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Ophelia Lestat [APPROVED, 2-5]
Thu Nov 20, 2014 7:27 pm
The Spiritual Human Template
Basic Information
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• Name: Ophelia Lestat
• Titles: N/A
• Age: 304
• Gender: Female
• Affiliation/Rank: Alone
• Appearance Description:
Hair: Blonde hair descends from an elegant and well-kept head, usually brushed and treated well but never tied or kept in any sort of fashion. Its long wavy nature is unaltered and maintained by way of various shampoos, conditioners, and a tad bit of magic. Ophelia has wanted to make it as luxurious as humanly possible.
Head: Ophelia's head is feminine, with pronounced cheek bones, rounded edges, and clear golden eyes that, on occasion, turn red whenever Ophelia is exerting particularly potent spiritual energies. With these eyes, Ophelia will gaze at everything with a cold, understanding warmth that only she understands. Her eyebrows are thin and help express little emotion other than the calm, weary expression she has when dealing with her common every day life situations. It is not often you see her without her trademark smile of calm and serenity which betrays her true nature.
Body: The entirety of Ophelia's body is curvaceous and attractive, with a generously sized DD-cup bust that hides away under her semi-tight maid's outfit. Her maximum height reaches about 5'7 and her weight... well that can vary based on several things, but usually she weighs about 144 lbs. Her lower half is to the liking of many a man and woman, although she doesn't take much pride in showing off, thus why she wears her maid outfit even outside of her home. No part of her body seems to show any notable muscle mass otherwise, but that doesn't mean she is physically weak by any means. No, her body holds many strange secrets. Secrets that even Ophelia sometimes forgets.
Outfit: It is surprisingly never that Ophelia wears anything that isn't her maids outfit, or pajamas for when she's alone. She's so attached to her frilly little outfit that she'll even wear it in public when she's not on the job. The outfit looks like a red variation of a standard french maid's outfit. Her legs are covered mostly by two black thigh high socks that end in white frills, her feet adorned with black high heels that match the mostly black outfit greatly.
When Ophelia isn't wearing this outfit, she is most likely at home in her pajamas which consist of a loose orange top and orange pants.
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Personality
• Personality:
Ophelia, at first glance, is a kind and caring mother figure who takes care of seemingly everyone around her. Her mouth is usually curled into a warm smile and her eyes reflect that of understanding and mercy. She does not appear to enjoy violence to most of the people that meet her. However, there is an underlying, secretive side to this woman. Ophelia's true nature is muddy and nondescript. She can appear to be a loving motherly figure, and she can appear to be a cold, calculating machine who's interested in nothing but her ulterior motives. Her mind is dead set on finding and finishing whatever her goals may be regardless of who or what gets in her way. There is no remorse in Ophelia's heart, no matter how much she may convey that to those who she must lie to on a day to day basis.
When it comes down to it, Ophelia understands the value of a life, and the weight that death holds. If at all possible, she'll avoid fighting for the dual purposes of respect and self-interest. Respect for death and its repercussions, and in the self-interest of not raising suspicion of herself. The last thing she needs is people who are actively aware of her existence. It will only make her task that much harder. As a result, Ophelia's powers are dedicated to keeping the world in the state that it is, despite her true feelings towards the world and the things on it. Having lived for hundreds of years, Ophelia has become jaded towards most of everything. All she wishes is to move on with her life, and if people will try to disrupt that wish, she will not hesitate to remove them from the world. It's not like she won't see them again in 10 years anyways.
The purpose of Ophelia acting as if she's a much more caring individual is simply to keep her job as a maid. That way she can monitor her daughter, Yuyuko, while having a roof over her head with sustenance and other necessary facilities. There have been, in previous timelines, instances where certain plans have gone wrong and as a result, angered various individuals. Said individuals then went on to destroy the things that Ophelia truly cares about, such as her daughter. In order to prevent this from happening, Ophelia used her various magicks to brainwash the owners of a mansion to adopt her daughter Yuyuko while simultaneously hiring her as the head maid. This allowed them both to have a place to call home that wasn't a cave or a tunnel underground. Every single timeline, Ophelia does this with the same residence so she may take the liberty of continuing her goals for the purpose of breaking her curse while having to worry the least about Yuyuko.
When faced with a situation or individual who Ophelia has no reason to fool, she will toss aside her facade and show her true colors. Her face will no longer be that of a caring mother figure and instead will be that of an apathetic ancient spirit who's only purpose is to break her curse and show her daughter that she is indeed her mother. There is no need to care about what she has done with the likelihood that she will merely fail and repeat her curse once more is very high. That mixed with the repetition has caused her to become jaded towards the world around her. If nothing she does matters then why care about what she does? Not only that, but Ophelia has simply become an uncaring individual over her many years of experience. Killing no longer hurts. Life is hardly a valuable thing anymore. And her child? That is the only thing she wishes to make happy. There are no other goals in life for her. She simply wishes to get this curse over with and get back to her previous, normal life.
After all she's said and done, the only time she can go back on her word is once every 10 years where she dies and is sent back in time to the very moment where she was cursed. Eventually, she became used to the repetition and learned how to use it to her advantage. There are constants, and there are wild cards, but for the most part Ophelia has learned how to time and manipulate world events to her personal gain. As a result of this curse, Ophelia has become prone to lying and manipulating, if only to gain something out of it. Personal relations mean nothing to her, except in a certain few instances. Outside of that, it's back to Ophelia's cold demeanor. Personal value has no purpose in a life of constant loss and lack of meaning.
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Natural Attributes & Supernatural Powers
• Natural Attributes:
- Amplified Body: Ophelia's physical body is strengthened through her powers, giving her greater strength, speed, defense, endurance, etc, than that of most others around her level. This is due to her abnormal Reiatsu, which has strange effects on the physical and occasionally mental being of other people.
- Unidentifiable Reiatsu: The strangest thing about her is that Ophelia's Reiatsu is not identifiable as a Reiatsu. Sure it can still be sensed like usual, unless she actively attempts to hide herself, but no matter what, her Reiatsu will NEVER feel like one. It gives off a feeling of mystery and child-like nostalgia, as if it were less Reiatsu and more... "Magical". Her Reiatsu also changes color based on the "Magic" she is using at the time.
- Martial Arts Training: Ophelia is highly proficient in at least two or three martial arts,
though mostly uechi-ryu (originally known as pangai-noon). It involves open-handed strikes so that one may grab and subdue an opponent after striking them with said open hand. It also involves physical conditioning that prioritizes withstanding blows while in a specific stance so as to avoid losing balance or becoming staggered, although against particularly powerful foes this becomes less important, as getting hit even once will spell trouble. This also doesn't mean she just nullifies the damage, but instead avoids becoming immediately affected by the hit. Anything that's strong enough to break through her conditioning is probably something she shouldn't be dealing with in the first place.
• Powers: Powers: "Magic"
Ophelia's powers revolve around manipulating and altering the natural phenomena around her. Through movement and contact with her reiatsu, Ophelia can cause various effects within the world around her, allowing her to do things relating to altering objects or even people in varying ways. Sometimes even on spacial levels, though it isn't limited to just that. It's merely an example of one of the ways Ophelia can alter or manipulate the world or its contents.
- Black Magic:
Black magic translates to Curse magic, though Ophelia calls it Black magic to conceal its true nature. By touching and forcing her Reiatsu into various objects or people, she can place curses on them. Curses in Ophelia's case are long lasting negative effects that can only be purified through extraneous efforts or specialized powers (time reversal, purification, and some other things for example). Ophelia's curses can range from bad luck (causality manipulation) to rapid decay (cell deterioration through cause of rapid necrosis). A list of some of the curses Ophelia has placed on people include, but are not limited to:
-Bad Luck
-Near instant Necrosis through physical contact*
-Weakened Immune Systems (resulting in frequent infection/illness)
-Temporary yet Elongated Sleep (specifically only on weaker individuals)
-Fear
-Mental Decay
-Spiritual Repression
-Self-Doubt
-Physical Atrophy
...and more.
*An old form of Black magic that Ophelia used to have, but not anymore. Her arm would turn black and anything she touched, including inanimate objects, would decay near instantaneously at the point of contact.
These curses are permanent unless broken. The means of breaking them are simple and straightforward. A burst of reiatsu of someone who has a certain level of willpower in relation to Ophelia, or certain kinds of healing/purification abilities. Only one curse can exist on someone at once. These curses also wear down over time to a point where even a 5-5 could break them with a decent amount of reiatsu. Reiatsu Resistance may also prevent or protect from curses.
Ophelia can only curse someone by coming in physical contact with them.
When using this magic, Ophelia's Reiatsu turns black.
- White Magic:
White magic is protective and defensive magic, which Ophelia nicknamed White magic for the purposes of concealment. With White magic, Ophelia can reject the existence of certain, nonliving objects in a 3 yard radius around her and also revert objects to a point in time they were at previously. The further back in time she has to revert the objects to, the longer the healing takes. Meanwhile, rejecting the existence of nonliving objects does not work if they are in contact with something living, or force their way inside of Ophelia's barrier through brute force (which will cause it to crack and eventually shatter underneath the stress from having rejected their own rejection of existence).
Ophelia's Reiatsu takes on a white color when using this magic.
- Green Magic:
https://www.platinumhearts.net/t13038-ophelia-s-upgrades
Using this magic, Ophelia can travel to parallel dimensions or worlds such as Hueco Mundo by enclosing herself between two solid objects. The object doesn't have to be in a literal solid state of matter, as long as it's tangible and encases/crushes her, she can use it to teleport. What actually happens in this power is that Ophelia literally removes herself from existence and places herself in another world/dimension. The conditions are strictly being enclosed between two solid objects, or being engulfed/surrounded by something that is physically in contact with her (like being put underwater).
She cannot bring other people with her.
Ophelia's reiatsu takes on a green color when using this magic.
• Pure Abilities:
- Restoration: Due to Ophelia's "White Magic", her body automatically regenerates over time as compensation for the fact she can't use her "White Magic" on herself. This does not happen at a fast enough pace to really be effective in combat, but she can lose a limb one day and grow it back the next. This usually happens faster in her sleep
- Bound to Natural Forces: Ophelia is bound to all natural forces due to the fact she controls them, and so she can sense them. If they're not visible, she can sense them through this natural tie. Though it's not like sensing reiatsu, it's more of a vague feeling. With greater power control, she may be able to sense it like she could reiatsu, though.
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Sacred Release: Act Cadenza
An incantation is required to enter Ophelia's first Sacred State. It goes as follows:" I am that which never was.
Once alive, but never dead, my heart and mind lack strife
Seeking an unobtainable change
My body withstands it's fateless path
I have witnessed this world twenty-eight times over,
And lost nothing every time
and as I recite this prayer,
may this world have mercy on us both...
...Act Cadenza. "
• Sacred Release Appearance: A Cadenza is a solo piece of music inserted into a movement in a concerto or other work, typically near the end. Ophelia's first Sacred State is named after such to signify that she is nearing the end of her current encounter. If she cannot end it herself, the amount of energy she'll use with this release will, at worst, render her unable to continue the fight. With this, it will end one way or the other. This is simply the Cadenza. It is not the end. And among all of this, in the middle of a release of pure white reiatsu, Ophelia's hair turns snow white and her eyes an intense golden. A familiar form to the woman, as she's had many years to get used to this power. Ophelia sacrifices her ability to use her other magics, as well as the natural abilities she gains from them, to temporarily give her the following powers.
• Sacred Release Powers:
Red Magic: Also known as Combat magic, but Ophelia calls it Red magic for the purposes of concealment. The purpose of Red magic is to create and utilize spiritual energy to create constructs on a whim. This can be swords made of energy, knives, bolts, or even cero-like beams of destruction. They are completely made from and look like semi-transparent constructs made of a red colored energy. The only amount of energy they take is based off of whatever is being created. The bigger and/or the tougher, the more it takes. The speed and efficiency is decided by Ophelia's Power Control stat.
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Ascended Sacred State
•Ascended Sacred State Appearance:
• Ascended Sacred State Powers:
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Background History
• Background: Ophelia was a spiritually talented human woman with a very normal, free life. There was no other historically important moment to note. Her hobbies included making music, sewing, dancing, reading old grimoires, and taking her child for walks with her husband. Unfortunately, during a series of unfortunate events, she was cursed after coming in passing with a cult of witches. Her husband was slain, and her body was changed to be unrecognizable by her daughter. Not only that, but once every 10 years, she dies and is reincarnated at the exact spot that she was cursed, just moments afterwards. History repeats, and now Ophelia is obsessed with taking the limbs of extremely powerful beings in order to stitch together a new body for her to inhabit. One that would be powerful enough to break the limitations of her current one and allow her to shatter her curse, allowing her to return to her daughter and live a normal life once more. Unfortunately, she has repeated life on this world about twenty-eight times. Her personality has become more bitter and relentless. Her mind has become muddied and clouded with memories of the now meaningless experiences she has had over her time repeating this life. Even she has trouble remembering why she's doing this. All she remembers is the feeling of when her daughter once called her mother. Oh what she would give to hear those words once more...
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General Skills
- Durability: Adept
- General Speed: Adept
- Strength: Advanced
- Weapon Skill: Beginner
Will Skills
- Willpower/Determination: Advanced
- Mental Deduction: Adept
- Pain Endurance:Beginner
- Focus: Adept
Human Reiatsu Sheet
- Power Control: Advanced
- Energy Usage/Regeneration: Adept
- Energy Resistance/Endurance: Beginner
- Physical Augmentation: Adept
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• Roleplay Sample: (Please create a sample of how you role play in this section by either creating a RP sample with this character OR pasting something you have written in the past. If you have already made an accepted character, you need not go through this)
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Re: Ophelia Lestat [APPROVED, 2-5]
Sun Nov 23, 2014 2:25 am
※Check O' Meter※
Application Checklist
- Name [X]
- Appropriate Age [X]
- Gender [X]
- Appearance Present [X]
- Appearance Described in Appropriate Length OR Picture is Visible [X]
- Appearance is Not Claimed [X]
- 10 sentences for personality [X]
- History is of appropriate length [X]
- Powers are not Godmod/Overpowered [O]
- Powers are described reasonably enough [O]
- Application/RP Sample is not in First Person [X]
- Skills are not filled in (Omit if a Hollow)[X]
- RP Sample Present (Omit if this is not the first character) [X]
- RP Sample is 10 sentences [X]
Will Skills
- Willpower/Determination:
- Mental Deduction:
- Pain Endurance:
- Focus:
Tier: 4-2 when fixed
Comments/Notes: So good so far, but your abilities does lack a little drawback there, and requires some fix for you to be approved. So yeah.
Alright, first, since this is a decaying type of ability, i expect her to have her energy constantly drained when using it as it is a rather powerful ability.Sumdumguy wrote:Black Magic:
Ophelia can control "Black Magic", which allows her to cause anything she touches to rapidly decay. Said object with turn black with decay before slowly dissolving from being decayed too much. With a snap of her fingers, Ophelia can undo this effect if started, but not after the object has completely decayed. This effect only lasts as long as she is in physical contact with that object. The moment she isn't in contact with that object, the decay stops, but isn't reversed. If the object has decayed away, it is gone forever. If it has simply turned back, indicating the START of the decaying process, Ophelia can reject said decay to prevent further spread.
When using this magic, Ophelia's Reiatsu turns black.
Second, it seems like the ability falls into a degree of 'absolute' since you clearly written that you can cause ANYTHING to rapidly decay as long as she touches it, which i cannot allow. So, change that where she can only rot certain things depending on her level, since i can see that she can just loldecay with it.
Another thing, it always gives me a feeling that this ability may literally be unstoppable since it can decay an object or a person when touched, so if you could, add a method or two of stopping it wihout just her to snap her fingers as the only way to stop the ability from decaying its target anymore, and also, make a decaying slower on a living being. I want you to explain more about how the ability works as well especially how long it decays a person or an object depending on its size or spiritual power he/she holds, and it needs some appropriate drawback as well, such as a backlash considering her tier where she may decay her own body if not used properly.
Otherwise, i don't really see any problems with white magic as long as it is not abused together with black magic.
Fix 'em, i'll recheck and hand you a tier.
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Re: Ophelia Lestat [APPROVED, 2-5]
Sun Nov 23, 2014 12:04 pm
※Check O' Meter※
Application Checklist
- Name [X]
- Appropriate Age [X]
- Gender [X]
- Appearance Present [X]
- Appearance Described in Appropriate Length OR Picture is Visible [X]
- Appearance is Not Claimed [X]
- 10 sentences for personality [X]
- History is of appropriate length [X]
- Powers are not Godmod/Overpowered [X]
- Powers are described reasonably enough [X]
- Application/RP Sample is not in First Person [X]
- Skills are not filled in (Omit if a Hollow)[X]
- RP Sample Present (Omit if this is not the first character) [X]
- RP Sample is 10 sentences [X]
Will Skills
- Willpower/Determination: Beginner
- Mental Deduction: Adept
- Pain Endurance: Beginner
- Focus: Adept
Tier: 4-2
Comments/Notes: Fixed some few things through xat. So, approved and use the ability with care.
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Re: Ophelia Lestat [APPROVED, 2-5]
Mon Mar 30, 2015 6:01 am
Alright, I'm going to go ahead and move this thread into inactive.
This is because the players account is inactive and they can get it out once they log back on.
Re: Ophelia Lestat [APPROVED, 2-5]
Tue Mar 31, 2015 2:51 am
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Alright, I'm going to be moving this character back into Approved Humans. This is because the account associated with this character came back last night and I'm doing them a solid.
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Re: Ophelia Lestat [APPROVED, 2-5]
Mon Jul 31, 2017 5:31 pm
«- PREPARE TO BE REVIEWED -»
« Application Checklist »
- Name [X]
- Appropriate Age [X]
- Gender [X]
- Appearance Present [X]
- Appearance Described in Appropriate Length OR Picture is Visible [X]
- Appearance is Not Claimed [X]
- 10 sentences for personality [X]
- History is of appropriate length [X]
- Powers are not Godmod/Overpowered [X]
- Powers are described reasonably enough [x]
- Application/RP Sample is not in First Person [X]
- Skills are not filled in (Omit if a Hollow)[X]
- RP Sample Present (Omit if this is not the first character) [X]
- RP Sample is 10 sentences [X]
- Comments/Notes: As Cat said this needs a recheck, I'll be approving this. Everything is up to par, and I trust you not to abuse these abilities. Will skills and tier are the same as before.
- Tier: 2-5
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