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zetsurin
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Danava Information

» Name:Kinu shūchaku =鬼怒執着
鬼怒 are derived from Kinugawa River
執着 is from fixated
» Titles:
» Age: it is unknon even to her how old she is. but has ben walking the world for 4 years
» Gender:
» Affiliation/Rank:

» Shifter Appearance Written:
»Heterochromia: One eye being red but the other being yellow

»Hair: Kinu hair color is a long dark lustrous black that she keeps in twintails.

»Favorite outfit: A Gothic Lolita style dress with detached sleeves, it almost looks like royalty with its crimson and black color scheme with matching collar on her neck.

»Body type: Hourglass

»Skin complexion: Pale white

{Body Measurements}
Bust 36 80cm/Tot 85.Waist 24.Hip34.105Lbs.





» True Appearance Written:
an almost armor-like skin purple in color but with red rune-like marks all over it that flow down her extremities. the red marks on her hands make them almost claw-like.there is also several parts of her body with a blade like a feature sticking out from them. tho they are Extremely hard to the touch that also seems to bend with her movements. most notably they are on her arms and all the way down her side.

» True Appearance Picture:









Personality
She in her own mind is sweet kind and loving and see's her own affection as "true affection". An affection that is much stronger than any others. that won't stop and that she won't allow anyone to belittle or get in the way of.

She can be more at times acting cute and innocent.keeping a smiling face and happy energy about her while talking to people in a playful way. but IF anyone else pull attention of the item of her affection away from her, jealousy is soon to follow and she will attempt to retake that attention at any cost.

She doesn't really care if the affection is one-sided.It matters very little in fact as her love is enough for both of them and HER LOVE is absolutely to die for.

ITS ONLY NORMAL TO WANT TO BE NEAR THE ONE YOU LOVE RIGHT !?! She some times walks home with the one she loves without them knowing... and watches them thru the window.. just until she installs cameras in there home. after that, she stays nearby and watches thru a small handheld device or her laptop. some may call this stalking but she sees it as the ultimate bond of love. She also likes to hide tracking and GPS things on her fixation.. by putting it on there clothing, in their cell or even implanting it in their body given the chance. JUST AS A precaution of cors

at times when she does not have a target Kinu tents to be unattached to the world. It is at times to the point that she can't seem to relate to other people or events going on around her. This comes off as a lack of interest and lack of caring but is more on the side of emotional detachment. Without a target for her feelings, Kinu has strong trouble accessing or experiencing them. she holds them inside and does not express them much out of fear that it could scare off her potential target before she latches on to them her self. This would mean waste efforts on her part. what she seeks most is to be attached to someone deeply. Failing to attach to someone that she directed her feelings at IS the worst pain she can feel from her own point of view. as it means she has let someone get a closer connection to her that was not someone who she targeted to spend all eternity as part of her.

» Likes: feeling love, being in love, the attention of the one she loves. being near the one she loves. knowing all about the one she loves. THE ONE SHE LOVES DIEING BY HER.


» Dislikes:ANY one other than the one she loves. anything getting in her way. Other talking to the one she loves. others being alone with the one she loves.

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History

Kinu remembers darkness. Unending darkness that she was in. she was all alone with thoughts dancing in her head of how one day she falls in love and be with that person tell the end. she could not really move or maybe she did not have a body yet, the memory is a bit clouded but she remembers feeling trapped and all alone.

from time to time she hears voices in her head of other people." IF he was my boyfriend id never let him go." " I would do anything to make her mine." the voices alone was one thing but they always come with images and feelings attached."HOW could he cheat on me WASN'T I enough for him!" "I Caught her with another man and I just snapped..I... I killed them both." lots of voices and feelings from an untold number of people. her own consciousness feeding off their longing for others and mostly the negative thought on how to keep or get the one they wanted. soon other thoughts from people started entering her to. ones that were crazy by nature. The thoughts of lonely people who fantasize of having a partner that would do anything for them, that would die for them, that would kill for them.

At first, there were just the odd thoughts of main males that were out of touch with reality. this group has ideas that were twisted my media such and games and visual novels. Without knowing it Kinu started to enjoy there fantasizing and even placing her self in them with the other person. But as time went on and demons are come known a new rush happens. People wished for a demon partner. one that was cute and crazy at the same time. one that would take care of them and their troubles even if that meant being violent. in fact, a lot of them really got into detail with the violent things they have her do. butchering Exes like livestock. ripping bully's limb from limb and bathing in the blood than acting lovey-dovey with them. Attacking anyone who tried to come between them tell they were nothing more than a lump of cut-up meat laying in a ditch on the side of the road.

One day her eyes opened... she never knew they were shut.. maybe she did not have them before, but now she could see! she could move! she could FEEL! not from the thoughts of others but for her self, by her self. looking around all she could see was a dimly light room with little furnishings to speak of. where she was laying there was crude symbols marked on the floor and even more on the walls, and a sweet smell.. so lovely it made her mouth water.

looking around, scanning the room with her eyes to find the source of this smell she saw him. a boy bleeding out onto the floor. this young lad had tried to summon a demon... no that's not right he did not try as he was successful. but the spell had recoiled on him and ripped his abdomen wide open and was now dying. her body was still a very week from its formation and she could barely manage to crawl over to him. the boy's eyes were fading in and out. as he spoke to her. "haha ... I did it. I finally was able to make you really..." Boy coughing up some blood that just lightly flowed down from his lips. "But I guess it does not matter much now... I am going to die alone like I always thought I would.." She moves in and lay on top of his body staring him in the eyes. "silly doesn't say that. I am here ant I?" she places her index finger over his lips. "you should not waste what little energy you have left ok? We should spend it enjoying each other's company right? yes, you're going to die... but you are not alone.. and you will never be alone again."

once the boy's life faded from him and his body and soul were separated the now plus was standing by her crying."Why do you cry for? yes you're dead now but didn't I say we would be together forever?" the boy looking at her would smile. " you mean you are ok with me being a ghost? you will stay with me even like this?" with a giggling smile Kinu replayed. " My love is without end or limits. when I say forever I mean it. you and I will never be apart." the plus begins to laugh as he hugged on to her. "Yes from now till the end of time w-" Kinu intruded him. "We will always BE ONE." as she bit into him. her arms tho still not at full strength were more than capable of restraining the boy's soul as she devoured it. the screams of pain from his ghostly body getting eaten going unheard by the other normal humans in the apartment complex. After eating the soul she turns on the body. not leaving a scrap on the floor and licking up most the blood.





Natural Demon Traits


b]Za Koa Core:[/b] Za Koa Core is stated to be an energy enhancer and is often used to help augment the powers of demons. In fact, it is crucial to some of their Possessive Drives when it comes to maintaining a more enhanced and controlled version of their release forms. And it can be utilized to help further increase the potency of their magic, possessive powers or racial abilities.

This energy enhancing racial is made possible by the fact that demons have a natural connection to a hidden sub-realm within the demon world that hosts a core of sacred demon energy. It was forged from a large cluster of energy from the demon race's creator with a mixture of its power and death. However, it has grown to be much more than that throughout the hundreds of millions of years it has existed.

Demon energy is described to be possessive and aggressive in nature, so to sustain it's existence, this creation of sacred demon energy known as Za Koa has fed off the demon realm in the way of taking energy from long since deceased demons, prayers and even other realms by agents of Za Koa that have acted out its will. And, considering there are tens of billions of demons that exist, that is a tall order to fill and requires a high amount of energy to sustain and distribute.

With that said, however, demons are NOT forced to use this trait. Some outright have disconnected this link from their bodies as they do not care for it based around the fact not all demons praise their creator. As there is strong lore around this power that states Deveta (the demon god ICly) forged this and other demons reject it out of a desire to grow on their own power. So it is up to the demon in question to determine if they want to invest in their skill, but it can be of great beneficial use for those that do decide to embrace it.

Demon Magic [Possessive Magic: Among demon kind, it is often debated that this is perhaps one of their strongest assets that they possess. This is because the primary focus of their magic is that they must bring their own inner element of possession out into the material world around them. And, when they bring this element out, they must adhere to it and are restricted to releasing elements related to their possession theme out with it. In exchange, they are allowed to have as many free-form spells as they desire with their demonic magic.

An illustration of this in practice will be used with The Danava Discord. Mana Asthavon possesses an ability that allows her to enforce her possessive element of madness on the world around her. And, since she is consumed by this element, her Possessive Magic is confined to having varying magical effects which are restricted to anything that allows her to destabilize, unhinge or otherwise make the world around her unstable. Therefore, she could create monsters from her magic the destabilize the world around her, produce spells which can cause the destabilization of particles around her to induce disintegration, attempt to influence the minds of NPC's around her with spells that make them mad and so on and so forth.

The general theme with their magic is that is unlimited and free-form, but only within the confines of what their possessive theme stands for. If Mana attempted to use something which induces order in the world, she could attempt to use it, but it would greatly damage her or the attack wouldn't work period even with her grand mastery in demonic magic. Therefore, even with some of the preset spells that exist for demons, they will be forced to add their own possessive element into it.

Possessive Augment: Possessive Augment is one of the key elements that make the physical might of demons rather difficult to deal with. This is because the bodies of most demons are possessing the energy from the world around them passively in varying volumes. They then store this energy within themselves, digest it and convert it into the fuel needed to help them create a physical boost in power. As a result, they can create Possessive Augment which deals with the elements of possessive body manipulation and speed in which their energy moves in their body.

As unlike other races that depend on things like shunpo, Hierro or hakuda; a demon's Possessive Augment houses all of their body manipulation and speed in one skill. And, what makes it different is that they can have some control over all these elements, but they most pick which element of their physical attributes will be their major focus. Thus, depending on their level of skill, they can have varying degrees of control and mastery of these attributes.

  • Possessive Shifting: Possessive Shifting deals with a demon's ability to shapeshift their body. In essence, the higher your possessive augment is, the more grandiose these shifts can become. On the lower end of this spectrum, one will often only be able to do minor things such as cosmetic changes (hair color, height adjustment, assuming other identities etc), where on the highest end of the spectrum you have demon's like Mana who are able to perform sub-atomic manipulation of their bodies to create regeneration based abilities and not need a physical form with organs and such.

  • Possessive Movement: Possessive Movement is the demon's ability to otherwise generate speed. If they specialize in this, then they will often begin to focus on creating techniques, abilities, and systems which serve to augment every aspect of their speed. This can range from techniques that allow for sudden burst of movement that enhances their natural speed, the capacity to make their attacks release much faster (I.E. if a demon spell is naturally slow moving, they can use possessive movement to possess the momentum and increase it's speed while it's being created), creating sustained movement of speed and so on and so forth


Demon Energy: Demon energy can be described as a very aggressive type of energy. The reason for this is because of the fact it acts as a medium for the demon to possess the world around them. The particles of energy which are produced from a demon's body are constantly possessing and draining energy from the world around them passively in the background. It feeds on the existence around them, digests it and uses it as fuel to further the possessive power which lays inside of the demon.

And, given the unhinged psyche of demons, it's also been described as an energy that can be made rather potent when they are under high-stress or emotional circumstances. Their body, power, and mind are all heavily linked together and demons have a mass bond with their power that is unlike other races. Therefore, their state of mind can heavily influence how potent their demonic energy can become.

It is also possible to utilize demon energy without the use of a demon body, but it will often be designed to try and be the most dominant energy. It is dangerous for most other races to try and utilize this because it will often try to possess them to convert the way their powers work, their mental functions and the way reality exist around them because their bodies are constantly trying to possess it under the influence of demonic energy. This especially applies to hybrids as demon energy can exist in them, but it will be hard for them to get a handle on it due to how aggressive it is.

External Augmentation: A demon's magic is at it's strongest when they are in their prime element. Once again, I'm going to use Mana as an example. Provided she hasn't directly caused an event of mass madness, destabilization or destruction/chaos; Mana can potentially tap into her possessive element of chaos to help siphon energy from this element of chaos to help empower her magic.

Thus, if they can possess the energy around them that is RELATED to their possessive element, then their magic will often be two times stronger than normal. However, this buff has a cycle for when it's active. When they first enter the zone where their possessive element is active, they can have a variable augmentation (it will be listed below based on skill)

It should be noted, however, each usage after the first time will cause a strain on their body. So it should be used with surgery in mind. Every demon gets a free pass the first time they activate their external augmentation, but they will notice their body growing more heavy, weary and tired the more times they use it per thread. And, if they are critically injured, they CANNOT use this augmentation boost. They have to be at least 50% health and energy in order for this to work. Otherwise, their body will NOT handle it.

Incantations: Incantations are important to demonic magic because of the fact it shows further bonding with their spells. Therefore, if the demon in question wants to reach their strongest magical potential, then it is recommended that they create an incantation before their spell. However, the primary limitation with this is that the incantations have a limit to how many times they can be used before their effectiveness wears out. Thus, skill plays a factor in how potent this ability will be.

Sacrifices & Worship: Sacrifices are not only tools used to help enhance the magic of a demon for the long-term, but there are also short-term sacrifices as well that can be used to influence a demon's magic potency. These sacrifices can often be made by others or even by the demon themselves. In order for them to have an effect, however, these offerings must hold some value to the subject. A few examples include monetary things such as cash, energy, objects, body parts, and even other lives if need be.

However, the sacrifices themselves won't truly become potent unless they hold a sentimental value to them. There are many mediums in this world which can hold varying degrees of value to a person, but those which are closest to the heart will often hold the strongest effect.

Additionally, while free-form sacrifices can be created, they won't be as effective as a sacrifice with pre-established protocols. So it is recommended for most demons to create sacrificial spells for their followers to enforce if they want the strongest effect. This is because they are hard-set rules which are birthed into the universe, set in stone and create more of a bond between the demon and their power.

(Note: The person making the sacrifice can also receive benefits from sacrificial spells as well. However, the demon has to activate it and allow for it to happen.)

Worship is important to Demonic Magic. The reason for this is because of the fact that they can become empowered and enhance their magic further when they are able to build occult-like followings with the teachings of their possessive magic. It is part of the reason why Khala herself was able to wield so much power when she waged her holy war against the Soul Society. There was a high number of devote followers of her religion that would give their lives up for the teachings of her seemly holy possessive magic.

Therefore, worship is a noteworthy way for a demon to build their magical strength up. However, for most IC characters, this will often have to be done in a thread unless staff otherwise say so upon approval on their app. This is to prevent people from abusing the system because potentially anyone can just say they built a large following from scratch in the context of their history. Additionally, Demonic Worship is often stronger when IC characters give their praise to the demon in question because our private characters are far stronger/potent than the average NPC.







Origin's



⇝Kinu Origin/ abilities disclaimer.⇜

Danava demons Origin's are deeply ingrained into there very being. Kinu is no different than this but her two Origin's don't always line up. this is what makes her both mentally unstable and dangerous at times. the conflict between her caring and Obsession. This is why she has different stages of her ability. without her Origin resonating with her, it makes some abilities impossible to use. this can be broken down to 6 different states.

#1 Solo: this is she week est state of being where she is barely connected to one or both of her Origins.

#2 Attached: The attached state is where she preferred to stay. this is where her Obsession has acquired a target and is in sync with her caring on a stable level. all is right with the world and there is no cause for alarm this state offers little next to no offensive ability and manly acting as a defensive and supportive of others.

#3 agitated: Something is wrong... she still has her target but something is now being perceived as a threat to her keeping it. the deepening link to Obsession alters her mental state. stronger connection to this Origin will make her want to eliminate the threat as quick as posable. is it's in this state she is granted offensive abilities

#4 severance: This is A bad time for Kinu. this is not her worrying that something is trying to take away her target, but is convinced it is going to take it away. both Origins are completely out of control at this point in a perversion of psychasthenia. the two Origin folding in on them selfs becoming one warped feeling.


» Origin 1 Name: Obsession

» Origin Power: Eternal Bond

to keep all the people she had held dear to her, with her forever she binds there souls to her's along with the Nidhana. so even if the soul is kill or destroyed it will come back to her. the soul will not go to the ss or hell upon death as like the demon her self if killed it flows back to the Nidhana. This only happens to tho's she kills. so is limited to the people and NCP that died as a result of her own actions.

» Origin 2 Name: caring
» Origin Power: Black rose shield:
This is a normally invisible field that surrounding her target's body will she is alive and in the same thread as them. the field absorbs 20% of all damage that would have been dealt to her target. saving the force to recoils it back at the offender in the form of small black energy needles that shoot from all sides of the target's body. with added energy from her to amp up the power. the force that her own power adds is up to her at the cost of how much of her energy she allows it to use. charging the energy up inside her one post before release will make it equivalent to a cero, holding out longer can yield stronger needles. the needles are sent out from all sides and the power is evenly spread out.

that means that most of it will be wasted going off in a direction away from the aggressive, If a one on one fight. but ideal for group combat. at-lest to her as she does not care if other friendly get hit by it as long as it's not her target.

the real power of this ability comes from its power storage. when damage is taken the 20% is absorbed yes, but it does not need to be used instantly. its triggered by her or the target ( tho she can stop the target from doing this with her will alone). this allows it to build up force by taking it from more than one hit. so let's say the aggressor punched the target 20 times. that is 20% of each punch = 4 whole punches worth of force absorbed. but then split up on each side means only one per side. by this math, it would take a lot of energy to make this do any real damage yes. but it is not truly an offensive skill but a shield. which is where it pays off. of the 20 times target, he was punched only be hurt as 16 hit him. needless to say, this ability is limited to ONLY the target of her love. it can be seen when the needles shoot out by the eye. it looks to be black rose vines wrapped around the target.

» Origin Abilitiesstate: Solo

Pleasant deception: This ability is so that she can stay near her target without setting off alarms and is mixed with her Body Manipulation Trait and her Origin 1 of Obsession. It changes her body's out-ward flowing energy to that natural to another race along with her physical body appearance. This is used to deceive someone into thinking she is of another race and less of a risk. mostly to appear human to others. this does not apply to the way any of her Abilities energy feels at all or allow her to use the other races energy's in any other manner. also limits the feel of her tire to 5-3



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» Origin Abilities state: Attached

Lovers link: this is a link to another person soul itself. when this link is made with someone thru out the thread they can call on her Traits and Abilities to use of there own will so long as she keeps the link active. This link can also allow her to let them use her energy and share their thoughts. by doing so she and the other can work together as one person in a completely synchronized way without a word being said out loud. but this means that they are in her head and will hear all her thoughts even the less sane ones and vice versa. A witch could backfire on them if they have the wrong thought and set her off on them.

the link is made by the joining of hands and interlocking fingers. Both people than open up their soul to each other to forge the link. in addition, they can also share the pain or even damage for the other making it so both get 50% of it. but one can also take the full 100% for the other if they want to. such as strike one with a sword and does not hurt them but the other will get a cut as deep as the one you would have dealt appear in the same spot. by this, the damage is calculated by the one hit not the one that gets hurt. there durability vs the attack strengths. this bypassing the one hurts durability and hurting them the same even if the one that was to get hurt had a stronger level.

Florence Nightingale: THE HEALING POWER OF LOVE. this is a medical ability. it is used to reattach flesh and bone and is extremely painful. its uses her demonic powers to amp cellular regeneration of any cells to the speed of rapid healing but does not replenish energy lost. she must also be physically touching them as well. that being said it can take one to two posts to fully heal depending on how bad they're hurt. it is worth noted that she CAN take the pain on her self instead of the one getting healed but only normally does this for her target.

Personal Space invasion: IF Kinu at any time can get her bodily fluids like saliva into someone's body by a kiss or other ways she makes a demon seal inside them that other demons can see marking them as hers. this also allows her to track where they are at any given time and there health. but does not let her know what is happening per-say. she cannot see their surroundings OR here what is said. but this seal does allow one-way communication to be sent from them to her mentally. and if the one with the seal is also her target she can some times hear there thought's (with other persons approval) but this is uncontrolled and happens randomly. thru this seal she can also open a gateway and travel to or near them... so that she can aide them... or keep an eye on them (aka stalk them).


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» Origin Abilities state: agitated

Desire's edge: this ability can come in lots of forms as it is her using her desire to fuel an offensive action this is always in more of a physical manner. like forming a black knife into her hand on the low-end. But can also be used for other things with her imagination being the limit. Such as spikes shooting up from the ground or even making a handgun to hold. they are always black in color and fade away after use. there is a 30-meter casting radius area of use with her being the center. projectiles can go further if it's something reasonable like a sniper rifle.



Emotional overturns: This ability only reacts with stimulus outside of her self that involves the target of her affection. when something comes between her and her target or affect their relationship it can also affect her. normally like a buff. the effect of it varies depending on what the trigger was. As well the longer this skill is active the stronger the buff gets and the more unstable her mental state gets. it is thought that this taps not only into the souls she has bonded to her's energy but Za Koa's and her own as well. As well this is one ability she can not control her self at all or use at will.

one possibility is a slight annoyance. such as her target paying a little too much attention to someone else in a social setting. In this case, something along the lines of a dark aura could manifest around her and suck the life out of plants and things around her and adding a disturbing feeling to the air. there is no real harm done and no real amp to her skills or Abilities at all. as well this is easy to get read of as all it takes is some attention from the target.


on another note what if one was to try to get too close to her target in a social setting? Such as horseplay. The level of closeness between her target and the other person could activate this ability and have a bit of a stronger starting effect. such as a light speed boost or strengths. her mental state would also change more to the aggressive side And try to put a stop to this as soon as possible.

the boost from this is more akin to adrenalin boost. the slight panic in her head, that surge of almost manic energy taking on physical effects. This grants a temporary boost to her skill by one step. but is limited to only affect two skills. The Energy formed for this is finite So cant manifest in more than this.

{A WORST CASE SCENARIO}

What if Someone else tried to make her target fall in love with them and cast her out of the picture completely and the target seems to be complying with them. This would most likely cause an extremely violent effect. dark clouds taking over the sky, dead silence that would only be broken by almost manic laughter, an inability to maintain her shifter appearance or restrict her Inhuman Presence. A fully psychotic mental state, tire class increase along with skills. Soul focus On killing both of them so that she would have the target's soul bound to her. needless to say, this last one is her going into stage 4 "severance"

As well I will set up a reasonable tire class increase along with skills base upon her approved tire and skills. making her normal tire skills lower than the one she is approved at and limiting it to stage 4.

But even in the worst case, it is always possible to calm her down if given the right incentives. with the example above. say she went berserk and tried to kill them both. the now terrified for there life target could out of fear say that they love her and did not really want the other person. That they were just playing around .. and talk her down. this pledge of love and loyalty and showing her that she is who he wants would make this deactivate. but could make her more reactive for any other events to come if not handled well as she would not have as much trust in him. ( that saving grace may or may not be extended to the one how tried to take her target from her.. she still may want to kill her. depending on how it's handled. though she will not be in stage 4 anymore even in stage 3 trying to kill could be a choice.
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» Origin Abilities state: severance


Eternal reunion: calling on the souls bound to her in the Nidhana phantom limps seem to rise from the ground or even the air, with the sound of moaning of the lost souls unable to pass on. the limbs have both a phasing and physical effect. the arms can extend can extend up to 6 foot in light and appear anywhere within 150 meters of her. allowing them to be viable within the current dimensional plane yet not tangible to it on the phasing side. being unattached with the plane also means they can't affect it, but one can still see their ghostly arms. On the physical side, this is when the arms become tangible. capable of doing all normal functions of an arm. The arms are limited on how many she can form. this number comes from her kill count, 2 arms for each kill. but only one 1 set of arms can be physical from each race. what that means is take her only stage 4 ability at the time "hands of the lovers" it is based on her human kill count. seeing as she killed one in her past, this means she starts with only one set of arms she can call out and both can be made physical. if she were to kill more humans she would be able to form more phantom limbs. but only one set of them can affect the physical world at a time.

Eternal reunion is the base ability from witch her other stage 4 abilities are made.


hands of the lovers: This passive skill on phantom limbs attract them on the physical, making them durable and strong. in this state, the limbs are capable of acting as a physical defensive barrier or lashing as a blunt force to strike at the enemy.



» Conceptual World: A once dark lonely abyss that now holds the souls of those bound to her in it.





Phyuja Rājya

» Phyuja Rājya Appearance:

» Phyuja Rājya Powers:

» Phyuja Rājya Abilities:

» Caṛhā Saṅgalita Appearance:

» Caṛhā Saṅgalita Powers:

» Caṛhā Saṅgalita Abilities:





skills



General Skills

[*]Durability: Elite/Advanced/Adept/Trained/Beginner/Untrained
[*]General Speed: Elite/Advanced/Adept/Beginner/Untrained
[*]Strength: Elite/Advanced/Adept/Beginner/Untrained
[*]Weapon Skill: Elite/Advanced/Adept/Beginner/Untrained



Demon Skills

[*]Za Koa Core:
[*]Posessive Magic:
[*]Possessive Augment:
[*]Possessive Influence:



Will Skills

[*]Willpower/Determination: Elite/Advanced/Adept/Beginner/Untrained
[*]Mental Deduction: Elite/Advanced/Adept/Beginner/Untrained
[*]Focus: Elite/Advanced/Adept/Beginner/Untrained









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  • Comments/Notes: First of all, really interesting app and concept, very little to note. I think you may want to do a bit more in terms of her history to get a reasonable tier, depending on your expectations
    Emotional Overturns- Describe the boost to speed and strength more in depth than "light". "Worst case scenario" we can work out together.
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Mon Mar 04, 2019 9:12 am
ok added flavor text to show how Emotional Overturns works and places a limit as well.

With history keeping it short. adding things she has the first time around would not much matter to her and feels wrong to add it. it would just be filler and not truly help her development.

we can talk about "Worst case scenario" when ever you like said something on discord but don't know if you seen it. my plan to handle its effect so far is " a full tire boost " by imposing a limit on the Tier you approve her for.

for example. If she ends up approved as a 4-5.

ill most likely have her as 6-0 in solo state. as it is her weakest state.

In Attached and Agitated she has to be 5-5.. with the way this ability work it's the only option. ( ill need to keep them the same due to what I have to work with)

in the end, she will be 4-5 in the worst case.

There is not a lot of room in the common Class for an ability like this, but as you see I can make it work. as she grows I can make it so the change is more prominent
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