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Chifuyu Yuudeshi [Approved; 3-3++]
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I. General Information
» Name: Chifuyu Yuudeshi, her name is Chifuyu which can be separated into two words to find its meaning. The first part of her name Chi (千) means "thousand" and the second part fuyu (冬) means winter. Her name then roughly translates to "A Thousand Winters".
» Titles: Chifuyu's has a few titles, her first and more commonly known one is the Mastermind of the Yuudeshi, it is her most common title and this is due to her position in the Yuudeshi clan and her unnaturally high intelligence which surpasses a lot of other beings as well as her ability to manipulate the situations around her with her mind.
Her second title is a more formal one, she is called "Warden of the North East" her position makes her quite high in the ranks of the Vanguard and is one that she is often called or addressed by. To her it is nothing more than a bunch of words although people have come to understand why she earned this title when she is forced to reveal her true nature.
» Age: 15
» Gender: Female. Although in actuality she not, instead Chifuyu was born without gender, it was later learned that her body could shape-shift and adapt hence why her body is usually female. Although if she was born without sexual reproductive organs why did it choose female. The reasoning is simply because the female body is the "template" of the human body, hence why males tend to have somethings about their body which has no use. Chifuyu's body simply went to the closest sex available.
» Sexuality: Bisexual, due to her ability to shift her bodies sex she has found a favour in both genders although she prefers women over men in terms of who she pursues which is speculated to come from her father's affinity for women.
» Affiliation/Rank: Chifuyu is a member of the Yuudeshi Clan and she is also a member of Vanguard. Chifuyu's a member of Shadin's branch as his unofficial daughter due to her artificial birth and creation although she still refers to him as her father and his children as her siblings. Her affiliation and position in Vanguard is the Warden of the North East, her title and position grants her much freedom although she spends a lot of time researching and developing the technology of Vanguard but despite this she still is able to keep up with her large work load.
» Appearance Description:
Hair: Chifuyu inherited her white hair from her genetics from her father Shadin Yuudeshi. She has the white hair which is so common for his branch, she keeps it well groomed and it is easily one of her favourite features about herself. She has it cut to below her shoulder blades and the longest strands of her hair reach her mid-back. Her hair is remarkably soft and silky, showing much work going into it although she is not obsessed by it.
Eyes: She has royal blue eyes which are generally soft and kind, they appear quite piercing however and seem to look straight through things. While her eyes would make even the deepest blue of the ocean appear dull her eyes have a way of making people uneasy. Of course there is a curiosity in there but one thing she has never been able to stop doing is the way she stares right through people.
Body: Chifuyu can easily be described as a woman who should be a model instead of a weapon, her body is slim and toned with her body having all the right curves in all the right places. Her figure is one that doesn't appear to have much if any form of muscle mass on her although looks can be deceiving with this woman. She has a physique which makes her incredibly attractive and often can draw a few stares and drop a few jaws.
Her posture tends to be tall, she stands reasonably high at the height of 5'11", as well as this her slender body makes her a very light 132.27 lbs. Her skin is regarded as being quite soft and almost flawless, it has a healthy shine to it while no one really knows why it has been speculated that the mutated cells that make up her body affect her skin to appear flawless much like a crystal.
In terms of actual tone her skin is a pale white, its shade would make it get burnt quite easily if it were not for the combined effort of her unique body composition and skills with chi, her body is in great shape in physical abilities and doesn't give off the appearance of being overly bulky but also not incredibly lanky although her slender and curvy body often draws attention to her breasts, which are DD in size.
Clothes: Clothing wise Chifuyu wears a very basic attire, she tends to wear high heels which are a dark grey in colour raises her height a little. She wears plain black tights which cover her legs completely and disappear above her short skirt which is a light blue in colour. She has a blouse which is mainly white although it has a light blue piece of clothing on top of it. Her blouse extends down to her wrists, her attire splits apart a little which shows off the top of her breasts before coming together around her neck to serve as a collar to prevent the attire from falling down.
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II. Personality
» Personality:
Mastermind: Chifuyu is a very intellectual being, she is abnormally smart and very clever. She is incredibly smart to the point of being able to understand even the most complicated of things with ease, it is a trait she has held since she was born. Her unnatural intelligence makes her capable of doing a muiltitude of things, combined with the ability to utilise the Yuudeshi Network Chifuy is incredibly dangerous to mess with. She spends a lot of time creating and designing complex technology, procedures and has learned about many aspects of the races and many forms of sciences.
Cunning: A manipulative bitch, is the best way to describe her. She is a silver tongued girl who is very skilled in the art of deception and manipulation. She is able to place her words in a variety of ways and seems to have a talent at getting people to trust her and even like her. with her skills she has been known to turn friends to enemies and enemies to friends. Her cunning nature extends to her body, she is able to lie, fake emotions and also slip past even the most advanced lie detectors. Her nature often attributes to her title as the Yuudeshi Mastermind.
Deviancy: She is a deviant. No other way to put it. She has a love for breaking and making her own rules, sure she follows important rules and orders even if she deviates from the just a little bit. She loves to mess with people through flirting and also playing with them. She has no care this such as social norms. She could be stripped naked and forced to walk around the entirety of Karakura Central and the only thing that would worry her would be the amount of time she wasted in the walk.
Confident: Chifuyu has a air of confidence about her. She has a way of asserting this air of self-assurance. She has no shame about what she does and rarely doubts herself in what she does. Her confidence makes it hard to deter her from what she wants to do, this makes her a little stubborn although she really doesn't care about how she presents herself or what people's opinion of her is.
Affinity for Women: She has a strange affinity for women which is assumed came from her father Shadin, she has a strange liking for them. She tends to get very close and personal with women that she finds cute, it often leads to her constant invasion of people's personal space and also shameless attempts to grope their breasts or more intimate areas. Don't judge her, she's her father's daughter.
Loyal: Chifuyu is a very loyal person, she will always try to help her friends, allies and family. She is also very loyal to the Vanguard, so there is no chance she will betray them for whatever you're offering. Just give up now since she is a strong willed woman when it comes to her alignment and refuses to affiliate or assist evil organisation and factions for whatever she might get out of it unless she intends to back stab her enemies in the end.
Curious: A very advanced being is what can describe the Warden of the North East, she tends to work a lot on Research and Development aspects of things and really gets things done, she has a way of wanting to know things which can sometimes get her in trouble or she might become annoying due to her constant want to know things.
Motivated: Chifyuy is a very motivated person, she always desires and aims to get everything she sets her mind to done. She is very stubborn when it comes to getting her things done, she ofte can spendd days trying to think of a way to make something worse which makes her more stubborn than an ox, even fundamental laws of the universe have been broken by Chifuyu in the name of science because they got in the way.
Reserved: She is a very reserved person and likes to keep to herself. She isn't a very outgoing person and is usually the type of person to contribute to something when she deems it necessary or when people ask her thoughts on something. She spends a lot of time alone, her only real contacts are her family and those who are affiliated with Vanguard.
Detached: Her nature and creation makes her quite different from the general population of Humans, it is unknown if her unique birth affected her psychology although she tends to be detached from humanity. She often can be seen with a blank or curious look to her face although a lot of her emotions are forced or feigned by years of training. This often makes her appear alien or very unusual to other people.
Scary: Chifuyu is usually very kind and polite, with good manners and proper etiquette although she is quite scary when she or someone she cares about is threatened or someone targets people. To her opponents she is quite the scary woman, when provoked she gains an almost intimidating aura. She is also very cruel and emotionless when angry so you probably won't like her if she's angry.
III. Background
» History: The initial birth of Chifuyu began many years ago, it was first decided that fifteen years ago the Vanguard and the Yuudeshi Clan wanted to attempt a project which would involve Zin's Hogyoku, it was first started and made a possibility by the Vanguard Scientist: Shimori Aoi, a woman who was a great contributor to the Vanguard development due to her inventions and other creations which greatly assisted them. The project was started in 2401 in mid-January.
How exactly the procedure worked was quite simple, the idea was to use both her own and Shadin Yuudeshi's DNA to create an artificial fetus, this fetus would then be exposed to the Hogyoku and the cells were meant to mutate slightly and become much more developed and advanced. The idea of this procedure was quite dangerous and as such only Chifuyu was created with the intention of creating much more should the initial subject go as planned.
The project went as planned as the fetus developed, Chifuyu had taken shape and was born in early October. Many tests we ran on Chifuyu after her birth, after all such a project was so full of mystery. Initial studies showed that due to the exposure of her fetus to the Hogyoku she had gained a form of mutation in her cells which made them have an extra aspect to it which was actually a strange crystalline substance.
Her body was later revealed to be gender less, in fact it was revealed to be almost inhuman due to the fact that her bodies cells were able to warp, and manipulate themselves to become different, to adapt and adjust as it was necessary. This lead to her being raised to be quite powerful, Vanguard wanted to see just how far Chifuyu's powers would develop although due to the fact she was an infant most of her powers were used subconsciously and therefore she didn't possess the proper mental ability to control her body yet.
Shortly after her birth and less than a year later the project was uncovered by a Shadow Fall agent who leaked the information back to the organisation, with this knowledge and what Chifuyu was and could do it gave the organisation the motivation to attempt to obtain the Head Scientist, Shimori was targeted by a small group of assassin's who were ordered to retrieve her and if they couldn't then they were ordered to eliminate her to create a hindrance in the project.
While Chifuyu was under heavy protection she spent very little time learning to socialise or gain people skills. When she was only one year old her "mother" and creator was attacked although due to her unwilling to cooperate she was killed by the group of assassin's and was later found by scientists in her lab.
Without Shimori, Chifuyu was legally under the control and considered the daughter of Shadin Yuudeshi this ultimately led to her being introduced to the Yuudeshi Clan and Shadin brought her to live with her siblings instead of being locked in a Vanguard Base with minimal interaction. This sudden exposure to society made her appaear quite strange. She lacked most social skills and Shadin invested a lot of time, money and effort to give her a proper education and hopefully make her more human.
Of course it did, in a way, she had obtained a form of humanity although she still had a detached attitude towards herself. She didn't exactly see herself like everyone else although she became incredibly good and manipulating her features to feign emotions although it was all robotic and just fake. Despite this though her intelligence was through the roof and Phantom Tech only improved that, she began to further adapt and become stronger. Eventually she was accepted into Vanguard which she saw as fulfilling her purpose.
She easily rose through the ranks in the Vanguard, she quickly made her way to the rank of Warden of the North East. She spent a lot of time inventing technology and learning, her command made her quite valuable among the organisation for her brain and strength as well as those lovely connections that came with being a member of the Yuudeshi Clan. She learned more and more, taking on challenges and always doing her best to protect humanity and Earth from the likes of Shadow Fall and other antagonists.
IV. Combat Information
» Natural Attributes: (Does your human have any natural abilities going for them? If so, list them in this section. If not, remove it)
» Clan Powers:
Shadin's Branch As the daughter of Shadin Yuudeshi her body was created with his genetic code therefore making him her biological father. She has as such obtained traits of his genetic branch of the Yuudeshi Clan. This has contributed greatly to her development.
- Semi-Immortal: Most who happen to be born into Shadin's side of the family often have some level of nigh immorality. They can be killed by traditional means, and by that we are talking about an external force or person actually attempting to destroy them. Such as if a person had attempted to pierce the heart of a Yuudeshi? If they didn't have an ability or power to deal with it, they would probably die right on the spot. But, outside of that, Yuudeshi's who are born onto Shadin's side of the family generally do not die by natural causes such as disease, age or decaying of the mind based on their extremely extended lives. Therefore, even the most powerless Yuudeshi typically has at least this trait in them as a strong gene from Shadin's blood that was passed on through his Ziamichi powers. Some have even go on to grow DE Fields from it because Oni Chiita, the host whom lived within Shadin during the time he had impregnated Midori and Uwa, had a form of semi-immortal that was an extension from his own DE Field. (Please read this information for more information about Death Energy)
- Affinity For Demon Powers: Most who are born from Shadin's side of the family often have a strong knack for picking up on all sorts of repressed genes that were inherited from Shadin's Ziamichi and refined by Shadin's DNA. Therefore, most of Shadin's descendants appear to sometimes have demonic traits in their powers. Many cases of his children wielding Shinigami, Demon and sometimes even Human powers have been noted. As, after all, Shadin himself wields all three very skillfully. However, this doesn't apply to everyone. Not every single child born from him, or descended from him, will have this. From what he understands it, it mostly just occurs at random and is a luck of the draw kind of thing. Some are born with no power, others with only human strength, a few with Shinigami people's, lesser amounts with Demon's and abnormal who are able to possess either dual or Tri qualities of the Human, Shinigami and Demon race.
- Dormant Energy & Potential: A fair number of those who happen to be born on Shadin's side of the Yuudeshi Clan are often born with very mass spiritual or other wordily types of energy. This does NOT stand true for every single person born from this side, but there has been a noticeable trend that Shadin has picked up on and it's not entirely out of the picture that one would be born with such a trait. These mass energy reserves often help with developing powers at a very young age, growing into fairly high levels of powers that would leave veterans in awe. Such as, in Shadin Yuudeshi's cases, where he was able to awaken his Bankai at around the age of 17 to 18. This was unheard of during the period of time in which he unlocked it and believes that this Abeyant Energy may have had a role to play with it. Therefore, it's reasonable to assume that when a Yuudeshi born from Shadin Yuudeshi's side reaches a suitable amount of power? There may be an accelerated process in taming, mastering and otherwise coming to understand their powers. Leaving it to make most fear this trait of the Shadin's branch of the Yuudeshi Clan because they are very quick learners.
- Family History Of Speed Attributes: This is yet another strong trait that generates from within the branch of the Yuudeshi Clan that is related to Shadin Yuudeshi. Many of his direct children and descendants are often remarked for their impressive speed when compared to peers of their group. That means many of the children, on some form or level, often have a knack for picking up speed. Rather it's being able to summon energy at high rates of speed, being able to recover from their injuries swiftly, being able to process/think of information at break neck speeds and other traits that relate to quickness; on a physical, spiritual and even mental levels, most Yuudeshi's who are spawned from Shadin's side of the family have a great potential to inherit his speed. Thus, it's never really wise to doubt this part of their blood. As they get stronger and stronger, there may be eventually be someone who could possibly even rival Shadin Yuudeshi's speed with enough work, training and effort put into it.
» Unique Powers:
Crystal Manipulation: Chifuyu's main ability revolves around the use of crystals. She has small crystalline aspects of her cellular structure which make her unlike any other being in existence, this mutation has granted her the ability to generate and manipulate crystals as well as grow and utilise them, she is incredibly skilled in the manipulation of crystals due to her nature. She is capable of manipulation the cations and the electrons which makes up the lattice to her own advantages, this means she can manipulate the density, hardness and also the sharpness of her crystals and pre-existing sources of crystal as well as the shape of them.
- Crystal Growth: By using her power over crystals Chifuyu is capable of making pre-existing sources or generated sources of crystals grow, she does this by using her reiatsu as a catalyst which allows the crystalss to use that to grow and expand although as it is her reiatsu her will is imbued in it which allows her to manipulate the shape of the crystals as they form and grow which allows her a fine control over what the crystals shape as.
The rate at which these crystals grow is incredibly fast, however it all depends on what Chifuyu does for example a very large amount of energy could allow her to create a very large crystal and generate very large crystals very quickly or she could compress it to be smaller but no less dangerous due to the fact she would be increasing density and the durability of them. - Crystal Sensing: She has the innate ability to be able to sense crystals and ores, basically anything that is a lattice and is made up of small crystals allows her to be able to sense them. This is because in order to be able to manipulate and grow crystals she must know where they are, this allows her to sense crystals and crystalline lattices within the range of five kilometres in all directions. This means that any and all crystals that are buried within the radius are able to be manipulated by her.
- Crystal Constructs: As a very skilled combatant with this ability Chifuyu is able to use her knowledge of structures and engineering to use crystal as a material. This makes her often use it in constructs such as weapons, walls or defensive purposes, even something such as buildings and these structures can vary, after all not all crystal is flashy and appear to be gemstones.
- Crystal Telekinesis: An ability that only works on crystals, Chifuyu is capable of manipulating nearby crystals within her sensory range. Through the use of this she is able to break them and manipulate them, the result of this allows her a variety of feats such as using crystals as projectiles, platforms and shields. She can easily lift a large mass of crystals and with the help of her incredible mind she can easily control up to 1000 crystal shards. Her skill in telekinesis can be used in many other and unique applications as well since she can use her ability to manipulate her body like a puppet due to her cells and as such she can move freely and without restraint no matter what is hindering her although under the influence of another telekinesis she can only defend against those with less or struggle against those with equal willpower.
Evolution:
- Shape-Shifting: Chifuyu is able to use her unique ability to enact shape-shifting in her cells. This allows her to instantly change her appearance, aspects of it and manipulate her entire anatomy in her own way. Of course this body must still be able to support itself meaning it must still have organs, blood or some method to survive which makes it impossible for her to take the form of an inanimate object. This body must also able to support her consciousness which means that her brain cannot change that much either.
It should also be noted that Chifuyu can alter very specific details of her physical being, such as her retinas, fingerprints and DNA in general making her capable of fooling even the most advanced security systems and methods of identification. Of course this change is merely physical, those who are skilled in reiatsu sensing are able to see past this ability and learn of this guise. - Racial Adjustment: Chifuyu was influenced from an early point in her development as a fetus to the Hogyoku from her uncle Zin Yuudeshi. As such her body and cells developed a form of adaption, adjustment and ability to mutate and evolve. This means that even though she is a human her body is unique in the way that it works. Her body is capable of adjusting its racial status by being exposed and evolving to be more akin to the adjusting to be more like the race, as such she can obtain other races' skills and abilities although that change is temporary.
This ability allows for a variety of feats which make her a very dangerous combatant. She is able to adjust her soul to become more like the target in general, this also influences her slightly. Due to her father's genetics she is better at taking on Demonic Qualities than positive beings although she is not to be underestimated with her abilities in this skill. Usually over the course of a post or two she can modify her genetic code to take on more or all the properties of her target for a short period of time.
For the limits of what this ability can do Chifuyu is limited to one skill from the race she is adjusting to. This means she could take Shinigai Kido or Hoho but not both. She cannot also have the same mastery as her opponent or those who she is adjusting too. Instead she starts at the Beginner level and it stays that way, these changes are also temporary and only last the duration of a thread or as long as she is exposed to the source which means if she is near demons and they disappear then she loses the ability she took.
NOTE: CHIFUYU IS LIMITED TO WHAT SHE CAN USE THIS FOR, SHE CANNOT DO A LOT OF CHANGES IN A SINGLE POST OR SPAM HER BODY MODIFICATIONS CONSTANTLY. IT REQUIRES ENERGY AND WILLPOWER TO DO SO.
VI. Equipment Information
» Item Name: Manu Consilium [Latin for; Hand Device]
» Item Type: It is unique to Chifuyu, she is the only known user of this device. The item can be used by anyone if they can actually get it off of her, it is also protected through use of her Phantom Tech and it can only be used by those who have Chifuyu's Phantom Tech Brain.
» Used For: Chifuyu's Hand Device serves a variety of purposes, it allows her to use it mainly to control her technology that she designs by directly interfacing her with it. The Device also can serve an offensive purpose as it can relaease a strong burst of kinetic force outwards, this is due to it using Chifuyu's own energy or that of an external source to convert it to kinetic energy and release it as a forward burst of energy.
Strangely the device has a purpose to connect to the human brain by capturing and analysing their brainwaves through touching their head, by deciphering these she can al thought waves she is able to use her Phantom Tech's Processor to understand the thoughts, a very good ability for interrogation and information gathering., of course as it can receive brainwaves it can also emit a pulse of energy through physical touch which will slowly and painfully damage their brain, of course those with better willpower can resist or mitigate it entirely although to other's this ability is very painful and has the potential to kill.
» Item Description: This item was obtained by Chifuyu a long time ago, it takes the appearance of a dark blue glove that covers her hand and goes up to her elbow, the glove has a line pattern on it which is a light blue and glows when the glove is active and being used. On the back of her hand the glove has a light blue crystal which is clear when inactive although a soft blue emanates from it when in use like the line pattern. It only covers her index and middle finger leaving her ring and small finger exposed. It is worn on her right hand.
» Obtained From: This item cannot be bought, it cannot be used unless the person is able to obtain Chifuyu's Phantom Tech Brain as well.
» Yen Price: It cannot be bought, although it might be available for purchase in the future. If it was to be bought then it would cost around 20,000,000 Yen.
» Notes: [Any other information or personal notes you'd like to add]
VII. Phantom Tech Information
» PhatomTech: Chifuyu has some very advanced Phantom Tech, starting with her Cybermind which was created specifically for her with the use of the Yuudeshi Clan's resources. Her Phantom Brain is made specifically for very advanced things, and is by far one of the best quality pieces of tech you'll find. The reason for its quality is because of the fact that she only really needs supplementary equipment, therefore her technology and add-ons are mainly focused on her Phantom Brain.
High-Speed Processor: Really the only aspect that is often used by Chifuyu is the Phantom Tech Brain's incredibly fast processors, this feature was installed into Chifuyu at a young age and can be attributed to the development of her amazing mind. With her processor she can work out complex algorithms, equations and other formula in a matter a minutes which would normally take other people weeks or days to work out. Her processing mind allows her to instantly take in a lot more information than one would normally be able to handle.
Her mind is able to handle large sums of information, she is also able to analyse things around her with a much higher efficiency and with more detail, this allows her to take note of a variety of details which the normal mind would be either unable to process or disregard. Her processor makes her thoughts move at a pace of 40x faster than the normal human's thought process which makes her able to come to a variety of conclusions almost instantly.
Of course this processor makes her brain like a computer, it is not unlike her to be able to have a form of adoptive muscle memory due to the fact her mind is able to analyse, decipher and ultimately implement the movements into her own. Due to the processor she also has an eidetic memory which cannot be messed with due to the fact that her that her mind stores data and makes sure everything is in check which means that should she suspect her memories altered she can review her memories and ultimately remove the false memories. She can also manipulate the speed at which she perceives things which allows her to see things at a super fast velocity as though they were in slow motion.
Due to the fact her Phantom Tech being mainly focused on her mind she is capable of projecting what she refers to as "Mental Imagery", Mental Imagery or often shortened to MI is a program which is coded into her Phantom Tech Brain, it works by imputing data into her brain through converting it to brainwaves, this allows for feats such as creating a HUD interface which is not projected over her actual eyes. Instead she is seeing what her mind is telling her she apparently sees.
MI is very valuable as a skill, it allows her to instantly obtain and visually show data in her vision, it allows her to make synthetic noise which only she can hear and even allows her to do feats such as manifest a perfect digital image of her AI program which she can see, hear and interact with. She can ultimately edit this as she pleases and is capable of removing features and customising it to her wishes and needs.
Hacking Programs: Through the use of her Phantom Tech and processor Chifuyu has very advanced hacking skills, she is capable of hacking a lot of computer systems, this is due to the ability to use multiple programs, being able to upload a lot and making things work in sync. Even the most advance programs and systems are at her disposal, while certain systems are incredibly hard to hack with the correct conditions she can hack nearly any system.
Chifuyu's skill in hacking can be used to most systems although some systems such as Shadow Fall, Kokuryuteshi and other organisations, in order to access their systems Chifuyu needs to be nearby to a console or a spot which has access to said system. She is easily able to access most if not all aspects of the Yuudeshi Network due to her skills and multiple programs, of course Shadin took precautions to prevent her complete control over the systems.
Project Virus: Project Virus, later given the name Cyrus is the perfect AI created by Chifuyu. The project was designed to create a perfect AI which she successfully did and downloaded it into her Phantom Tech. Cyrus is a very advanced program which can run multiple simulations and can be summoned in a human form to be projected with her mental imaging programs. As her AI he can interact with her almost telepathically since thoughts travel much faster the two of the can sync and work with incredible efficiency as they work in sync the two can achieve even higher levels of processing as well as being able to hack much faster and much more secure system. She can also download a small program of Cyrus into together networks where he can infiltrate or cause havoc to it.
VIII. Skill Information
General Skills
- Durability: Master
- General Speed: Adept
- Strength: Adept
- Weapon Skill: Beginner
Will Skills
- Willpower/Determination: Advanced
- Mental Deduction: Master
- Pain Endurance: Adept
- Focus: Advanced
Human Skill Sheet
- Anima Stone Strength: Beginner
- Soul Sorcery: Beginner
- Soul Dash: Adept
- Soul Detection: Adept
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Re: Chifuyu Yuudeshi [Approved; 3-3++]
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Mmmmmk I'm not gonna give this a tier or will skills quite yet as this isn't ready for approval. There are some issues I have with these abilities that I'd like to get figured out so we can get you squared away.
To start, you don't have to change anything about the crystals, but I want you to know that she can only harden them so much/strengthen them so much/make them so dense. Opponents whom are stronger or have a higher level of cutting power wouldn't find it too difficult to break them probably. Soul Stage 1 would obviously be tougher/harder to cut, but still not for people who specialize in cutting things, if that makes sense.
Controlled Physiology: This needs to be nerfed greatly. No replacing of Organs/Creating new organs without a MASSIVE energy drain to go with it. Also, you have to choose one between her being able to move her organs around, and her having the Yuudeshi semi-immortality. The combination of the two could be abused too easily and that isn't something I'm willing to take a chance on. You can keep one of them, but you have to pick one.
Shapeshifting: Whatever she shifts into has to be a physical change only. Also, I need a note in here that ANYBODY with an Advanced or higher in Focus, Pesquisa, or Soul Detection would be able to sense that it is her regardless of the form she is taking.
Racial Adjustment: We need to be very careful with this, as we have had a great deal of problems in the past with people trying to be every race at once. Ideally, I would like this reworded so that she can adopt ONE racial skill from the race of whomever it is she's battling. So, if she were to fight an arrancar, she could use a cero. If she were to fight an iramasha, she might be able to chaos warp for a moment. This would only be for the duration of the fight, and would be limited to one racial skill per opponent she's fighting. Also, the ability's strength would scale to her level. She wouldn't be using it at the strength of the opponent whom she adopted it from. That's just one suggestion, though. How you reword this is up to you but it needs to be reworked.
Once these issues are fixed, I'll give this a tier and slap the will skills on it.
Tier: N/A
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I rage because of the heart.
Because of the heart...
I lust for everything about you.
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- PockehMetal as Fuck
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Re: Chifuyu Yuudeshi [Approved; 3-3++]
Sun Jun 12, 2016 8:14 am
Application Checklist
- Name [X]
- Appropriate Age [X]
- Gender [X]
- Appearance Present [X]
- Appearance Described in Appropriate Length OR Picture is Visible [X]
- Appearance is Not Claimed [X]
- 10 sentences for personality [X]
- History is of appropriate length [X]
- Powers are not Godmod/Overpowered [O]
- Powers are described reasonably enough [X]
- Application/RP Sample is not in First Person [X]
- Skills are not filled in (Omit if a Hollow)[X]
- RP Sample Present (Omit if this is not the first character) [X]
- RP Sample is 10 sentences [X]
Will Skills
- Willpower/Determination: Advanced
- Mental Deduction: Advanced
- Pain Endurance: Adept
- Focus: Advanced
Comments/Notes: Thank you for making the changes that I requested! Approved.
Tier: 3-5++
I envy because of the heart.
I glutton because of the heart.
I covet because of the heart.
I am prideful because of the heart.
I sloth because of the heart.
I rage because of the heart.
Because of the heart...
I lust for everything about you.
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I glutton because of the heart.
I covet because of the heart.
I am prideful because of the heart.
I sloth because of the heart.
I rage because of the heart.
Because of the heart...
I lust for everything about you.
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- HenrexTor'uk
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Re: Chifuyu Yuudeshi [Approved; 3-3++]
Thu Mar 01, 2018 8:56 pm
[adm]Archiving upon user's request.[/adm]
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Re: Chifuyu Yuudeshi [Approved; 3-3++]
Tue Jun 12, 2018 4:40 am
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