Augustine Zanna(Approved 1-5+)

» Name: Augustine (Nickname August or Auggie) Zanna
» Titles: "Boss"
» Age: 20
» Gender: Male
» Affiliation/Rank: The Zanna Nara Mafia, Boss
» Appearance:

Physical:

Height/Weight:
Augustine is 6 feet tall with muscular features. He is built athletically with tone.

Distinguishing Features:
Shaggy black hair down to his ears. Large and deep green eyes. He is white with a lightly tanned complexion. 4 inch scar from a blade along his right ribcage.

Casual Attire:

Augustine's grandfather had special clothing made for him and his flames so that whenever he used them his clothes wouldn't burn.

One of the outfits he will wear on a regular basis starting from the ground up is black sneakers that are relatively new. He wears dark blue jeans with a black leather belt. He'll wear a black long sleeve shirt that covers just about down to just about his belt. He usually has his sleeves pulled up a little more than halfway up his forearm. Around his neck he wears at all times a special necklace given to him by Abele his "grandfather".

In colder weather Augustine will wear black boots with jeans and the same black leather belt. He'll wear a white winter coat with a black outline. He'll also have a white long sleeve shirt underneath it with the same necklace around his neck. On his head he'll also have a white beanie with a red outline

Mafia Attire:

Finally when it comes to official mafia business he will where from the ground up expensive black dress shoes with short black socks. He'll be wearing a black suit with black suit pants black leather belt and black suit jack buttoned at his lower abs and a white dress shirt under it. He'll also be wearing a black tie with with a simple tie knot, and finally the same necklace around his neck.
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» Personality:

Augustine is an all around happy person. Taking joy where he can get it and finding beauty in the smallest things. Whether it was from a small flower found in the wastelands in which he had trained or it was the vast and beautiful ocean he had traveled over with his Grandpa. His days didn't hold regret because each day looked for the best of what it was. Not only did he find fulfillment in the natural beauty given by nature, but also from those around him. Even without having much interaction with people he observes things that are considered to him beauty. Like a father returning home from war to his family. Embracing his loved ones with tears of joy that had been long dried while he was gone. Or a kind heart who was the one to stop and help when others looked away or avoided. He noticed the evil within people and recognized it from his personal experience with entities within the wastelands, but he chose to pear within the good of each heart instead of the evil or the bad. Not only that, but he would spread what he felt and ventured to see. A smile to a distraught stranger, or a act of kindness towards someone who was worse off than him. Spreading it one person at a time allowed him to see the light within people even when all they could see was the darkness that encompassed their lives.

Simple isn't the word to use for someone who looks for the best, because finding that which is rare within a world where it is so easy to find despair and hate, and optimistic isn't it ether. What drives him is his overall hope for people.

Along those same lines he isn't impervious to sadness gained from others, but it usually isn't what they did it is why. One of the things that strikes him the deepest is betrayal. Because his faith is so strong in other people he places his full trust in his companions. Leaving no room for gray area he gives each and every one of them an open back to strike and open arms to embrace. Never ignorant towards people, but always hopeful of the light within their hearts he entrusts his companions with his life. When betrayal comes into play it is not just a simple as that. When Augustine places his complete trust upon someone it is a bond. He has full faith within that person and when they break that bond and decide to betray him they take that faith that he placed upon them and shred it to pieces tell it is unrecognizable. Not only does it completely let down Augustine, but it infuriates him, because that which he treasures most has now struck him and it is her proverbial soft spot.

From this place there are two ways that Augustine reacts. The first of which is in anger, and depending on the severity of the betrayal he will place his full power and attention towards eliminating that former comrade. Though this only happens in extreme situations it is something that is a completely possible outcome. The secondary and more primary response to betrayal is either forgetting the person, or slowly rebuilding what they once had. Though this is an extremely difficult process with him it is one that if full reconciled is as strong as the original bond.

Another thing that sets him off about his companions is the loss of them. He never wishes any of his friends to be hurt, but if he loses a friend a passionate changes happens within his heart. First of which is his goals no matter what they are become refocused into simple things. First Mourn, second track the killer and third kill or defeat them depending on the situation.

Augustine doesn't believe in doing anything half assed. Even it is as simple as helping others he will take the shirt off of his back to help another. Nothing that is worth doing in his opinion is worth doing with any less passion. In combat he will force himself through hell on earth in order to reach his goal.

Faced against danger and adversity Augustine stands tall and takes it as a challenge. Never does he step down from a challenge and never does he do any less that whatever he can to overcome it. Like the fire which he calls upon to fight with his hear has a burning will that isn't ever extinguished. Through adversity, danger, pain or betrayal any of these which hurt him even if it is faint as long as he is alive there will always be a fire within his heart that propels him. This happened to be the deciding factor of why Abele chose him to become the Boss of the Zanna Nara Mafia. It wasn't just his power or his kindness but the ability he had to move through things with all that he had made his decision definite and made his decision one which he never regretted.

Though his passion may make it seem like he is extremely impulsive in nature he is actually more thoughtful than most believe compared to popular belief. Though it happens extremely quick he trusts his instincts to the extent of what he thinks about something or from what comes up with he goes with. He doesn't contradict himself and is always confident. Without those he could not be whom he is. With a smile on his face he'll announce to the world a single idea and he'll do so without hesitation or fear.

An aspect that he gained through his adventures that has stuck to his personality and has changed him is what he saw and experienced within the Wastelands. Much like a soldier coming home from war he saw things that he could never erase from his mind. Savagery that at times made him puke from just the mere thought. Cruelty that brought tears to his eyes was abundant as well. In a place where all beings of evil strive to destroy and do evil Augustine was an audience to the horrid ways they chose to not only treat others, but humans as they wondered into the place which could be described as hell on earth. This trial was one that could have and almost did break him, but instead of allowing it to completely destroy who he was he allowed it to be the catalyst to who he was. Instead of looking at everything as what he saw within the Wastelands he made the choice to look at the light. Instead of living in fear and hate over what he saw he chooses to live a life of happiness and perseverance. This experience did force him to experience evil that most would never see and shouldn't have to seen, but because he did he was given a choice and each and every day he takes that choice to the best place he can instead of taking it as the death of him. This can be seen as the hell he endured to find the rays of light in life.

Friendly:

Augustine is extremely friendly. No matter who the person is, or from what walk of life Augustine is a friend to all. He believes no matter where a person comes from and no matter who they are that there is always a reason to be friendly and kind to people. Unless they have done something he has deemed worthy of not accepting, he does so for all. He finds people to be the most important part of his life. So being a friend to them and caring for them

Uncensored:

Whether it is from him being naive, or just how he was raised Augustine is never censored. He doesn't hold back his opinion and he calls it how he see's it. It may not make friends at some point, but whether it does or not it isn't his opinion that drives this, it is his affinity for the truth. It was like it was something from his childhood that never went away.

He spent many years only interacting with his Grandpa Abele so through that it may have just been a defect in his learning to interact with others, but before he had undergone the training he was the same with uncensorship

Goofy:

Augustine is goofy. He loves to have a good time and if he can make a cheesy joke he will. He finds most things even with the smallest amount of humor funny. He can be seen as a class clown of sorts who mostly indulges injokes, or just recognizing/enjoying humor, but he will also rarely prank people.

Unlike other parts of his personality this is something that he consciously does. He chooses this to be who he is. He not only does it for himself to be happier, but does it so others may feel happier or more comfortable around him.

Protective:

Augustine is protective towards people who he holds dear including blood family, friends and his "Family" or Mafia.

When it comes to Blood family like his parents or his cousins Because he grew up with them not only does he love them dearly, but seeing harm being done to them is also something he doesn't tolerate.

With Friends he has just about the same amount of protective feeling, though a little less, because his blood family are those whom he has been with his entire life he hold people most dear so those he ventures to call his friend is someone that is precious to him.

Finally the most protected and cared for one is his "Family" or his Mafia. The ones whom he sheds blood with. He trusts these people more with his life so he protects them with his life as well. For these people Augustine would give all in order to protect.

Leader:

Not only is it in his blood, but for 10 years he was taught by a person with hundreds of years of experience in how to lead. With all of those hundreds of years of leadership it was developed through victories and failures. All compounded into one persons knowledge. With that Abele(Augustine's Ancestor) taught him everything. Not only the history behind the entirety of the Zanna Nara but each and every step it took to get there. Each failure and success was taught upon, and the way he excepted it was at an amazing rate. With the special attribute through his family known as Hyper Intuition he is able to adept to things that he is taught extremely quickly. As a Leader Augustine never sacrifices his men. He makes decisions based on experience and what is best for his allies. He is confident enough in those around him that he can delegate tasks without having fear of them having any less than great results.

Passionate:

Augustine is extremely Passionate. Like his powers his passion burns like a strong fire within his heart. It may have been something that developed overtime, but his passion encompasses people. His family sense the first generation lived to protect and care for those closest to them, and not only was this a trait that they held in his family's first generation, but it was something that he held dear to himself.

Augustine is able to fight for himself and what he believes in, but he acts and does what his passion is, and his passion is for those he holds most dear.

» Likes:

Cooking:

Something that he did every day multiple times a day with Abele was cook. Because Abele originally owned an extremely high quality restaurant along with being straight from Italy he not only loved to cook, but did it extremely well. So every day Augustine would do so with him and just as his Ancestor did so does he.

Abele was originally from Italy so what Augustine was taught and loves to make is old fashioned rustic Italian dishes. Large meals made for himself or groups of people. Even thought he has a broad and great knowledge of Italian cuisine he isn't constricted to it. He would enjoy could just about anything as long as it tastes good.

Eating

Augustine has just about an endless stomach. He'll have about 7-8 full meals a day, and still be hungry. Especially while he was training he would eat like an elephant and end up using it all just the same.

He was never exactly picky, but his favorites were heartier dishes or dishes with strong flavor. When it came to Italian staples like pasta he never really cared what kind of pasts it was, but he always loved a classic marinara, or a pesto. Of course with a Marinara there also is a bolognese which was heartier, but it could never replace the great taste of a classic Marinara. Also when it came to meats things like roasted meats like brisket, roast or veal he loves as well.

Other things he enjoys eating include sweets. He is crazy for any kind of chocolate based sweets whether it be Ice Cream, Cakes or candy. Not to say that he didn't like things like Caramel or butterscotch he just prefers chocolate more.

Family:

His family is what's most important to him. If it would cost him his own life or everything he had he would defend and take care of his family. Family being not only his blood family, but also his Zanna Nara Familia.

People:

No matter the wealth or riches he will ever accumulate with in his life time those will never give value to his life. In his view what really gives value to him and his life is the people he chooses to hold dear and close to him.

Celebrating/Partying/Having a good time:

Part of the people portion is having fun. Augustine loves having a good celebration over good reason. Dancing, drinking and all around good times are something that Augustine takes great happiness in.

Blowing things up:

This is a pretty simple and natural part of him, and because he is able to manipulate Fire he loves using it to blow stuff up whether it be big or small it's just a little hobby he'll have.

» Dislikes:

Disloyal People:

Those who misplace Augustine's loyalty are in his bad graces for a long time. Though he is able to forgive them it is not immediate, and it is a hard earned return back. Because he leads his life in a way where people are such an important thing to him when it comes to things that are negative that branch from them they have a greater impact on him.

To be threatened:

When he is personally threatened Augustine never takes it very well. In fact he takes it as a challenge to be met by whatever force necessary to overcome. It may seem as a pig-headed point of view, but he never backs down in those situations. He confronts them.

Extreme Weather:

In any extremity of weather it being a blizzard, maelstrom or anything alike to it he hates. If he must deal with it he will, but it irritates him to no end.

He spent time in the wastelands the the extreme weather ether way now just makes his extremely annoyed.

Rodents/Skunks/Irritating Animals:

Any of these things he finds to be filthy creatures. Not only does he actively avoid them, but he will literally run a marathon to avoid them. The little features that each of them have to distinguish how undesirable, and all around gross they are just freak him out a bit.
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» Background:

Prequel:

Genesis of the New Family:

Childhood:

Creepy Old Man:

Training/Teaching:

» Natural Attributes:

Hyper Intuitive:

Augustine has a trait that has been passed down through the generations of the Zanna Family. This Hyper Intuition allows him to understand something at an extremely quick rate with little to no previous instruction/practice.

When it comes to combat he is able to analyze, adapt and overcome at an extremely quick rate. Recognizing tactics and analyzing powers is something that he uses it for. Finding faults in tactics and picking apart the powers in order to either find weaknesses or ways to overcome them.

Another way he uses his Hyper Intuition in a combat situation is when he is learning or training. While Abele was training him for combat he was able to assimilate the training at a very quick rate

He also used that time to learn about his family. Using this he was able to learn the full strategy of protecting, growing and sustaining the family.

Insane Stamina

Augustine has an amazing amount of Stamina not only derived from natural capability, but also from his training. For the growing years of his Childhood he spent that entire time tirelessly training. This includes conditioning his body meaning his lungs with running and combat training. His Muscles with repetition in strength training and also Combat training. Towards the end of his training he had to keep a generated fire going at all times when he was awake for two years. It was an insane test of stamina and energy, but he overcame it and was able to walk from it extremely conditioned

Durability Through Experience

For 6 years wandering the Wastelands every single day Augustine fought multiple opponents. He was beaten down and injured against thousands of enemies, but still came out alive. With that it not only gave perspective into how great his resolve was but by the end of it showed that Augustine had was well kept together.

Trained Accuracy

Augustine was forced to use his fire powers for two years straight so during this time he able to train his aiming and shooting versus opponents of all different speeds. He also got the opportunity to train against enemies in extreme conditions and against those who flew went through ground and went on land. His Accuracy isn't perfect but he can easily hit center mass of opponents of most speed and placement and has a great chance to hit arms, legs or the head of his target.`

Trained Combatant

Augustine was trained by Abele who had hundreds of years of battle experience, and because of his Hyper Intuitive attribute he was able to absorb and expand on everything that Abele had taught him over those 10 years. For a grand total of 6 years he also wandered the Wastelands for real battle experience.

Augustine's Fighting style is a experienced smash mouth style.

As an offensive style it uses power moves meant for large strength hits. He also doesn't mind using each part of his body as a weapon. From his head using headbutts. To his shoulders using tackling type moves. To his elbows for short ranged high power strikes using the elbow. He uses his fists obviously in a few ways including broad power strikes to hammer strikes with one or both hands. When it comes to lower in his body he'll use his knees for brutal power blows and his shin down to his foot for wide side kicks, drop kicks or front kicks. His strikes are brutal and strong meant for damage.

In Defense Augustine with usually straight on block and attack or he will grapple it in order to gain leverage over his opponent.

When he grapples his opponent he'll ether use that to inflict pain/disable/immobilize or to hold them in place long enough to inflict a large blow.

Augustine's main objective when fighting if it is a 1 on 1 that he will finish his opponent as quickly as possible. He may be a happier type person, but in situations of battle he has a completely serious demeanor to him. Fighting is meant to protect himself and the ones he cares for. It isn't meant ot just hurt people so i he can help it he will finish a fight quickly. Which means he also doesn't have a problem with striking weak spots like the throat. What ever gets him to the end result the quickest of those he cares for being safe, then that is what he will do.

» Racial Powers:

Anima Stones

Necklace

In the Necklace his Grandpa gave him held his own personal Anima stone formed into the shape of their family crest. Because Abele in his time found their fire manipulation as the most devastating aspect of their powers his stone manifested into one that Augments fire.

When this Anima stone is activated the fire generated by Augustine turns into a yellow hue with green sparks. When Fire gets to a certain temperature it'll usually turns white because of the heat, but this fire is so intense that he was able to create a fire through the augmentation of this stone that had a much higher oxidation rate than without. Which means this fire is much more intense and burns through stuff much quicker.

Soul Detection

One of the biggest parts of surviving within the Wastelands, especially at night, was to be able to sense everything around. It was an ability which he needed to learn and adapt to extremely quickly. At first he could just faintly sense those within around 20 feet of him which was pitiful, but after so many encounters and years surrounded with things like demons, Arrancar and hollows his soul detection evolved. Through his hyper intuition and his experience with these different entities he has a soul detection that has a range of a mile or more if he concentrates. Also if they are Hollow, Demon or arrancar he is able to easily pinpoint and distinguish where they are and roughly gauge their strength. Not to an exact tier but between weak, mid strength and strong from a distance. Up close he is able to gauge much more exactly.

Soul Dash

Being a part of his training of refocusing a portion of his energy to his speed in order to make his powers more combat effective he learned soul dash from his Grandpa Abele. It's a simple soul dash that was put to the test while he was in the wastelands and actually became essential especially against quicker foes. Not only would he use his soul force to increase his speed, but at times of long distance movement or just a straight shot movement he would generate a burst of fire behind him allowing him to increase his speed as necessary.

» Evolution Powers:

Increased Speed

In the beginning this wasn't a primary power he had, but because it was necessary for effectiveness reasons he was taught and able to learn how to apply a portion of his powers to increase his overall speed.

He uses this in not only overall movement, but also for reflexes and action times.

Monstrous Strength

The most prominent attribute from his power was his strength. It was the most natural and intense power he had. With his reservoir of power being mostly placed into it naturally it was the focus of his training on how to use it, make it stronger and control it.

He was easily able to over thousands of enemies using that strength within the Wastelands, and as a primary augmentation that he acquired from his powers he uses it extensively in battle.

Fire Manipulation/Generation



Augustine energy which he generates is fire. His fire doesn't burn him so it allows him to cover his body in it and use it for personal enhancement reasons. He also uses his fire for mid-long range attacks. His fire is also weak/boosted by the usual things that fire is afflicted by like Water, Ice and lack of oxygen

Hand to Hand Fire Combat

First off to empower and improve his regular fighting style first the impact points including his:Fists, Elbows, Knees, Shins and the top of his Feet constantly generate fire that covers those places in order to add a burning effect to his attacks.

Secondly he will use concentrated bursts of fire behind a physical attack in order to greatly increase the speed and effectiveness of his physical attacks. Much like using a short burst jet engine. For example with a punch he'll use a short burst of fire behind his elbow in order to increase the speed and overall power of the attack.

When it comes to defense if a strike is strong enough he'll used the hand he is not using and create a constant burst of fire that counteracts the strength of the attack.

Flight

With a constant burst of fire from Augustine's hands and the bottom of his feet he is able to fly at high speeds depending on the strength of the bursts.

Fang of Fire

This is his signature Mid ranged blast. Something names and derived from his Famiglia name. "Zanna Nara" or in english Black Fang.

This is a two option attack.

The first way it could be used is with a fire surrounding his arm it'll spiral into a drill around his arm and he'll use it as a close combat attack.

The second way is Augustine generates fire around his arm in a drilling motion and blasts it towards his target by punching towards it. This spiral sort of "blooms" and expands into a drilling blast that has a diameter of 4 meters and a length of 7 meters. This blast is meant to drill and burn it's target and can be shot in a semi automatic style with a short "reload" time.

Scythe of Fire

With a flattened hand Augustine generates a stream of fire from the tip of his hand and chops towards his target. From that fire it sends a crescent shaped slicing fire blast

Wall of Fury

With fire generated at the top of Augustine's fist he'll punch it into the ground and create a wall of fire that can get up to 15 meters wide and 10 meters tall usually for defensive purposes in order to defend against energy type attack or enemies.

Fire Beam

Augustine creates a concentrated sphere of fire at the tip of his pointer and middle finger and shoots a concentrated beam with a strong piercing power that is meant to be a pinpoint attack from mid-long range distance. This beam is about an inch in diameter, but has a massive concentrated power.

Ground Flash

Augustine slams his palm onto the ground and a flash covers the ground in 10 meters in all directions and raises the entire area in an inferno

Fire Bolts

Augustine is able to create multiple fireballs of various sizes at will and shoots them at his opponents at high speeds.

Bombardment

Augustine covers his hands in fire and from that fire he shoots small pellets of fire with explosive properties at a rapid fire rate. These pellets are about as big as marbles.

Finishing Touches

Augustine was majorly in to cooking because of his grandfather so he named his finisher finishing touches. Something his Grandpa always used to say at the end of cooking a meal.

Fire is continuously generated and compressed into a single spear with a large spear head. Once this spear has a massive amount of fire compressed into it Augustine uses his strength and some of the fire he compressed to launch this spear at mind blowing speeds and once it lands it causes a massive explosion large enough to completely erase a small town.
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» Soul State Evolution Stage 1 Appearance: Augustine's Appearance remains the same mostly. His body actually becomes more muscular through this evolution and his iris's begin to glow.

» Soul State Evolution Stage 1 Abilities:

This Evolution simply increases his physical abilities. First his strength is greatly increased. His muscle capacity is increased so his muscles grow bigger and he becomes much more durable. His Durability also increases with this stage of evolution allowing him to take physical or energy attacks more easily with less damage done to him. This essentially turns him into a Juggernaut making him a stand alone tank.

He also gets a special attribute through his eyes. They become sharper and almost scope like vision wise. He is able to pin point an enemy from a long distance and if he uses a concentrated enough shot his a person from long distances in which ever place he wishes.

» Soul State Evolution Stage 2 Appearance: When Augustine goes into this stage fire crawls down his arms and down his right arm it forms a cannon that is 4 Feet long and is one inch in Diameter. Down his left arm the same happens, but instead of a cannon his arm his encased in fire which become a gauntlet with claw tipped fingers. Each of these with fire and soul force are give physical form.

» Soul State Evolution Stage 2 Abilities:

This stage is mainly used against large amounts of enemies, or just large enemies. Each of which exhibit abilities that are meant to mostly cause damage over a wide area.

Gauntlet

This Gauntlet as a few different uses each of which have to do with fire

Fire Extension-

What this ability does is surround the entire gauntlet in fire and from there Augustine is able to shoot an extension of his arm made of fire meant to break or pierce through enemies.(Something like Naruto's Jinn Cloak Powers)

Greater Fire Manipulation-

Using this gauntlet Augustine has a greater manipulation over his fire. The way he uses it is from the gauntlet itself or sometimes if necessary against a large amount of foes other large bodies of fire that were previously generated and kept up by Augustine like a large sphere of generated fire. He'll use it in ways like creating tendrils to entrap or capture opponents, or he'll shoot it into the ground around him and cause it to burst up in fire under any of his targets. From here it's pretty much just whatever he can practically manipulate it to do.

Practically he is also able to use the claws and gauntlet in hand to hand combat.

Cannon

This has a simple function. It shoots off large concentrated blasts of fire meant to cover a blast radius of 8 meters upon impact. The Blasts are meant to have an explosive effect to them.

» Soul State Evolution Stage 3 Abilities:

There are a few reasons this is a last resort. First of which is when he does this it takes a major tole on his body turning into the entity that is as hot as a star. He scorches the earth that he walks on and that which his around him in a mile radius can feel the intensity. He burns apart apart buildings and organic things like plants and such, but the heat radiated by him. This stage can only last four posts. This also means that he is weaker to water/Ice attack if they are able to reach him.

This is a simple three ability stage, because of the devastation each move causes.

Blast-

This simple name represents what it is. Augustine puts both of his hands in front of him and creates a ball of massively condensed flame that end up being a foot in diameter, and once he does he releases it into a massive blast that is a large as a three story building and scorches and burns through whatever is in it's path

Slice-

50 small spheres of fire appear surrounding Augustine in a few seconds and once they do they spin around him like a tornado each still keeping their individual shapes. After they have started spinning around his body outwards from each direction they shoot of extremely concentrated beams of fire which cut and melt through everything in all directions for 20 seconds..

Super Nova-

Using all that he has remaing Augustine focuses all of his power into the fire that his body is emitting and after a few causes them to explode in all directions like nuclear bomb with more of a burn to it he scorches everything from existence that is within mile of him. After this move even if it is his first he is finished. This takes all his remaining power leaving him with enough to live
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General Skills

• Durability: Advanced
  
• General Speed: Adept
  
• Strength: Advanced
  
• Weapon Skill: Beginner
  

Will Skills

• Willpower/Determination: Advanced
  
• Mental Deduction: Adept
  
• Pain Endurance: Advanced
  
• Focus: Advanced
  

Human Skill Sheet

• Anima Stone Strength: Advanced
  
• Soul Sorcery:Adept
  
• Soul Dash: Adept
  
• Soul Detection: Advanced

Necklace

In the Necklace his Grandpa gave him held his own personal Anima stone formed into the shape of their family crest. Because Abele in his time found their fire manipulation as the most devastating aspect of their powers his stone manifested into one that Augments fire.

When this Anima stone is activated the fire generated by Augustine turns into a yellow hue with green sparks. When Fire gets to a certain temperature it'll usually turns white because of the heat, but this fire is so intense that he was able to create a fire through the augmentation of this stone that had a much higher oxidation rate than without. Which means this fire is much more intense and burns through stuff much quicker.

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