Queens Glory

Sun Apr 24, 2016 3:14 pm

» Name Of Character: White Eye
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Queens Glory: This spell falls under Whites power, The Prophecies of Seer. He created it after learning that his next mission will be at the moon, where blood and bodies can color its white surface. Similar to Demon spells, this too requires some ingredients and a incantation. What sets this spell apart from regular demon spells, the prayer is directed not to the Demon God or Za Koa, but to the boys person he thinks of being God in his mind, Mana Asthavon.

Required resources: 666 sacrifices of humans, demons or any other race. The beings need to be weakened or close to be powerless (tier 4-4 and below). Without the sacrifices one also needs an piece of Manas Asthavon, be it item with her energy, strand of hair or piece of clothing. It can even be a person she cares for. White uses The Sword of Discord he was given by The Demon Queen.

Incantation:
First is the scream,
Blood drips.
Second, a whisper,
When horror arrives.
Third, a laugh,
When you embrace.

I pray to the Queen!
I pray to God!
She is all and all should be her!
Chaos is power,
Madness is freedom!
Release the shackles of these poor lambs and show them the mechanisms of world!!!

Effect: While reciting the incantation White needs to release his Ksetra Pari around the sacrifices. In the same time the piece belonging to Mana must be at his persona. All 666 sacrifices, once surrounded by Ksetra Pari, will be reduced into thick, red mist, which will slowly start to tint emerald green. Then, slowly, this mist will cover the area of a small town, such as a moon base.

Those in this mist will feel effected accordingly to their race, as well, as their relationship with madness. Demons and creatures powered by unholy powers will feel increased boost in power, as they would reside in Hell. In the same time those who oppose the unholy would experience things starting from minor headaches and cramps in joints and going to vomiting, not being able to focus their power and even loss of one or another of their senses, mental or physical. This depends on the subjects tier and power, as they will need to resist the power of the unholy item of Manas.

The madness part of this green miasma is that those, as White, whose mind is already twisted will feel increased fighting spirit and bonus to their Pain Endurance. In the same time the maddening effect will after 4 posts start to cause hallucinations and hearing noises, that can cause some serious distractions in a fight. If the person doesn't then try resisting the effect of the miasma after two more posts they will experience internal brain bleeding and even risk on loosing one level of Mental Deduction.

Those who are "sain" in the same time will feel a bit different effects. They will feel that their minds are assaulted and will need to fight effect similar to advanced willpower, if the item in question won't have willpower of its own, or the willpower of the item used in the ritual, with their Mental Deduction, Focus or Willpower. This can lead from minor concentration problems of different kind to those who defended successfully to complete lunacy and loss of any common sense. Those with the same level of willpower, focus or mental deduction will only be half way influenced, while those level+ higher will be completely unaffected. After 4 posts, if the effect of miasma isn't stopped, the victims will start to have internal organ bleeding as well, as their energy will start to act in incontrollable ways, damaging them and those around.

The miasma will last for 6 posts.

» Why: As mentioned before, when learning about the upcoming mission at moon White decided to create a way how to spread his Queens influence even further.

» Extra: In general this is just a addition to already existing Whites power "The Prophecies of Seer". I just wanted to get an approval to this before posting in the event ^.^

Sun Apr 24, 2016 8:45 pm

Nix Shraik wrote:even risk on loosing one level of Mental Deduction permanently.

No.

Nix Shraik wrote:master willpower with their own

Change to Advance of Mental Deduction, Willpower, or focus will be only half way influenced and masters in one of those areas are uneffected.

Nix Shraik wrote:The miasma will last as long, as White will hold the item of Manas close to himself. Once removed, the miasma will fade away after two posts.

Change this to where it will only last for a total of six posts.

Nix Shraik wrote:While reciting the incantation White needs to release his Ksetra Pari around the sacrifices. In the same time the piece belonging to Mana must be at his persona. All 666 sacrifices, once surrounded by Ksetra Pari, will be reduced into thick, red mist, which will slowly start to tint emerald green. Then, slowly, this mist will cover the area of a small town, such as a moon base.

Does he need the Sacrifices and Item of Mana's?

Also change the item to having to contain her a moderate portion of her energy and also have her DNA. I.e A cup of blood, Fist full of hair, etc.

Nix Shraik wrote:This depends on the subjects tier and power to fight weakened 0-1 tier unholy power.

Remove this entirely.

Sun Apr 24, 2016 9:07 pm

Before I'm doing any others changes I wanted to talk through one thing. White created this spell, based on the fact he has this thing from Mana. Item, which he would use is this. The miasma is basically the extension of the swords effects on larger scale. Probably I didn't explain it good enough and I'm ready to re-word it.

What else I wanted to address is that I don't really agree that you can fight madness with mental deduction or focus, as a person with high mental deduction has risks of falling even easier into madness because only of thinking and analyzing it too much. And focus governs reacting speed and how well you notice details, as well, as how fast you process information. When it comes to mental health willpower is what governs how you can fight against outside forces trying to effect your mind and such.

Of course, these all are just my opinions and I wanted just to ask you to hear me out, before I get to my editing ^.^

Sun Apr 24, 2016 9:20 pm

Focus also governs how well you can stay on task meaning one could simply enter into a state of tranquility or simply shift their attention from it.

I disagree on the mental deduction as it's very nature is discern things like this as you said illusions play a factor. If someone can discern they are being influenced by a outside source they can become self aware of the effect upon them breaking out of them. These are ways these can be used and thus makes them valid.

In short I remain firm on my choice about these.

Once you reword and fix everything I asked I will approve this.

Mon Apr 25, 2016 6:52 am

Made the changes!

Mon Apr 25, 2016 9:39 am

Approved.

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