrier, so even if a person tried to kill the person on the inside early they would only be freeing them. As the barrier is destroyed so is the markings in the grounds. Ones that don't connect with any others will fade away after a day.



Power Stage 2 Appearnce: in this stage Yako has his clothes change to grey and black color. His scythe seems to have a chain added to it an he seems to not have many other noticeable changes except for the Skull and two crossing scythes on his back. Also the chain on the scythe streches to 12 ft.



Power Stage 2 Abilities:



Shadow Elemental: Using his new control over the shadows Yako can create a 2-3 create to fight for him after focusing on it for one post. It can take any shape and is usually be 20 ft tall also this create can hurt opoenents with spiritual and nonspiritual attacks. It seems to be able to survive everywhere but it is weakened to 3-2 in sunlight and will shrink and can only be truely hurt by light or electrical attack. Attempts to physically damage this create seems near futile as it change shape to be able to form around the punch or take the impact. This elemental will also die if Yako is severly damaged or returns to his orginal state.



A three post elemental through can be a 1-3 and 30 ft tall in size. but he can only have two of them out as for the 2-3 elementals, he can have 4 out at the same time.





Shadow Healing: yako can cover a person comple body or body parts in a shadow cover and over two to three posts most injuries and broken bones will be healed only can be used 3 times a thread on other people. it has no limit to what it can fix unless it is a sickness or poison. But it can't bring back the dead as well.



Shadow scythe: If Yako loses his first scythe he can create a repleica of it out of his energy and it takes a pure black form. He can also just use this for a second scythe to use at same time. Limit of uses per a thread 4.



Shadow flash step: A flash step move but during it it can be noted that black auras starts to appear around him as he prepares to use it.



Healer's touch: With this ability Yako can heal a ally's injuries momentarily with this touch a small portion of a person's damage is healed. About 10% to be exact but this can only be used on a person twice in post but can be used 5 times a post after 18th use it requires a two post cooldown so Yako requires another method to heal for time being. He may use this on himself.

Soul Claw: This attack give Yako black claws that he can use to slash and stabs some one. Much like his scythe can do this claw can rip a soul out of it's body or gigai this ability is just a addition to use in close hand to hand combat.

Interdimensional Shatter: With his power Yako can destroy a Garganta or portal like thing that allows travel between dimensions but this doesn't just shatter the traveling but it also prevents a portal from entering anywhere around Yako 25,000 ft. for 3 posts. and can be used twice a thread.

Mending Energy:Yako can use his own energy to not only heal injuries but to give energy to those who need it. This might not be spiritual energy exactly but it's energy to get themselves up and do stuff may it be punch someone in the stomach or knock a entire building down but this will leave Yako drained.

Life Force Transfer: Life is perscious as Yako knows so with this ability Yako can give up his extra life that gives him his youthful appearence. With this he might be able to give a person sometime as they fighting off a deadly diease from their body giving them some strenght or just to give them more time. This can also happen the other way around if someone wishes to give up their life and they have no hope of living on and will give Yako the time they were orginally supose to have.

Grim Reaper State: With this State Yako has enhanced speed and durability and this state is marked as a red hood appears over Yako's head covering his face and his cloths change entirely from Black to Red. This stae last for 5 posts and can be entered twice a thread with a one post cooldown.

Reaper's Shadow: Requires Grim reaper state but makes Yako be in two places at once allowing one Yako to heal someone while the other might defend off opposing attacks. This makes a unique thing as their are now two Yako's one with healing abilities only and the other with the ret with the exception of all scythe related moves such as soul ripper and reversal cut.

Reaper's Sealing/Seal Breaker: Given enough time over his time alotted Yako can break or make a ziamachi seal and if it takes so long this ability can by pass the required cooldown for Grim reaper state but will immeaditely end after the sealing or breaking is completed. Requires Grim Reaper State.

Grim Wish: This move requires Grim reaper state and has grave costs for the person it is used on and Yako for this move allows for him to complete remarkable freat of healing and safe someone's life even if there is no hope left at the moment and in a sense Yako prevents death. The cost of this ablitity to the victim if human or Quincy will have their life span cut in half and instantly become hollows on death but for spirits well they must sacriface all their power for 3 months time (IRL) will be gone and they will need to put some work forwad to gain them back. The Cost for Yako is that if this ability is used more than 3 times in 100 years then he will die on the spot after the forth healing and pay the price for playing againist death.



Use of abilities of pervious form



Inspired Shadow Heal: This is considered currently Yako's ultimate healing move. Using this he can instantly heal 50% or more of allies and his own injuries over one post. It heals them in the simlar way as Dhadow healing but witgh much more power. With a large army this can cause a big of a problem for everyone on the oppesing side most likely. After using this through Yako cannot use his second stage for the rest of the thread and the next one.




Background: Yako was born in K-world because both of his parent were a part of it. His parents had some powers but not tooo many so they weren't any of high ranks but they were apart of it. They taught him about how K-world worked when he was little kid and could understand them. But at about 7 and a half both of his parents died of unknown reasons and he became a orphan.

He was taken care of because of his parents being apart of the crosses but during this time he was trained to unlock his inner abilities. At the age of 11 he had earn his weapon and first abilities. The weapon that was created with his powers was a scythe. At first they thought that Yako's abilities would be offensive but they focused more on healing. This made him very special because he was few of healers in K-world that weren't Shinigami. As time continued eventually he grew older and was trained by the turquoise cross to join the crosses.

After his training was over he became a member of the ruby cross. During his first mission he was sent with a couple of members of bronze cross to catch a few people that were causing trouble in K-world. During it all of the other members were killed but Yako returned victorious because the group was mainly made up of humans and his powers were strong against them. As he killed each of them he felt himself grow stronger and every time he got a chance he healed himself to continue. This made his rep grow that he was a ruby cross member that could fight.

As time went on his strength grew as well and was promoted to commander because of his fighting skills and being able to be on the battlefield during the fight. Now Yako leads the Ruby cross and tries to think of strategies to allow healers on to the battle without worrying about them being attacked. He is also close to achieving his second power stage as his first stage abilities grow to there max peak.

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In no universe I'm approving Pain Giver and Death Swing. Pain stealer gets past that because it's self suicidal, and I don't see how you can benefit that, especially if you don't have Pain giver. The rest of it looks good, although you should describe the impact of the movements on Yako, as some of them could be thought of as usable against himself, and we need to know if the same effect happens, or if it differs in some way.

Also you need to describe how he's a human and can live up to the age 89. Maybe something with science, or being born from the people in k-world.

@Misaiko : The age is listed in the Soul Ripper ability

I'd say half a year for Soul Ripper. Making time stop for your body an entire kill just cause you kill someone is a tad OP, seeing how you could just kill a civilian to avoid getting older.

As for the description, please describe the effect of Prison Square on Yako explicitely, even if the same effect applies.

Other than that, I'd say everything's fine

Alright, thanks for pointing that out, Also post something saying you edited the changes ryuuichi asked for, then you shall be approved.

I have edited all the thing I have been asked so now it can be checked again and hopefully this time it will get approved.

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Approved, with a tier of 3-1

Tier has been raised to 1-3