Judas Iscariot

Thu Oct 24, 2019 9:10 am

Judas Of Piety

Judas Iscariot

» Name: Judas Iramasha Iscariot
» Titles: Judas Of Piety, The Trickster, The Joker, Seeker Of Darkness,
» Iramasha Age: 2200
» Regular Age: 22
» Gender: None (She/Her pronouns)
» Affiliation/Rank: Will work for anyone if her goals are aligned, and betray anyone once her goals are accomplished. She can work for the side of good or evil.

» Type: Hybrid

» Physical Appearance Image:

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I. Personality Traits

» Personality:

» Clever & Swindle: Judas is strikingly smart and clever. They have the capabilities to digest information, in order for it to be straightforward and simple. Picking up on certain patterns of other people's behavior, or notice some inconsistencies in certain tasks. Judas is smart enough to pick out details no matter how complex they are. He can pick up on someone else's flaws in the smoothest of ways, that most people may not pick up on until Judas openly states that they're flawed and inconsistent. While Judas is good at pointing out details, he is also good at coming up with unique plans in sticky situations. Judas cooks up some swift plans that may have errors in them, such as loses that needed to be made in order for it to succeed. Judas never promises that her plans will be flawless, and perfect. They believe that to achieve and gain something, a loss has to follow through. As a clever and intelligent being, Judas is also deceptive and swindle. Tying in with her intelligence, Judas can potentially lie and deceive his way around in his life. Fooling others into believing him and being slick about it. Judas is much like a snake who can't be trusted.

» Opprtunist & Mysterious: Judas is an opportunist and waits out the moments in any given time, in order to plan out her actions. Judas likes to seek out opportunities, whether it be the opportunity to grow that can help achieving her goals a lot quickly or join an organization. Judas takes an opportunity in order to help themselves in accomplishing certain goals. Along with her ability to seek out good opportunities to grow, Judas is also a mysterious person behind her carefree, jokingly good hearted nature. There's no telling what goes on in the head of Judas Iscariot. Best be on your toes so you won't get caught off guard by her carefree nature.

» Traitor & Wrathful: Judas has obtained both sins throughout her life, thanks to her mother. They harbor a deep sin in which, Judas may betray someone in any given moment. No matter if they're in an organization, or betraying someone that they care about. This deep rooted sin is tied to her curse as an opportunist. Judas strives to search and find any possible ways to gain something. If that person or organization has something that Judas wants. They'll offer her service until they get the thing they're after, and be out of her way. Leaving any type of built up relationship into the dust, like nothing happened. Judas mother is marked as a traitor by the Demons, after the union's establishment many centuries ago. Judas also carries a sin, the sin of wrath. Behind her carefree nature is a well hidden emotion. Anger, rage, frustration. They have this negative emotions that were harbored by her father, who embodies anything that is evil. Judas is good at hiding her anger, but it can be triggered once the conditions are met. When coming to a conclusion as to whether or not they should betray someone. Judas comes to the point that they can't think properly, and tends to become angered by the sin that they were forced to carry. Throughout the 200 years of living.

» Jokester & Know it all: Judas is a person who enjoys a good joke. They'll oftentimes make fun of someone, whether it be the person's appearance or in some field that said person is lacking in. They also like to joke about the situation they're in. Judas comes off as a less serious person, and people have a habit of underestimating him. Judas is also a know it all. They like to accumulate as much information into something as soon as possible. They've obtained the habit of going into detail, and dragging things on. Forgetting to reach the point of what something is. Judas tends to get caught up in the things they're interested in.

» Helpful & Selfish: Judas is a helpful person and doesn't have an issue in being of service for someone. Helping someone makes them feel good, but also fears that helping someone won't gain much out of anything. At least things that are important. As much as they're helpful, Judas is also a selfish person. When they help and serve people, they only do it because they see that her may lay an opportunity amongst this service that Judas offers to people. Judas is greedy in order to keep it short and simple.

» Passionate & Carefree: Judas holds some sort of passion in the things that they do, whether it be the passion in nature, information collecting or one of her hobbies. The passion for slaying demons. They hold great care in the things they're passionate about, and doesn't tolerate it if people were to tarnish the things that Judas cares about. Judas is a carefree person, despite knowing that they hold many troubles in her life. Judas doesn't worry a lot about them, until the moment of worry comes. In intense situations they don't feel anxiety about it. They don't freeze up because some big muscled, cocky loser flexes on her terf. They brush her worries off, and focus at the task at hand. Judas doesn't care about losing something, so long as they know that they will gain something in the end.

I. Character History

» History

Deirdre and Skathi were in the middle of playing a game of chess. They've played this game for hours. Skathi would always win because of Skathi's intellectual prowess. These two played chess as the two would make a bet that'll change her lives. Skathi bets that if Deirdre loses one more game, Skathi would have the right to feed off of Deirdre's family. Skathi was a maleficent demon. Skathi wanted to feed off of her kind, because one of them killed his father. If Deirdre would win, Deirdre wanted to hide her identity as an angel and start a new life. That was something that she wanted, and Skathi was the one that would be able to grant that wish. He was strong and had a strong sense of justice. Why would an angel set herself up for marriage? Perhaps some hidden connection that she once had with his father. She wasn't aware of the death of skathi's father, and acted out on revenge. However, Deirdre wanted to settle it in a peaceful and formal manner. A game of chess to decide things. To keep things short and sweet. Deridre used her Trump card, and released her true nature and frightened power. A power that Skathi couldn't fathom. This would put him in his place, as she turned the tides and assert herself against a cocky, foolish, yet sweet demon. Skathi acknowledge her allegiance and graciousness. So Skathi let her win, via getting intimidated. The two would marry months after her childest dispute. Deridre hid her identity and resided in the demon realm, and gave birth to the young Judas.

When Judas was young and still a child, the two strange couples often wondered, and worried about the fate of the newborn. Skathi predicted that they may come to a point in her life, that they would make a great choice. A choice in which Judas will have to lose something or someone. Something or someone that is precious to them. Deirdre also wondered about the fate of her newborn. What worried Skathi the most is the identity of Judas. Before Judas was born, the two couples couldn't decide which gender that the baby would be born as. Skathi wanted a proud and strong young boy. Deirdre wanted a girl. Skathi wasn't too happy with the results, as Judas had qualities of a girl.

Judas at the time wasn't aware of her mother's heritage, until one day he will. Judas had made some friends in the demon realm, and oftentimes gets called a trickster and a liar who pulls pranks on others. Judas picked up some old habits that her father had.

By the time Judas had reached a mature enough age to go out on her own, and began exploring her opportunities. What they can do with her life, and what goals they can set up. In order to get strong and be seen by the other demons as a well capable, figure rather than a house pet. Judas father tasked Judas to find his old friend, who hided out in a cave in the deeper layers of the demon realm. It was a tricky task to pull off, because not many of her kind weren't skilled or too young. Those weak and young ones ended up being mauled, by familiars summoned by high ranked demons or any hostile creatures. Judas needed to be prepared for the worse case scenario, if Judas has any hopes of living. her fathers friend, aife was known as a woman who groomed young warriors in order to become strong and fierce demons. Embracing her pupils heritage as a demon. She was also known to give out gruesome training that has a high possibility of one dying from them. Judas father didn't tell them the important, and scary parts about aife.

Judas set out her journey to the lower layers of the demon realm. Each time they went below, the air became thicker and creatures became more hostile. Judas had her weapon that was given to him, in order to protect themselves from the harsh nature of the demon realm. This mission took at least weeks to complete. However, after nearly dying due to starvation and dehydration. They completed her task. Judas came across this cave. Judas eyes met a wide array of weapons that were collected from countless of wars. These weapons were all well conditioned, after being abused by its wielder. The person who fixed the weapons, made it looked like they were as good as new. Judas was struck in awe by the wide range of weapons. Judas eyes would also meet many creatures, ranging from boars to even a dragon. her heads were used as display. Some of her skin and bones were made as house appliance. Aife knew how to keep herself comfortable, while living out here in the sticks. Aife was aware of Judas arrival and why they were here in the first place.

Aife was a difficult woman to persuade as Judas threatened her by grabbing one of the swords that were laying on the ground. Judas bravery and strength is what led them to her, and wasn't going to go back and be daddy's little angel without a fair fight. Aife was amused by the young demons desire to gain strength. Judas told her that they didn't care how hard the tasks are. Judas only cared that, as long as they gain the strength behind it. Aife took note of Judas willingness to give themselves to her in exchange for strength. Judas long training course commenced. her training described by her father, was true. It was troublesome and life threatening. He never promised that things would be easy, and in order to be strong in his presence. Judas needed some commitment. Judas was promised three wishes, if they were to succeed in her training.

These wishes were: Knowledge about the demon realm, a unique technique taught by yours truly, and a the ability to create a companion. One that would be by Judas side no matter what. Judas training course had abruptly took many years, before completion. It was unexpected and they weren't aware of how long her training would take. They were too caught up by the many task that they were put through. Time was irrelevant to Judas at the moment. Throughout the years of getting themselves killed in different occasions. Judas was now tasked with the last, and final challenge. They were challenge to kill her mother. in order to do this, they needed to release any sort of connection with her. The reason aife was tasked to kill her own mother, was because she is marked as a traitor. Judas father was ordered to kill his wife by the higher ups in the demon realm, because she lied and deceived others. She was secretly an Angel. She was a spy sent by an anonymous organization to mask herself as a demon, and stayed in the demon realm for hundred and thousands of years. She almost forgot who she was at one point, until the time came to act now. This news became too sudden for Judas. If they were a true demon and not a mongrel to the demon race. A burden to her own kind. Judas was put to the test to see if Judas beliefs were real. Judas father couldn't bring himself to kill the woman that he thought he once loved. This gruesome trial was meant to mold Judas into a proud demon, a true warrior.

Aife suggested that Judas should take some time to think. The young petrified Judas was shook by the unexpected news, and at such an event that they couldn't think straight. It took months for Judas to think about this, and time was running out. The demons found out about an intruder when the higher ups called for an investigation, as a suspect had done away one of her troops and destroyed one of the guard posts in the realm. A white shining feather was what was left of the evidence. Someone let in an angel. After the news began spreading like wildfire. Judas came at a decision and decided that they should be the one to end the life of this treacherous angel. The angel who fooled most of the demons throughout all these years.

Judas was well taught by the shadowy warrior known as aife. Judas was given the right to slay her mother. Judas had led himself back to the upper layers. Judas met her mother who was about to flee. She was caught red handed, and many creatures surrounded her. However they made way for Judas, as Judas friends and her father would feast upon this unexpected event. Judas mother was strong, but due to the influence of the demon realm. Her angelic state was weakened, because of her long stay. The two battled as if they didn't know each other. The battle dragged on for hours, until a conclusion was made. Judas became the victor. However, Judas didn't kill her mother in the end. They instead plucked her wings off, as if they were flowers being pulled from the ground. Her severely damaged body would rot in the depths of hell. This was her punishment for becoming a traitor.

Judas showed signs of piety and embraced her heritage, despite being a mongrel. A half breed. They'd forget that Judas was ever born by a spy. Thanks to her heroism and act of justice. Judas fulfilled her task, and finished her training. Judas would receive the 3 wishes that they were promised.

I. Ether Morph - World Fusion

(You can have this release at any Aether Control, but it is recommended you have it at master for it to be stable.)

» Ether Morph World Fusion Incantation (Is there any sort of phrase used to unlock her Ether Morph? This is optional.)

» Ether Morph World Fusion Appearance (What does your Iramasha look like during her release?)

» Ether Morph World Fusion Abilities (What abilities does your Iramasha gain, or approve in during this release?)

I. Ether Morph - Peak Eclipse

(You can have this release at any Aether Control after 0-3, but it is recommended you have it at grand master for it to be stable.)

» Ether Morph Peak Eclipse Incantation (Is there any sort of phrase used to unlock her Ether Morph? This is optional.)

» Ether Morph Peak Eclipse Appearance (What does your Iramasha look like during her release?)

» Ether Morph Peak Eclipse Abilities (What abilities does your Iramasha gain, or approve in during this release?)

I. Skill Sheets

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General Skills

Durability: Elite/Advanced/Adept/Trained/Beginner/Untrained
General Speed: Elite/Advanced/Adept/Beginner/Untrained
Strength: Elite/Advanced/Adept/Beginner/Untrained
Weapon Skill: Elite/Advanced/Adept/Beginner/Untrained

Iramasha Skill Sheet

Aether Control: Elite/Advanced/Adept/Beginner/Untrained
Aether Magic: Elite/Advanced/Adept/Beginner/Untrained
Aether Arts: Elite/Advanced/Adept/Beginner/Untrained
Aether Stones: Elite/Advanced/Adept/Beginner/Untrained

Will Skills

Willpower/Determination: Elite/Advanced/Adept/Beginner/Untrained
Mental Deduction: Elite/Advanced/Adept/Beginner/Untrained
Focus: Elite/Advanced/Adept/Beginner/Untrained

[WILL SKILLS ARE NOT FILLED IN UNTIL A MOD/ADMIN REVIEWS YOUR APP]

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Equipment & Abilities

Enter Judas Abilities

» Natural Abilities

Liar Liar pants on fire - Judas was born as a trickster, who can lie, deceive and trick others into believing them. Judas is a very sly character who uses others, and her words to give Judas the better hand in fooling people. They have a natural affinity to flipping and manipulating truths and lies. Making it difficult to believe what is real, and what isn't.

My master plan! - Judas is good at planning and figuring out what to do in a situation. Judas isn't the type to believe in miracles, as they're the type to base things off of pure instincts and intuition. Some may think that her ideas are stupid, and tend to doubt Judas brilliant mind. Judas has the capability to squeeze out of tight situations, even if it means that they'll have to sacrifice something in order to get the best results.

Arts and crafts - Judas is a crafty fellow who knows how to make things, with the right tools. Judas can make things like origami, they can also use other objects and make art out of them. Such as creating a sculpture out of nothing but rocks. They can potentially create hundreds of statutes of your beloved for Valentines Day, albeit a slight fee must be paid in order to make it look like a brilliant masterpiece.

While you were out hunting hollows, I studied the blade - Judas is oftentimes good at using bladed weapons, such as swords. They are capable of dual wielding blades, and create unique techniques out of them. Judas can even carry a sword in her mouth, and give birth to a weird, random, yet effective way of fighting off other opponents who studies the blade.

Exsuplosion! - Judas is like a semi angry terrorist who wants everything and everyone go out with a bang. Judas has acquired knowledge on how to make explosives, such as grenades, flash bangs, c4s, anything that is loud enough that can cause your ear drums to eradicate.

Angel and Demon languages - Judas is able to communicate and understand the languages of both angels and demons, because her mother is an angel and her father is a demon. Judas is somewhat fluent in the language of angels, but knows more of the native demon tongue.

Hand to hand combat - Judas uses her control of aether in combat. She mostly uses abilities outside of close combat, but she doesn't find it too troublesome to get close and personal. She knows some basic forms of combat, and relies on her feet. Kicking her opponents and giving her opponent some space. She can also use some grappling moves when an opponent tries to go for a punch or a kick. Quickly grabbing either part of their body, and start putting them in submissions.

I. Equipment Section

» Equipment (Does your Iramasha have weapons or other type of equipment in which aids them in battle? Do they have any extra items that your Iramasha keep on them? If so -- post them!)

I. Racial Abilities & Skills

» Aether Magic

Shadow Clone Creation

One of Judas usages of magic is the ability to cast and manipulate darkness. Through the use of her aether energy, they can create clones of themselves that feed on existing sources of aether energy. By the act of consumption of energy, her clones are able to stay active, and have solid forms. These clones are merely play things, Judas uses her clones to fight for them while Judas goes off to do other things. Judas can split her clones into three versions of herself. Her powers can be seen activated by noticing the dark sinister aura that radiates from her body.

Judas power is split into those three clones, and her tier is cut down by each of those three times. Meaning she had cut her power three times, in order to use them. Her clones can remain active for four posts, before going back to the user. Her clones are link to her subconscious, and knows where they are. If one of her clones are killed, she would receive back less energy. Judas clones can travel in the range of 30 meters. They have the ability to communicate with each other, and their opponent.

» Aether Arts Techniques & Abilities
Art is an explosion - The ability in which Judas can utilize her aether magical capabilities, and transform the energy they have within them in order to produce and manipulate explosives. By combining her unique usage of crafting different forms of material, mainly soft material like clay. Judas can infuse her energy into that clay, and form bombs. The clay that Judas uses, they can manipulate the shape and size of it with the help of her magical energy, her clay a distinctive royal purple color. Judas can increase the size to where the clay could be as large as a hot air balloon. Judas can simultaneously shape and manipulate the clay in any way they want it to look. They can make her clay look like an average human clay puppet made out of explosives. Using such a trick to fool her opponents, making them assume it's an actual person. Unless you're one of those special snowflakes who can't be easily fooled by childish things. Judas can also shape her clay into existing weapons that would fit in your pocket, like a knife or anything that is seen as deadly to an average human being, such as swords, spears, anything that exists. Judas has the ability to create it. Judas can create a large mass of Clay and shape it into animals, mainly a bird. They can only create a bird made out of clay, that can be used as transportation.

While Judas has the capabilities to create, shape, and manipulate clay. Using them as explosives. The amount of clay that they can produce from aether, varies. It takes a bit of time to come up with abstract ideas that can blow you away. These ideas that Judas come up with may use up some of her energy, and takes a post to make. Depending on the size and the complexity behind the things they make. Likewise the size of her clay can only reach the same size as a hot air balloon, and that only applies when Judas makes her bird for transportation. When he uses her clay to make a bird, said bird can be used for 3 posts before making it again. Another thing with her clay puppet is that they can only make 2,and if they were to copy the appearance of someone. Judas has to at least see the person before being able to create it. Tiers equal to Judas and higher are capable to spot the fakes, but tiers lower will have a hard time telling what's real and what isn't. She produce 2 things of clay per 2 posts.

Bomb Transmutation - Without the need to use her clay to make them simply explode, Judas is able to use her energy to make any inanimate object that they touch, and turn it into a bomb. Judas is capable of turning inanimate objects into explosives, and in order to detonate it. Judas has to perform a hand motion as if they were pressing a remote. Using her index fingers middle section, and using her thumb to press it. Anyone who is caught touching the object, in which Judas infused her energy with bombs. That person will receive damage based on the tier of the user.

Judas can only denote one object at a time. The object in which they planted her energy in, also has to be within range before they can detonate it. The range of her ability is approximately 23 meters in diameter. Judas can choose to denote the object without having her opponent actively engaging it. However, the opponent has to be within range before Judas can denote it. The range of this is 10 feet. Altogether they can use her ability again after 2 posts. Cant effect spiritual infused inanimate objects like a zanpakuto.

» Aether Stones:

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Abilities

Enter Judas Abilities

» Aether Class

» Aether Class Name: Arrivederci

» Aether Class Power:

Judas uses her hand to hand combat experience and sprinkles it with a bit of aether magic. The results of this combination, gives birth to the power of generating zippers. Yes zippers, those things that keeps shut, like a doorway. Enabling the said zipper to open and close things, just by grabbing the metal part of the zipper and sealing an exposed part up. By combining the use of generating zippers, she can punch a solid surface or any inanimate object, and spawn a zipper. Judas can use her zippers to store objects, or herself into the exposed section in which she made contact with.

When she does so, this case the solid surface or object in question, to create a sort of dimensional portal. She uses her zippers to create a dimensional space, by opening them with her punch. Allowing her to travel through the dimensional space. For her to do so, there must be a connected path in which she would like to travel to if she were to use this method of using her ability. There must already be an existing zipper that she made, that would connect like a path. Without there being another pathway, she'll just swim in an endless pit of dark space.

She can also cause zippers to spawn on herself, allowing Judas to avoid attacks that are aimed at a specific location of her body. If someone were to try and cut off her arm, she would have to act fast by making contact with her arm and using a free hand. Doing this allows her to sever the arm without causing subliminal damage, and reattach it back together.

Judas can remain in the subspace for 3 posts, if she goes beyond that limit--she'll begin to feel as though she's drowning, losing oxygen. Forcing her to eject from that subspace. The reach of her zippers are approximately the same size as a door, 6 feet and 8 inches. She can only dive into the subspace once per 3 posts, and can only do so through traveling or an attempt to escape the enemy. She can only cross through subspace in order to reach to the other end of the zipper in which she placed, meaning if she punched the surface using the zipper to travel, and a zipper in her range that's connected to another solid structure, like a wall to a building. The range in which she can travel is 25 meters. Her enemy can stop her from using her zippers, by preventing her from aiming them. Meaning they'd have to block and parry her attempts, rushing in before she can make an attempt. It would leave her vulnerable if she's more focused on using her zippers, rather than her opponent. The zippers last for 2 posts, and the zippers can be broken by destroying the surface that she's using. She'd have to use her zippers on a fixed and smooth surface.

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» Sub-Aether Class Abilities

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I. Aether Armament

Aether Armament Name: Moonslice

Aether Armament Appearance:

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Aether Armament Abilities:

Moonslice's ability allows the sword to absorb the damage and continuous blows that is dealt, by its opponent. When the opponent is striking the sword accumulates and boosts Judas attack power by a tier. The sword can become unstable to wield if overwhelmed by higher force of power, which can cause the sword to overheat. Unable for Judas to hold it, for three posts.

VII. Ether Morph - Immersion

» Ether Morph Immersion Incantation

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» Ether Morph Immersion Appearance

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» Ether Morph Immersion Abilities

Tricksters Dimensional Space -

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In her ether morph form, Judas can summon her dimensional space with the help of her zipper ability. When she uses it, she and her opponent would then be dragged inside of her dimension, like a vacuum sucking up with filth. In this dimension is what one could call her private room, where the items she collected throughout the years is in her room. Drifting and floating in a dark area, where nothing but her, her guest and the platform in which they stand on exists. This form of space represents Judas desire to create a world where nothing exists, where non living beings exists on this empty plain. She wishes to create a space filled with things that are pure, and holy. Revealing her angelic side, while her other side is plunged in nothing but darkness. Her demonic half. The pure and holy things are the items that she collected, such as good luck charms, holy water, pictures and frames of religious figures. Her other side, the side of the demon is the dark empty space. The only thing that supports her and the opponent is the white platform, and the solid metal constructs surrounding said platform.

There are two ways that the opponent can escape from her dimensional space. One way is by damaging the space directly, by pouring out enough spiritual energy to break the space. Can be done by simply going into their form for one post, or by waiting four posts before reverting back into the real world. Items and objects in her space, works the same as they would in the real world

Illusion casting - Judas can cast illusions in her ether form. These illusions are mainly the kind of illusions that cause certain effects that it has on the enemy. She can cast after images when she moves around, causing the opponent to see things that aren't there. When she moves around, slight blurs would appear that look like Judas. These blurs appear like her dark shadow clones, but only used to trick the opponent, by manipulating their sense of sight. They're short a brief, like a blink of an eye. They can be used to avoid attacks, and only increases her speed when she uses it. The cool down of this ability is three posts.

Fake Replica - Another part of her illusion casting capabilities, is that she can use the reflection of her sword, moonslice and summon a replica of her opponent to fight against the real one. The swords reflection must however reveal the face of the opponent, before her sword can cast the spell. After the image of her opponent is caught within her sword, she would then perform a slicing motion in the air. Summoning a fake version of her opponent.

Judas can use her fake replica on her target, once per thread ability, and once per target. After her cool down she can choose to use it on a different target. The replicas lasts for four posts, and they're the same durability as the judas tier.

Note: The ability that the fake replica copies can be chosen by the characters owner in ooc

Familiar Creation - By using the power of darkness, Judas can summon up to one creature that she had faced in her life. She would need to sacrifice the existing dark clones she casted, in order to create this special familiar. She believes that necessary sacrifices can give birth to new, and unique possibilities. Sacrificing her supporters, (the shadow clones) that helped her in battle by merging and fusing the darkness together to form a unique being. This creature is only active for 2 posts, and goes on a cool down of four.

The creature that Judas summons has the capability in detonating itself through Judas consciousness. The creature that Judas created is a 7 foot tall, big beefy muscled mutant. It makes use of its buff figure by charging towards its enemies, like a mindless brute. It doesn't contain any unique abilities outside of using itself as a bomb and using it's hardened skin as defense. Making this mutant like beast, difficult to take down.

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Sun Oct 27, 2019 10:44 am

Application Checklist

Name [X]
Appropriate Age [X]
Gender [X]
Appearance Present [X]
Appearance Described in Appropriate Length OR Picture is Visible [X]
Appearance is Not Claimed [X]
10 sentences for personality [X]
History is of appropriate length [X]
Powers are not Godmod/Overpowered [O]
Powers are described reasonably enough [O]
Application/RP Sample is not in First Person [X]
Skills are not filled in[X]

Comments/Notes:
Overall, good attempt, and the core concepts of everything should be fine. The ability I am the least clear about is Familiar Creation. If you have any questions about the check, let me know.

You may want to consider adding a roleplay sample to give us an idea of how strong you expect for this character to be. Whether you do or not is up to you.

History
"Judas father tasked Judas to find his old friend, who hided out in a cave in the deeper layers of the demon realm. It was a tricky task to pull off, because not many demons weren't skilled or too young."

This seems to say that many demons of the demon world were not skilled or were too young, which most likely is not actually the case. Just specify that it refers to the group of demons that Judas/her father belonged to.

"Judas was bestowed the right to slay her mother, in the honor of the demon race."

Similarly, that's not a… tradition with PH demons. You could say she was given the right to slay her mother, keeping the tradition of unholy striking down holy, or something like that. "Knowledge about the demon realm, a unique technique taught by yours truly, and a loving companion. " What does the loving companion refer to? Her companion creation ability?

Arrivederci
How can someone stop/prevent the zippers from being used on a surface? How long can she remain in the subspace? Should specify a (relative) amount of time it usually takes her to make a zipper and dive into it. She should not be able to dive into the subspace arbitrarily; that would be functionally equivalent to combat teleportation, which is extremely restricted. Need a range on how far the zippers can reach. Judas should not be able to use it to cross between dimensions, for example. How can people detect it? How to break the zippers/how long do they last after creation in terms of posts?

Aether Armament
The attack back cannot be of the same tier as the opponent. Can be significantly stronger relative Judas' power, but relative to the opponent. 'blows it deals, by its opponent' should be 'blows it is dealt by the opponent'. Need to explain what happens when the sword is overwhelmed (Ie she gets in over her head) It should not be able to block everything.

Trickster's Dimensional Space (may have already been addressed)
Number 1 question: how does someone get out of this space?
Number 2 question: Should mention that everything there behaves as it would in the real world.

Fake Replica
What do you mean by OOC's choosing? Should be a once per thread ability per target, can have the cooldown time out to be used on a new target, though. How long will they last/how durable are the replicas? If they aren't based off of the opponent's tier, how strong are they?

Familiar Creation
Needs further description/limitations. What do you mean by creature? What kinds of abilities would it have? Maybe like the ability to explode, like your character is able to do with her Aether energy, things like that.

Art is an explosion
Is the clay colored?
Should describe roughly how much clay can be made per post.

Bomb Transmutation
Should not work on spiritually-infused inanimate items like Zanpakuto, etc.

Shadow Clone Creation
Should be linked back to Aether energy instead of some unidentified 'dark energy'. If it's evenly split between the three, then you should mention how she controls them. Is it one hive mind, or is each piloted by an individual conscious? Also, what happens when one is defeated or killed? What's the radius they can be controlled at from Judas herself?]

Aether Magic
Is there a reason this picture is here?

Tier: TBD

Sun Oct 27, 2019 6:08 pm

Fixed the abilities

Mon Oct 28, 2019 10:38 am

Application Checklist

Name [X]
Appropriate Age [X]
Gender [X]
Appearance Present [X]
Appearance Described in Appropriate Length OR Picture is Visible [X]
Appearance is Not Claimed [X]
10 sentences for personality [X]
History is of appropriate length [X]
Powers are not Godmod/Overpowered [X]
Powers are described reasonably enough [X]
Application/RP Sample is not in First Person [X]
Skills are not filled in[X]
RP Sample Present (Omit if this is not the first character) [X]
RP Sample is 10 sentences [X]

Will Skills

Willpower/Determination: Adept
Mental Deduction: Adept
Focus: Advanced

Hazard Rankings

Power: C
Influence: E
Resources: E

Comments/Notes:
I will be tentatively approving this. Use these abilities responsibly.

Tier: 3-3
Hazard Rating: D

Mon Dec 06, 2021 9:17 pm

[adm]Archiving for inactivity. Please speak to staff if you would like this unarchived.[/adm]

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