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[Spirit Class 8 | Hazard F] Cala Paracer
Tue 12 Nov 2019, 02:19
THE ARRANCAR TEMPLATE
Enter The Arrancar
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I. Basic Information
» Name: Cala Paracer
» Age: 268
» Gender: Unknown
» Height: 5'7
» Aspect of Death: Loss
» Association: Independent
» Appearance Written: Note: Cala's Hollow Hole is located on the left side of their chest.
Maskless Form: Cala's appearance while restraining their Reiryoku is much more human-like. Their mask fragment shrunken down to nothing more than a small hairpin. While their eyes take on an inhumanly vibrant lavender color. Their frame is slight, showing nothing in the way of muscle or tone, with an appearance that could holistically be called Androgynous. Additionally, in this state Cala's hair is proper and kept and their skin flawless to an unnatural degree.
Masked Form: After releasing their Reiryoku and beginning to fully exert the pressure of their Reiatsu Cala's appearance shifts. Their hair becomes longer and more wild, their mask fragment grows and shifts down to cover the top half of Cala's face and their skin becomes a sickly, pallid color. Their teeth sharpening to fangs and their nails growing out to become more claw-like. In this state Cala's stature does not change, however, their form becomes more toned and muscular. Foregoing the scrawny appearance of their restrained form entirely.
» Appearance Image:
- Maskless Form:
- Masked Form:
II. Personality
» Personality: Cala's personality varies between their forms. With a near completely different mindset coming to the forefront depending on which form they find themselves in.
- Confidence: In their restrained form Cala's confidence is not only lacking, but they actively depreciate themselves if given the chance. A melancholic, depressive attitude that borders on Apathy and uncertainty. Despite whatever skills they may have Cala is all but incapable of active application of confidence to their actions while in their restrained state. This changes mildly, however, upon reclaiming their base form. Though Cala's outlook on the fidelity of the world is no less bleak, they become much more somber about the inevitable loss all must experience. Though it is questionable whether they seem to truly enjoy the prospect they nevertheless accept that should they have to assume their base form, they are likely going to contribute to yet more loss in the world.
- Obsession: Regardless of their form Cala is drawn to scenes of loss and lacking like a moth to a flame. While restrained their fascination with, say, someone grieving at their parent's grave is akin to a very off-putting child-like wonder. The wide lavender eyes of their restrained form often staring and inquisitive as they see yet more evidence of the inevitability of their aspect. This takes on an entirely new meaning when their base form is reclaimed, as Cala's child-like wonder becomes more akin to a stoic, somber duty. Like a soldier who, whether they like their orders or not, knows they will be confronted with the horrors of their actions and that there is no escaping the repercussions of what they may be.
- Opportunism: Owing almost entirely to Cala's existence as an Arrancar to say that they are an excellent opportunist is not quite doing them enough credit. Though while restrained they do not consciously consider what their actions may be doing, they have an instinctual drive to make themselves seem as non-threatening as possible and to avoid notice and unwanted attention whenever they can. Though while this instinctive drive is all but subconscious to Cala while restrained, their base form is only too happy to reap the benefit of an opponent underestimating them with a sort of calm, satisfied, affirming glee. It would not be entirely inaccurate to equate this relationship to Cala's restrained form being a truly meek and unassuming mask that is entirely unaware that the person wearing it wants to have other's backs turned to them for them to take advantage of.
- Stress: The way in which Cala's forms react to stress are almost as night and day. Given that the most common source of stress for the majority of their existence has been the possibility of being consumed by another Hollow before they removed their mask, they have a few distinct reactions when confronted with situations of this sort. Though their experience with other, more socially inclined stressful situations are just beginning to grow beyond the opportunistic defense mechanism Cala operates from. As should be little surprise Cala's restrained form reacts to stress rater poorly. Often cowering and hiding while trying to make themselves as unnoticeable as possible. Ultimately intending to either lose the interest of the offending aggressor or, as has begun to happen with other Arrancar, be seen as too pitiful to be worth killing or just outright ignored. If Cala fails to 'shake' interest in themselves and are forced into open combat in their base form, and are pressured to the extent they become worried, their demeanor becomes cold and hostile. Their focus and intent on ending a threat that would attack their restrained form being rather merciless.
- Sociability: This is the area in which Cala's restrained form shines and is a rather new experience for the Arrancar. Cala's restrained form actually takes a bit of joy in speaking to others and, presumably, not being constantly under the threat of being destroyed or eaten and Cala is, subconsciously, rather content to mingle socially in this form. If there is an instance where Cala must assume their base form to speak to others they are much less socially capable and more subdued. Their answers tending to be short and not exactly coddling in their bluntness. After all, why would they lie? Everything will be gone eventually.
III. History
» History:
- Birth:
Though the memories are forever lost in the seething mass of Hollows that would come to be known as Cala Paracer to tell the story in it's entirety it begins, like all things, at birth. Due to the massive loss of life and anguish caused by the third world war countless spirits and Hollows alike sprang into existence and this, in essence, is where the very first piece of what would become Cala began. Consuming, as all Hollows who survive eventually do, it's kin.
Given the events of the war many human souls ending up succumbing to Hollowfication and Cala's was just one of many. There, in that deluge of newly birthed Hollows all attempting to devour one-another, all born from the same traumatic event the very seed of Cala would be planted. Possessing just enough intelligence as a Hollow to avoid the most violent feeding frenzies of other Hollows, Cala instead took to sensing out wounding, lost Hollows, those who had just survived a battle of their own or ones Cala could ambush with little trouble. Though this method led to Cala feeding much more slowly than other Hollows lucky enough to survive their early life, it did mean that they were much more likely to survive, as well as creating the very kernel of what would come to define parts of Cala's personality, even as an Arrancar.
After the most violent and dangerous Hollows birthed from the war had all either been eaten or had eaten one-another easy prey and sources of power to feast on became much more scarce. While Cala's primitive intelligence shifted from actively ambushing other Hollows to instead altering itself to appear harmless, weak, like easy prey that had somehow survived the tumultuous feeding of some of the stronger Hollows, those Hollows now were only too happy to try and devour what they perceived as an easy snack. Only to then be devoured by Cala themselves. This manner of feasting took much, much longer to accomplish. With each and every more powerful Hollow devoured being it's own hunt in and of itself. Though it took many, many years Cala eventually evolved into a Gillian.
- Evolution:
In stark contrast to their time as an ordinary Hollow, Cala was not a Gillian for very long. Having come into the evolution with enough power and preparation, while not letting themselves being driven mad by their hunger, meant that now Cala was easily able to feast on other Gillian with near-abandon. It's primitive intelligence reveling in the power it took with each and every bite, each and every bit and bite that it's prey lost with every bite it took. It was not long at all before this Gillian became an Adjuchas. Though this new transformation did not come without it's own.... complications.
After becoming an Adjuchas, and as Cala's intelligence began to blossom into something close to what it now possesses they became aware of a very distinct.... longing within themselves as well as a distinct type of... feeling they would occasionally come across that would satisfy this longing. Every few years, among the feasting on countless other Hollows and advancement of it's own intelligence and power, Cala would feel this longing satisfied by a Hollow it would devour. Something.... almost more fulfilling about each and every bite it took. It is impossible to tell what exactly lead to Cala coming to the realization of what this feeling was but all that Cala is aware of is the fact that some time within the last century they realized that what they were feeling, what was subconsciously making them want to hunt down these Hollows more than any others, was that even after the war had passed and other Hollows were created.... Cala could still sense the Hollows that were born fro the war, and they were the ones that Cala became obsessed with devouring.
Every time Cala devoured one of the Hollows birthed from the war they could feel something about themselves... changing, something about them growing and solidifying within themselves. Whatever this feeling was... Cala quickly became obsessed with bringing it to fruition.....
- Ascension:
As Cala's hunt for these specific Hollows continued, broken only by the necessary desire to feed to survive, Cala slowly began to realize bit by bit what it was that this feeling was. Each piece of devoured spiritual energy was like a flash of clarity, like a brief breakthrough of sunlight in a storm. Each and every Hollow that Cala devoured from the war, including Cala themselves, still possessed a vague echo of what they had lost in their death and eventual corruption.
Just as Cala had solidified the disparate voices and souls of the countless Hollows they had already fed upon into their current form, now too were they solidifying the picture, the memory, of the third world war from countless Hollows who had only the barest, shredded, animalistic remnant of memory left. Piece by agonizing piece of was dredged forth from the souls of thousands of Hollows.
A faint, aching feeling thrumming deep in Cala's chest where now only a hollow hole resided. Even as they fed on the very last Hollow they could sense that carried some essence of one from the war, their clawed hands grasped at their skull. That thrumming, aching sensation building and tensing within them, like they were trying to breathe again only to have an iron vice clamp down around their throat. Their claws dug their masked face, the feeling becoming clearer, the sensation becoming sharper. The feeling... was loss... and understanding. Anguish, despair, solitude, the feeling of having lost everything they had ever been seared through Cala's collective soul until it burnt into a focal urge to scream, they needed to scream, they HAD to scream. But they couldn't... not with the mask they wore.
With razor sharp nails digging into a white, stark mask this urge drove them to force their nails into the porcelain-like surface, forcing it to crack and splinter, break and tear before, with an agonizing wail, they mask was torn from their face. Their new voice, already hoarse and ragged as it wailed out the agony of the bits and pieces of thousands of lost loved ones who would never be remembered again, lost places they would never see, lost sensations they would never feel, all of this.... was their birth as an Arrancar.
IV. Equipment
» Equipment: N/A
V. Racial Techniques/Abilities/Skills
» Racial Abilities:
Cero of Lost Potential (All Forms): Channeling their aspect of Loss so innately Cala is able to merge their aspect with their Cero to achieve a rather crippling effect. Should Cala wish it their Cero can change from damaging a character or creature’s physical Durability and, instead, inflict ‘damage’ to any of their other General Skills. Such as robbing them of their Speed or Strength in much the same fashion as their Fade steals the energy of others.
This ability’s exact effect is to reduce the 'damaged' Skill by a 30% reduction in effectiveness that lasts a variable amount of time, depending on a comparison between Cala's Nucleo Skill and the effected target's Willpower.
If the target's Willpower is greater than Cala's Nucleo Skill, the effect lasts for the next 2 posts.
If the target's Willpower is equal to Cala's Nucleo Skill, the effect lasts for the next 3 posts.
If the target's Willpower is lower than Cala's Nucleo Skill, the effect lasts for the next 4 posts.
Subsequent hits with this type of Cero do not stack this effect but, instead, reset the duration of the effect on the target.
Fading Cero (Masked Form only): With Cala’s further refinement of their capabilities involving the inclusion of their aspects of death into their Cero expressions, they have refined the ability to use their Cero to 'spread' their aspect. Upon Cala's command their Cero can, instead of resulting in an explosion of energy or damage, break down the material and substances it comes into contact with. Acting almost as an extension of themselves the Cero can spawn Fade of it's own along it's trajectory. Resulting in a mass of Fade, potentially, the width and breadth of the Cero in question. Though Cala usually only utilizes this ability to produce smaller, more manageable patches of Fade.
Siegebreaker Bala (All Forms): Developed specifically after several encounters with other Hollows and one Mizu Morikawa Cala has seen fit to design an ability specifically for combating barriers and defensive skills such as the Hierro. These Bala, unlike normal blasts of the same name, do not explode upon impact but instead operate somewhat similarly to Cala’s Fading Cero. Except that when these Bala impact a defensive Hierro, Kido Barrier or similar ability they can spawn their own small patch of Fade to cling to the defensive barrier they impact.
Ashbringer Bala (Masked Form only): After training with Kizuna on their speed and utilizing her Bala with their Fade to empower and sustain their speed Cala has seen fit to test if they could perform the opposite and, indeed, as Cala must force their Fade to consume their own energy if they do not do such a thing this allows them the utility of ‘storing’ or ‘transporting’ their Bala through their Fade to strike from their Fade. This ability is primarily only useful if done through Fade touching Cala’s body or sword, as otherwise someone could see the Bala enter the Fade, making it much less useful as a disorienting tactic.
VI. Sealed Powers
» Zanpakutô Name: Ceniza
» Zanpakutô Appearance:
- Ceniza:
» Unique Power: Fade:
- The maximum amount of Fade Cala is able to generate is equal to the scope of their power scale ie. building, town, city etc. It is able to store energy equal to a third of their power. Any more than this and the ash is overloaded with too much energy. The transferring process takes time and requires Cala have reserves large enough to safely transfer the energy into themselves before doing so.
- Any amount or 'chunks, pieces, etc.' of this ash that are overwhelmed by another's Reaitsu or Magic are disintegrated and lost. Requiring Cala to create more.
- These clouds, forms and shapes of ash can be manipulated as if they were part of Cala's own body and attempt to break down and reduce whatever they touch to ash. Breaking down both the environment, bodies both living and dead, and others' Reaitsu/Magic/Etc. to create more of itself.
- The effect of this ash is crippling and deadly to those substantially weaker than Cala. Hindering and, eventually, deadly to those of near-equal strength and, while it would eventually effect those stronger, only various degrees of numbing to those significantly stronger. Assuming they are only exposed for a short time.
» Unique Power: Sealed Form:
Note: This ability is entirely OOC dependent on other thread participants and has no direct application for combat and is primarily used for inclusion in threads otherwise race-locked.
Edited: Having coming more to grips with their two selves Cala no longer needs to lower their Tier while in their Maskless Form.
Owing to their origin as a deceptive ambush predator this form is incredibly potent at fooling the spiritual perception of other beings, such as the Pesquisa of other Arrancar, and Cala is capable of subconsciously altering their Reiatsu in this form to make them all but indistinguishable from a Shinigami, Hollow or High-Spec Human.
» Unique Power: To Know Loss:
- As Cala advanced through their various forms from their Sealed Form their Aspect of Death begins to permeate their very being, causing Cala themselves to lose bits of themselves to their own aspect in ever-progressing ways. Each stage depriving Cala of more and more of their traditional senses as they become something more and more inhuman. However, the ability also enhances Cala's Pesquisa to compensate for the loss of more mundane senses. Making it a truly potent sensory technique.
- Currently, when Cala assumes their Base Form, their Hollow Mask growing down over their eyes actually blinds them.
VII. Resurrección
» Resereccion Release Phrase: [What do they say to release their sword? If any]
» Release Actions: [What do they do to release their sword? If any.]
» Resereccion Appearance: [Describe what their resserecion looks like. It can be written, or you can use an image. You can also use both if you want]
» Resereccion Abilities: [Explain the abilities and powers that your Arrancar gets in their form.]
I. Skill Sheet
(To Find Out about what these skills are for, please READ THIS THREAD before you try doing anything to it. After you have read it, do not fill your skills out until a staff member has graded your thread. The staff member checking your app will also give you Will Skills in which you can add to your app when approved. Click the spoiler below to see what tier gets what kind of skills.)
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- 6-Tier: Allowed all beginners.
5-Tier: Allowed all beginners.
4-Tier: Allowed 1 Adept, 3 Beginner
3-Tier: Allowed 3 Adept, 1 Beginner
2-Tier: Allowed 2 Advanced, 2 Adept
1-Tier: Allowed 1 Elite, 2 Advanced, 1 Adept
0-5 Tier: Allowed 1 Elite, 3 Advanced
NOTE: There can be exceptions you can discuss with staff if the character's themes and masteries etc, are better suited to a different configuration. Let us know when after we approve your character if something along those lines is something you want for your character. e.g If your character isn't particularly quick but the force in their strikes are massive, so you could take a hit to their speed and drop it a level in exchange for raising your strength
General Skills
- Durability: Adept
- General Speed: Adept
- Strength: Adept
- Weapon Skill: Adept
Arrancar Skills
- Cero: Adept
- Sonido: Adept
- Nucleo: Elite
- Aumentar: Adept
Will Skills
- Willpower/Determination: Adept
- Mental Deduction: Adept
- Focus: Adept
IX. Role Play Sample
» Roleplay Sample:
- Sample:
Heinrich gives Iris a small nod and returns to his seat, sitting beside Roy as he moves from the bed. At her question his lips turn up in a small smile before grabs his left gauntlet he had removed. "First, I suppose, are these. Hydraulic-locked gauntlets my father made himself. Though I'm not quite sure how to be frank, as I told Roy they are very durable and have no problem clashing with steel on a repeated basis." Heinrich locks the gauntlet back onto his forearm and after a moment, a small hiss indicates they have locked back onto his person. Shortly after, the backs of each of his hands on the gauntlets open and small mechanisms sheath his fingertips in opaque, diamond-like talons and he flexes them in the light so she can see them clearly. The odd material not just covering his fingertips but each and every finger individually, to give them more durability from parts chipping off. "Second are the talons. I know my father compares their strength to diamond but they don't quite... look right. Anyways my gauntlets are also capable of assisting my grip strength to around 200 pounds comfortably. Though that is nowhere near what it was on Roy, obviously."
After another moment or so of thought Heinrich shrugs casually "Father has put a lot of thought into some of the smaller details as well I suppose. For example... each gauntlet of mine also comes equipped with a sort of.... tether. And-..." Heinrich cuts himself off as a nurse peaks into the room, an oddly docile look marking her features. "Excuse me we h-..." suddenly a man, not quite rotund but of a stocky build with green eyes and tousled brown hair barges into the room past her. He is wearing a large brown trench-coat and carrying a clothe bundle under one arm. Meanwhile, raising his voice to the point the nurse's is lost like a single person clapping midst a hail of gunfire "Yes yes out of zhee way! Guut grief, zuch un inefficient vay of introducing people..." the man rubs his face before smoothing back his hair as far a pair of goggles atop his head will allow, his voice not seemingly genuinely agitated but instead very distracted and sharp, when his eyes meet that of the three Champions he blinks before patting a bundled erm... well mess beneath one arm and setting it down on one of the beds. His vision remaining largely on Roy and Heinrich before he speaks, a small, odd grin turning the corners of his lips "Vell son I cannot say zhou have made a bad choice in comrades.... zhough..." the man trails off before shaking his head and pulls the goggles down over his eyes and approaching Roy. Staying out of arm's reach of the young man yet peering with the intensity of someone who was trying to see a speck on the end of a pin head.
The man, Heinrich's father, peers and mutters to himself as he studies Roy like an interesting insect beneath a microscope. Heinrich, meanwhile, merely looks exasperated. "Interesting. Ze is a very shmall one iz he not? Very likely zhe result of und birth defect yes?" he waves his hand in front of his face, as if trying to clear a bad smell from the air "Inconsequenhat I tial. Vrom vhat I have seen of you young man you are very keen to using your blade yes? Vell, in zhe interest of goodvill und zhe success of my son's new team, vefore I left I set my machines to fabricate zomesing for you." Heinrich's father strides the bundle he had set down before, before Roy can say anything to respond to his very, VERY fast rate of speech and he unwraps it to reveal a sheath for a blade. Though it looks odd and knotted towards the top, yet oddly balanced for it's odd form. Walking toward Roy as he draws a blade from it, the overall length of the sheath remaining the same. "Zhis I had designed to repeat und replicate the sharpness uv a blade of zhe style of yours. Uv course it vill not be zhe same so zhese were designed with back-up in mind." the man tosses the blade down and draws another, equally long and sharp-looking blade from the same sheath. Then he replaces them both, shoving the bundle into Roy's hands "Zhere are three vull-length swords inside, as vell as two smaller vakizashi attached to the outside as part uv zhe sheath itself....."
He turns abruptly on a heel and he focuses on Iris, smiling and adjusting his goggles as he walks towards the girl, pulling a chair loudly up beside her and sits with a dull thud. "Absolutely fascinating. Pardon my dear but zou are un exquisite specimen..." Heinrich's voice cuts him off for only a fraction of a second "Father..." the older man raises a hand abruptly, his voice, amazingly, not losing the least bit of it's rapid stride. "Don't interrupt. Now...." he huffs and frowns slightly "A shame, one so unique left to these buffoonish-ly inadequate medical procedures." he waves a hand in the general direction of the rest of the hospital and snaps a finger, watching Iris' auditory response before nodding and rubbing his chin "Vell, I vill have to ask zou many, many questions at a much more ample time it seems, yes?" he reaches out, shaking her hand rather abruptly and Heinrich pinches the bridge of his nose and sighs. "Unfortunately my dear zhe gift I had in mind vor you may take a bit more time." he holds up a hand, fingers separated by a small space before he stands and dusts off the coat at the knees, though it does not look like any amount of cleaning will remove the grime stains found there.
The man smiles an odd, almost too-large smile and turns back to Roy and Heinrich, his eyes briefly flicking to his son's features before he shrugs and nods to Roy and then to Anton. Speaking quickly as he does so "Un any case, it is my understanding zou mean to allow my son to join you for zhe next hunt? Marvelous!" he does not wait for a response between the question and his assumed answer "Vell then, if zhere is nothing else I bid you all un good day und farewell." the man walks towards the door as he speaks and rounds the corner out into the hall still speaking "Ov course farewells are not forever zo until zhen auf wiedersehen and..." his voice breaks off for a second "Vhat? Yes... no, now get out of my way..." his voice trails off the further he gets until it vanishes entirely and Heinrich rubs his face. "Apologies he... is normally only like that when he is inventing..."
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Re: [Spirit Class 8 | Hazard F] Cala Paracer
Fri 15 Nov 2019, 05:56
Application Checklist
- Name [X]
- Appropriate Age [X]
- Gender [X]
- Appearance Present [X]
- Appearance Described in Appropriate Length OR Picture is Visible [X]
- Appearance is Not Claimed [X]
- 10 sentences for personality [X]
- History is of appropriate length [X]
- Powers are not Godmod/Overpowered [X]
- Powers are described reasonably enough [X]
- Application/RP Sample is not in First Person [X]
- Skills are not filled in[X]
- RP Sample Present (Omit if this is not the first character) [X]
- RP Sample is 10 sentences [X]
Will Skills
- Willpower/Determination: Adept
- Mental Deduction: Beginner
- Focus: Adept
Hazard Rankings
- Power: D
- Influence: E
- Resources: E
Comments/Notes:
Alright, this is approved, with the understanding that has been discussed in DM's. The use of Fade will be monitored closely to make sure it is not abused.
Tier: 3-5
Hazard Rating: D
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Re: [Spirit Class 8 | Hazard F] Cala Paracer
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Re: [Spirit Class 8 | Hazard F] Cala Paracer
Sat 17 Sep 2022, 06:36
[mod]
This is fine, just make a note of it in the abilities section rather than in the appearance.
These will need to be updated to the modern Arrancar skill sheets, found here: https://www.platinumhearts.net/t22897-arrancar-racial-information
Did you want to add a resurreccion to this character? Those are typically default for an Arrancar.
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While in this form Cala appears to others' senses as a Tier below their actual Tier.
This is fine, just make a note of it in the abilities section rather than in the appearance.
Skills
These will need to be updated to the modern Arrancar skill sheets, found here: https://www.platinumhearts.net/t22897-arrancar-racial-information
Resurreccion
Did you want to add a resurreccion to this character? Those are typically default for an Arrancar.
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Re: [Spirit Class 8 | Hazard F] Cala Paracer
Sun 18 Sep 2022, 14:19
Updates made.
And no to the Resurreccion on creation. Cala is made for a climb to the top and will discover it in-character. I appreciate the offer though.
And no to the Resurreccion on creation. Cala is made for a climb to the top and will discover it in-character. I appreciate the offer though.
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Re: [Spirit Class 8 | Hazard F] Cala Paracer
Mon 19 Sep 2022, 06:58
[mod]In the Racial Techniques, you have additional Hollow skills put down. However, all of those skills fall under Hollow Nucleus in the Arrancar skill section. Due to this, the additional skills have to be removed, but you are able to make note of Cala having any particular better usage of certain Hollow skills. This also means that you will have to change the skill level of Cala's Hollow Nucleus to match your Hollow skills.[/mod]
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Re: [Spirit Class 8 | Hazard F] Cala Paracer
Mon 19 Sep 2022, 07:06
Done and Done.
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Re: [Spirit Class 8 | Hazard F] Cala Paracer
Mon 19 Sep 2022, 07:09
[mod]You did not remove the additional skills. I meant that you have to remove them, but you can include like a paragraph for them that gives a description of how well Cara can utilize that specific ability.[/mod]
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Re: [Spirit Class 8 | Hazard F] Cala Paracer
Mon 19 Sep 2022, 07:47
Removed them, misunderstood the original response.
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Re: [Spirit Class 8 | Hazard F] Cala Paracer
Mon 19 Sep 2022, 07:51
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Comments/Notes: No Ress?
Tier: 5-1
Hazard Rating: F[/mod]
« Application Checklist »
- Name [X]
- Appropriate Age [X]
- Gender [X]
- Appearance Present [X]
- Appearance Picture is Visible [X]
- Appearance is Not Claimed [X]
- 10 sentences for personality [X]
- History is of appropriate length [X]
- Powers are not Godmod/Overpowered [X]
- Powers are described reasonably enough [X]
- Application/RP Sample is not in First Person [X]
- Skills are not filled in (Omit if a Hollow)[X]
- RP Sample Present (Omit if this is not the first character) [X]
[]RP Sample is 10 sentences [X]
Hazard Rankings
- Power: E
- Influence: F
- Resources: F
Comments/Notes: No Ress?
Tier: 5-1
Hazard Rating: F[/mod]
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