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Name: Allen Hitsara
True Age: One Thousand, Seven Hundred and Eighty Two Years Old (B-Day February 15th, 629)
Gender: Male
Personality:

The Sweetheart: Allen is a very kind and generous person. He is nice, caring, and well-mannered, always polite. Always thinking of the lives of others before himself, he often puts himself in harm's way for other people's sakes. His personality was different in his childhood. He was rude and cold towards anyone who approached him. He would hit anyone who provoked him, and cursed anyone who bothered him.

The Loyal: Allen is unswervingly loyal to any and all who he calls allies. His determination to keep them safe, and his ability to easily call just about anyone his friend makes him a valuable asset, and a trustworthy ally.

The Battle-Ready: Despite his kind demeanor, he is fully capable of holding his own in a vicious battle. His highly trained mind, tactical thinking, and unbelievable courage and determination allow him to fight ferociously for long periods of time. His abilities are undeniable, he is definitely a force to be reckoned with.

General Appearance

Appearance:
Spoiler:
Animalistic Traits: None
Appearance Age: Early to Mid twenties
Height: 6'1"
Weight: 135 lbs


Natural Abilities


Techniques:

Yuugai Na Boruto(Poisonous Bolts): Allen can fire off about ten-thousand small, acid green darts off from his fingertips. Each bolt contains a serum in it that dissolves the flesh, muscle, blood, and bone of anyone it hits, and the very matter of any object it hits. The dissolving process starts a post after the poison hits, and takes anywhere from five to thirty posts to complete depending on the strength of his opponent. Wherever the dart hits, it makes a straight path from where it hit, to the other side of the body, where it corrodes. Making holes in the body over time. These may not seem like much, but over time, if they add up, they can be very deadly. After firing the ten-thousand limit, he can not fire any more for the duration of the fight.

Kansen Saseta Kuuki(Infected Air): With a wave of his hand, Allen can create a large, invisible fog of poison around him and his opponent. This poison feeds off the strength of the opponent, rather than the reiatsu. The longer and harder the opponent fights, the faster their internal body is going to be attacked. It starts at the liver, stomach, and intestines, then goes to the muscles and brain, before targeting the lungs and heart. The whole process is only activated once the opponent is at full power, and takes about ten to fifteen posts to complete. The process doesn't kill the opponent, or make their organs unusable, but simply puts them in a state of stasis, suspending the opponent's body functions until the poison wears off (Whenever the fight ends).

Yuugai Na Kougeki(Poisonous Assault): Allen can infuse his very skin with his corroding poison, every blow he makes with his fists leaving a circular mark on the body, much larger than the darts. The marks taking five posts longer to corrode through the body, but being larger and more dangerous overall.


Magic:

None, Allen has found no need for using Sugiura magic, therefore he never bothered to learn any.

Sacred Weapon:

Spoiler:

The sword is only about 12" long.

Other Weapons: None

General Skills


  • Durability: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • General Speed: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Strength: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Weapon Skill: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner


Racial Skills


  • Shunpo: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Kekkai: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Kendo and Fencing: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Sugiura Magic: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner


Guardian Beast


Element: Poison

Guardian Beast:

Kiri No Hebi (Serpent of the Fog)

Allen Hitsara [Sugiura] Jafar_Snake_by_Grincha

A hundred-foot-tall snake with evil eyes and a low, throaty, hissing voice.

Guardian Beast's World:

Allen Hitsara [Sugiura] Windy

A large, windy, foresty river. Kiri No Hebi can be found swimming at high speeds through the waters, the snake's giant body making him easy to spot, were it not for the miles of forestry.

Sacred Unleashed


Joushou:("Ascending")

Spoiler:

Allen's sword changes, not much, but noticeably. The hilt forming a loop where his hand fits in, and the blade growing an inch.

In this form, his speed, strength, and agility are all increased threefold.

Baishuu Sareta Ha(Corrupted Blade): Allen's blade is now infused with his corroding poison. The slashes he makes not corroding all the way through, but instead unable to heal naturally. This can be overridden with regenerative abilities, but normal healing will not stop the bleeding or close the wound, making his sword slashes permanent to any non-regenerative beings. The poison wears off after he reseals his powers, allowing natural healing to kick back in.


Zenou: ("Almighty")

In Zenou, his blade does not change, but his appearance does.

Spoiler:

His left hand is now completely black all the way down, the hand itself growing slightly, the nails elongating and turning black, and a small, green-glowing cross forming on the back of his hand.

In this form, the strength of all his abilities, and his strength, speed, and agility, are increased fivefold.

Kansen Suruno Surasshu(Slash of the Infected): Allen's elongated nails have the same effect as his blade, making wounds that cannot be healed naturally. The difference though is that with his nails, the cuts are more in number, and the attacks to make them are faster.


Kyuu Kyou:("Ultimate")

Spoiler:

In his ultimate form, Allen's left arm elongates drastically, his nails also elongating, the entire thing becoming white, and the green cross disappearing. His blade also changes.

Spoiler:

it is now approximately three feet long and five inches wide at the top, the base being more narrow at two inches, and the middle being a growth between the two.

In this form, all abilities, natural, sacred, strength, speed, and agility, are increased tenfold.

Baishuu No Ora(Corrupting Aura): Allen is now permanently surrounded by an aura, with a radius of about six inches, that immediately acts as a paralysis agent to whoever gets too close to him. If he approaches an enemy, it doesn't activate, but if the enemy gets within six inches of him of their own accord, the agent will start its work. Taking eight posts each to immobilize certain limbs. First left arm, then right, then left leg, then right. The paralysis immediately wears off if the enemy cuts him even once after it has infected them.


Alter Form


Alter Appearance:

Spoiler:

Alter Personality: Allen's alter form is the exact opposite of him. His alter form is a rude, crude, uncaring individual who would rather save his own skin than worry about others. His voice is a deep, dark, brooding tone that immediately makes it obvious that he's trouble. Allen's alter form also hates everything Allen stands for, being loyal to no one and hating of all that Allen protects.

Alter Powers:

Saishuuteki Na Daraku(Final Corruption): The last ace in the hole, Alter Allen fires off a blast, five stories tall and three stories wide. This blast, if it hits, immediately paralyzes the enemy completely. The major flaw being that the minute the blast exists Alter Allen's blade, his powers reset, him going back to his original form and being unable to summon his sacred or use any of his techniques for the rest of the fight.


Past & Roleplay Sample


Character Background:

Allen and Urumi Hitsara. A married couple who, to anyone else, would have appeared as normal honeymooners in a hotel room, doing what newlyweds do. While they were newlyweds, they were not normal. Allen and Urumi were Sugiuras, evolved shinigami of sorts, who had wed against the wishes of their parents.

Eventually, Urumi became pregnant, much to Allen's dismay. Allen didn't want a child, he wanted a no-complications marriage, and in his eyes, children were complications. The next day, he was found dead. His body was laying on the pavement several stories below the window of a honeymoon suite in a vegas hotel.

Nine months later, Urumi gave birth, the child being born back in Urumi's parents' home in the spiritual world. The child was instantly named Allen after his late father, and given the best care imaginable.

As Allen grew up, it was obvious he had inherited the very best of both of his parents' talent. His father's strength without muscle, and his mother's agility and speed. Around age ten, he discovered the ability to summon his sacred, and at age fifteen, his life changed forever.

As he walked the streets of the human world, having been sent there by his mother through the senkaimon for human food, which she had grown fond of, he sensed a strange spiritual pressure. Upon investigation, he found it led deep into karakura forest. He knew he'd be sought after eventually, but he didn't care. He needed to find out..

Allen wandered for what seemed like hours, finally stumbling across a clearing where he felt the power coming from. What he saw... was not at all what he expected.

"Yesssssssss..... Come here little one." THe being in front of him spoke, a snake... it had to be a hundred feet tall... H...how was this possible?

"W...who are you?" Allen stuttered.

"I am who you need be to be, little one. I can make your wildesssst dreamsssss come true, and your wildesssssst fantasiessssss into reality... you only need to do one small thing for me." The snake said, lowering its gigantic head to face Allen, looking him in the eye.

Allen froze, fear overtaking his body, "W...what would that be?"

The snake laughed demoniacally, never breaking eye contact with Allen, "You mussssssssst kill."

Upon hearing those words, Allen agreed. He didn't know why at the time, but he did. He would only find out later why it was the right choice.

The snake made good on its promise, it granted him power beyond his wildest dreams, and all he had to do was wish for it and the snake granted it, so long as Allen kept killing. Allen, three years after the deal was made, joined the military in the human world. Fighting war after war after war throughout his life, always being sent in first, and always being the victor.

During the winter war between Hueco Mundo and Soul Society, Allen kept out of the fighting, watching calmly from the sidelines the entire time. He didn't understand who was right and who was at fault, but he knew he agreed with Aizen's viewpoints on how things should be run.

In the year 2300, he discovered his tragic beginnings, his dad's suicide, and his mom's single birth. He vowed never to let remorse get in his way ever again. He became a mindless killer hidden behind a kind facade, carving a pentagram on his own head, obscuring it with his bangs, and carving a jagged line under his left eye. When the scars healed, his transformation into a monster was truly complete..


Last edited by Pockeh on Wed Mar 16, 2011 1:04 am; edited 2 times in total


I envy because of the heart.
I glutton because of the heart.
I covet because of the heart.
I am prideful because of the heart.
I sloth because of the heart.
I rage because of the heart.
Because of the heart...
I lust for everything about you.


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Tue Feb 15, 2011 8:57 pm
Hmm...


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Tier: 1-3. But I'd like an admin to confirm that that's alright, first.
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Wed Feb 16, 2011 12:56 pm
So long as Kyuu Kyou and Zenou have not been discovered yet, I also aprove this character at the same tier.


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Mon Feb 21, 2011 5:41 pm
actually, if he's approved with that, he can at least discover zenou. so, i approve the zenou.
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