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» Name: Akujin (悪神, Akujin; literally "Evil God"),
» Titles: N/A
» Appearance Age: 18
» True Age: 150
» Gender: Male
Affiliation/Rank: rouge

» Appearance Description: Height: 150.8 cm Weight: 42.2 kg


He also has narrow red eyes as well as an unusual set of sharp canines that seem to grow in unison with his rising emotions. This trait was noted by a stranger who passed him during a trip through town, to give Raze "A Oni looking face with a demonic aura capable of striking fear in even the bravest of hearts". Throughout the streets of various cities that he visits,Akujinis considered to be one of the most approachable citizens due to his carefree demeanor.

» Appearance Picture: Normale attire
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Battle attire:
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» Personality:

Akujin the type of guy that can make friends with everyone, and, if not friendship, at least respect. However though,Akujincan become angry when his friends are hurt or injured, But he is also willing to sacrifice those that are important to him as he is willing to make the painful decision to leave them behind when he needs to get the job done. Despite his easygoing personality, Rozeluxe has shown that he has hidden talent as a skilled Shinigami being capable of using his skill to defeat a group of bandits from with relative ease.

In combat situations, he seems fairly deceptive. He will often downplay his own abilities so that he can shock a target later on with his true nature. At one point, he even told a low level Shinigami that he was the New leader of , something that terrified the doul reaper enough to allow Akujin defeat him with ease. He is highly confident in his abilities. Rarely do taunts such as those often spoken by any of his opponents faze him. He has the unnatural trait to tell only the truth about his abilities once he finally decides to reveal them to his foes, something that seems to unnerve most of whom he faces. He is also not one to downplay the role of death in a anyone's life span. At one point stating that one who is in fear of death is the one most in need of it.

Akujin Battle Weary

A slacker by nature, Akujin a carefree, laid-back attitude about everything, even with achieving his goal of becoming a superior Shinigami. When others are stressed out or in a panic,Akujin usually just mutters 'everything will work out' as a way of seeing things. He is also confident, strong and inspires courage amongst his allies, leading many to join him. While normally calm, reserved and in control, Raze can exhibit merciless conviction when in the presence of anyone whose beliefs challenge his, making him very dangerous once provoked. He also has a soft spot for others, and can be quite emotional at times. Above all else, Akujinis an honor-bound man, and when he feels indebted to someone, he will go out of his way to repay that debt, even if this goes against his own personal best interest.
Despite being a laid-back person, Akujin loves adventure and the glorious art of combat, and is incapable of stepping back from a challenge no matter how dangerous or difficult it maybe. This part of his natures oftentimes causes him not to avoid taking the easy way out. Despite having a great sense of caution, he will continue as his sense of caution only makes the situation more thrilling. He has been known to smile in the faces of both danger and death. When it comes to actual combat, Akujin's confidence comes shine, making smart-mouth comments and slightly arrogant exclaims. Though this is actually just a well-hidden attempt to disrupt his opponent's combative mindset. He also has a habit of having joyful tone in his voice whenever he combats a strong opponent due to wanting a challenge that will make him stronger at the end of it. The habit seems anger both his friends and foe alike, believing that he isn't taking their fight seriously.
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» Zanpakutō Name: Shinzoku

» Zanpakutō Spirit Appearance:

» Zanpakutō Spirit Personality:

Shinzoku is for the most part narcissistic, mocking his opponents at every chance possible, while being playful even in the midst of battle. Finding a worthy adversary drives him into a frenzy, and those who can best him in battle, or perform some sort of selfless act earns his respect. Shinzoku tends to treat any potential opponents as fodder until they prove themselves, but once he gets serious, he is an abominable force, often urging Akujin to go into battle.


» Inner World: Akujin's inner world the term that denotes the manifestation of Akujin's soul, where his zanpakutō spirit calls home. The world appears like that of a sandy beach with two prominent palm trees that give a small amount of shade against the light of the ever setting sun. The world seems to be stuck in a perpetual state of twilight, with the setting suns light painting both the sky and the water in the suns color. The waves lap the shore calmly and the sand is unnaturally soft beneath your feet. Off to the side, where Shinzoku is often found lies a plain wooden shack. The insides are much grander than the outside would suggest, though, with fine carpets laid across the floor, tapestries lining the walls and rich furniture that bears touches of gold.

This world seems to change depending onAkujin's mindset. If he is calm and determined, the above description is what his Inner World is. When his resolve wavers and fear sets in, the sun sets and the moon dominates the sky, with lighting flashing across the sky and the thunder roaring above. The waves become larger and crash against the shore and the sand becomes like glass beneath the foot and a chill wind blows from across the sea. When he reaffirms himself and casts aside his doubts, the world returns to its once calm nature.

Sealed Zanpakutō Appearance: Shinzoku is a normal katana. It has a triangular tsuba with a vaguely flame-like pattern,the patterns color are the am color of raze's eyes,on the long sides and a curved line on the short sides, inward-curved corners with curved slits above and below the blade, and a series of curved lines embossed on either side of the blade. It has a Black hilt.

Sealed Zanpakutō Appearance: Shinzoku is a normal katana. It has a triangular tsuba with a vaguely flame-like pattern,the patterns color are the am color of raze's eyes,on the long sides and a curved line on the short sides, inward-curved corners with curved slits above and below the blade, and a series of curved lines embossed on either side of the blade. It has a Black hilt.

» Release Phrase: Shinzoku is released by the phrase "Calm the Tides" (安らか 其の 潮, Yasuraka sono shio).

» Shikai Appearance: Released with the command, "Calm the tides", Shibarajitsu explodes into a plume of dark reiatsu that spreads out and comes into contact with anyone within range. Once the reiatsu has subsided, a blade begins emerging from Akujjin's palm as the gloves slowly vanishes and Shinzoku reveals itself to now take the form of a double-bladed daito with light-blue colored edges. The guard is rounded off and the hilt has wrapping bearing a green color while a tuft of hair similar to that of SShinzoku's Spirit hangs off of the end.


» Shikai Abilities:

Shikai Special Ability: Akujin calls Shinzoku's ability the Ribcage of God (肋の神様, Abara no Kamisama). Akujin has stated that the ribcage is the "perfect defense", as it cannot be destroyed by any outside effect, regardless of what that effect does. The ability causes a ribcage, consisting of four ribs on each side, each with some sort of cavity in them, to manifest around Raze. It can then be used to defend against any attack. However, the ribcage seems to have one weakness. If one can manage to remove Raze from the ribcage's protection, it will disperse, leaving him open for attack. This can seemingly only be done by manipulating the space and/or objects within the ribcage with Akujin, such as the sand, dirt, and rocks.

Shikai Special Ability: Once released,Shinzoku allows Akujin to project his illusions into reality. This ability works by Shinzoku probing Akujin's desires and begins making it into an illusion. From there, Shinzoku will then start to gather reishi from the surrounding area and solidify the illusion into a solid point of existance. The illusions created by Akujin and Shinzoku cannot be destroyed by those who can simply break free from hypnosis, as they are now just as much a part of the real world as the air we breathe; because they are not simply being forced into the target's mind, but brought into reality. The illusions are so well crafted that they even have the capability to scare an opponent to death. By drawing upon and warping the mind's processes to the point of strongly desiring to satisfy it regardless of what may happen, Akujin can remove the thoughts and feelings, as well as the senses, of an opponent.

Hanarinen in useHanarinen (離れて理念, Away From Ideals): The only technique that Shinzoku has taught to Akujin. Shinzokuhas the ability to manifest in his true form and even can manifest himself at a distance from his master, able to hear his call from wherever he is. Upon doing so, Shibarajitsu has the ability to use any and all of his abilities on a whim as well as being able to fight alongside his master until Akujin calls him back to his sword form.

Osorege (恐れ気, Appearance of Fear): Once the opponent has been subjected to Akujin's reiatsu, he is free to access their subconsciousness and everything from their deepest desires, to their darkest fears, to their earliest memories are accessible to Akujin. With Shinzoku, Akujin can physically manifest the opponent's thoughts and memories, and controls the physical manifestations of these thoughts and memories, making them do what he orders it to do.

Mugetsumu (無限月夢, Endless Moon Dream): With this technique, Akujin is able to use Shinzoku to create an illusionary world, around him and his opponent that is free for him to control. Depending on the opponent, Akujin will either torture his target or make them relive a traumatic experience from their life once more. Despite being able to become consciously aware of their situation and act differently, the victim is unable to significantly alter or escape from the inevitable progression of these events. When the technique ends the resultant psychological trauma will render the target unable to fight and possibly cause a complete mental breakdown. While it only takes a few seconds to complete in the real world, Akujin can make it seem as if days have passed for the target.



» Bankai Appearance: Hankyōran Shinzoku (半狂乱神族, Half-Crazed Inhabitant of Heaven): The release of Akujin's Bankai immediately transforms the Shikai's ribcage-like apparition into a massive spectral being which he can use to fight for him and defend him. The specter demonstrates an entire body including a lower half and legs, which are visible when it leaves the ground, and two entirely different sides that are conjoined along their spine, each with a distinct pair of arms and a unique face. One of these faces has elongated canine teeth in its upper jaw bracket and a single horn protruding from its forehead. The other has similarly elongated canine teeth in its lower jaw bracket instead, as well as two tusks growing from this jaw. Like in Shikai, Raze doesn't have a sword of his own, though his Bankai's specter seems to wield two undulating swords of its own.

» Bankai Abilities:

Moon-Fang Heaven Piercer): Un-demonstrated in previous incarnations of the technique, Akujin's Getsuga Tenshō manifests in Bankai mode. The method in which he utilizes Getsuga Tenshō is also unique to him. He literally creates a string of "moon fangs" between two of the hands of his Bankai's specter. He then hurls these fangs at his targets, creating massive explosions upon impact. Each fang has the power and capability of a regular Getsuga Tenshō. Thirteen fangs at a time seems to be his limit.

Zukintengu in use.
Zukintengu (頭巾天狗, Hooded Long-Nosed Goblin): After activating this technique, a large tengu-like creature rises up behind Hankyōran Shinzoku and devours it, shrouding it in a huge new armor. It is evil in appearance, having sharp canine teeth and crazed eyes. It also has three arms with more human-like hands. In this form, the weaknesses of his Bankai are erased at the cost of huge amounts of Akujin's stamina. It is currently unknown how long he can maintain this technique.

Tenbatsu in use.
Tenbatsu (天罰, Justice of God): Upon use, Hankyōran Shinzoku rises up in height, growing legs and two extra pairs of arms as it rises. While using Tenbatsu, Akujin floats at the center of Hankyōran Shinzoku's enormous form. He can also make clones of these forms to allow him to fight multiple enemies at once; an ability that seems to stem from the Tenbatsu ability.

Enhanced Strength: In this form, one swing of its katana is enough to destroy an entire mountain range.
Mugetsu (無月, Moonless Sky): Akujin generates a massive blade of deep black spiritual energy in one of the free hands of his Bankai and swings it towards the target. Doing so causes a massive veil of black spiritual energy to erupt upwards and approach the target, darkening the sky, and heavily damaging anything caught within the blast. The energy then continues to rise, dissipating into the sky.
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» Inner Hollow Description:

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» Inner Hollow Personality:

» Inner Hollow Powers:

-Dark version of Akujin's zanpakto

-Black Flames
Akujin'sHollow power had manifested itself as black flames empowering him as he fought, he became a more difficult opponent as the battle went on and he was allowed to fight. Continuing the battle allowed him to use these black flames to strengthen a part of him increasing his battle ability. He can choose which quality of his he wants to increase making him a difficult opponent to combat in close range. The flames act as a aura that burns those who get too close to him when he it is present on his body, touching the flames will get the predictable result of being burned.

The flames manifests as his burning hate and rage amplifying his fighting ability, which he then uses to smite his foes. When he amplifies his physical body to survive impacts, the black flames seemingly coat his entire body as if to absorb and soften the blow. When he amplifies his offensive the flames form around his arms, and seemingly make it seem like they generate more thrust and strengthens them. When he amplifies his speed the flames all but disappear but reappear when he moves, in a trail of black fire marking his path. He's yet to find a way to keep the trail from revealing his path. When he boosts his spirit the flames form arcane patterns on his skin.

-enhanced strength

-Regular hollow powers cero, Bala ect.

-Enhaced Speed


» Hollow Mask Appearance: http://t3.gstatic.com/images?q=tbn:ANd9GcTFyB8FYWvgcEFLIukZN9A1pStr_tGE-K8Dnfp0SHvN8LIjZY8o7g
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» Vizard Powers:

Mutated Bankai Form: This form seems to mutate Akujin's Bankai, is very different from his original Bankai. While still somewhat skeletal, it now has a more human-like appearance, with horns growing out of its head, four arms instead of three, and what appears to be muscles growing on the bones. In addition, it now wields a single jagged katana instead of the two undulating swords it uses in his original Bankai.

Enhanced Speed: After summoning his mask, Akujin's speed dramatically increases .

X-shaped Cero: Akujin also gains the ability to use a unique Cero blast. It packs enough strength to demolish many of the Seireitei's towers and produce a massive shockwave.
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» Resurrección Appearance: http://fc04.deviantart.net/fs71/f/2011/166/d/c/vasto_lorde_by_arrancarfighter-d3j189d.png

» Resurrección Abilities:

Super Mugetsu (無月, Moonless Sky) Akujin generates a massive blade of deep black spiritual energy in one of the free hands of Resurrection form and swings it towards the target. Doing so causes a massive veil of black spiritual energy to erupt upwards and approach the target, darkening the sky, and heavily damaging anything caught within the blast. The energy then continues to rise, dissipating into the sky.

Alas de Murciélago (悪神羽翼 (コウモリの翼), Ā de Murushierago; Spanish for "Bat Wings", Japanese for "Evil God Wings"): At any time, he is able to grow large webbed hand-shaped wings on his back that gave him the ability to fly and hover.

Akujin has also seemingly gained the ability to use a Hollow's high-speed regeneration .

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» Background: (Please post at least 5 paragraph's describing their human life, death, progression to shinigami and how they became a Vizard along with their inner battle and the resulting conclusion of it)

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» PhatomTech: N/A

» Phantom Tech Abilities: N//A

» Phantom Tech Powers: N/A
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General Skills
  • Durability: Beginner
  • General Speed: Master
  • Strength: Advance
  • Weapon Skill: Adept



Racial Skills
  • Hoho: Advanced
  • Cero/Bala/Kidō: beginner
  • Zanjutsu: adept
  • Hakuda: Master


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« Application Checklist »

• Let's Get Down To Business •

  • Name [X]
  • Appropriate Age [X]
  • Gender [X]
  • Appearance Present [X]
  • Appearance Described in Appropriate Length OR Picture is Visible [X]
  • Appearance is Not Claimed [O]
  • 10 sentences for personality [O]
  • History is of appropriate length [X]
  • Powers are not Godmod/Overpowered [O]
  • Powers are described reasonably enough [O]
  • Application/RP Sample is not in First Person [X]
  • Skills are not filled in (Omit if a Hollow)[X]
  • RP Sample Present (Omit if this is not the first character) [X]
  • RP Sample is 10 sentences [X]


« The Willsheet Checklist »

• And Comments/Fixes •

  • Willpower/Determination: NONE YET
  • Mental Deduction: NONE YET
  • Pain Endurance: NONE YET
  • Focus: NONE YET
  • Comments/Notes: This application....brother, we've got some work to do here. I read everything here and I firmly believe it has made my cold worse as my eyes were tearing up with rage after everything. This should give you a clear picture from that outburst how displeased I am with this app if I'm stopping you in the middle of a WIP. So let's get into the meat, alright? ALRIGHT

    First off, your face claim...? My African American, have you ever taken a gander at faceclaims? Yea...I already have that FC claimed and you'll have to find a different image for his appearance. So automatically out the gate, you in the wrong there. Go to the link below to become informed on what FC's are

    https://www.platinumhearts.net/t10645-face-claim-center-rules-list

    Secondly, I'm not gonna tell ya to fix your personality, but that thing goes in more circles than a bipolar person's mood. First he is confident in his abilities, than he downplays his abilities with little to no explanation as to why. The same thing occurs with his laidback nature, taunting and not taunting and so forth. I also find it very dreamlike and unlikely that he can make friends with everyone, but you can keep that if you want.

    Moving on to this clusterhell of a Zanpakutō, the first thing you should do is expand that Zanpukto's personality to two paragraph's as that usually the minimum we have for stuff like that on the site. But since this IS a WIP, I'll give you a slight break on that as it MIGHT NOT be finished. But as we dwell deeper into this cave of horrors, I won't be so lighthearted.

    Shikai Special Ability: Akujin calls Shinzoku's ability the Ribcage of God (肋の神様, Abara no Kamisama). Akujin has stated that the ribcage is the "perfect defense", as it cannot be destroyed by any outside effect, regardless of what that effect does. The ability causes a ribcage, consisting of four ribs on each side, each with some sort of cavity in them, to manifest around Raze. It can then be used to defend against any attack. However, the ribcage seems to have one weakness. If one can manage to remove Raze from the ribcage's protection, it will disperse, leaving him open for attack. This can seemingly only be done by manipulating the space and/or objects within the ribcage with Akujin, such as the sand, dirt, and rocks.

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    Nigga, what in the black holy ghost spirit is wrong with you?
    Are you SERIOUSLY trying to rip off Madara's Susanoo here or something? NO YOU CAN'T HAVE ABSOLUTE DEFENSE HERE YOU RED EYED HOOLIGAN! That is totally and against the rules. You are saying that no matter what anyone does, this ability cannot be destroyed and it's absolute in nature; something I do NOT allow on this site. So I'm deducting points for originality and damn near god mod. I'd either remove this or get rid of the fact it cannot be destroyed. It can have some type of defense or durability, sure, but it's not gonna be impossible to break outside of that manipulation of space.

    Shikai Special Ability: Once released,Shinzoku allows Akujin to project his illusions into reality. This ability works by Shinzoku probing Akujin's desires and begins making it into an illusion. From there, Shinzoku will then start to gather reishi from the surrounding area and solidify the illusion into a solid point of existance. The illusions created by Akujin and Shinzoku cannot be destroyed by those who can simply break free from hypnosis, as they are now just as much a part of the real world as the air we breathe; because they are not simply being forced into the target's mind, but brought into reality. The illusions are so well crafted that they even have the capability to scare an opponent to death. By drawing upon and warping the mind's processes to the point of strongly desiring to satisfy it regardless of what may happen, Akujin can remove the thoughts and feelings, as well as the senses, of an opponent.

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    Negro, this entire zan is bipolar. Is it a defensive Zanpakutō, Aizen-Illusion shit or Ichigo rip-off? Pick one and stick with it.

    And do you even KNOW what an illusion is? From the way you described this ability, this holly jolly African American is just ripping artifacts from his mind and just materializing it into the Earthly plane to do physical damage to someone. That doesn't sound like a god damn illusion to me; that's some straight Lantern Corps shit right here.

    Also, what in the BLUE HELL do you mean that this negro can suddenly erase thoughts, feelings and senses of the opponent? ARE YOU CRAZY? That stuff will not be allowed. Are you honestly trying to pass this an some sort of illusion-based ability? That sounds like straight mindcontrol; some straight Professor Charles Xavier shit. This ain't the X-Men, m8.

    So you'll have to probably rename this ability, remove that nonsense about erasing thoughts or just redo the ability from scratch as it sounds sketchy as fuck. None of this stuff sounds remotely illusion based, and none of it sounds like it'll be passed without proper explanation.

    Osorege (恐れ気, Appearance of Fear): Once the opponent has been subjected to Akujin's reiatsu, he is free to access their subconsciousness and everything from their deepest desires, to their darkest fears, to their earliest memories are accessible to Akujin. With Shinzoku, Akujin can physically manifest the opponent's thoughts and memories, and controls the physical manifestations of these thoughts and memories, making them do what he orders it to do.

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    I'm beginning to believe you genuinely think your character is Charles Xavier with how you are writing this mind shenanigans.

    At any rate, HELL NO! That's all I can think to say: HELL. TO. THE. NO. That's just absolute insanity to believe that someone can have their entire subconscious manipulated with something as easy as spiritual energy. I don't care if it's a limited number of NPC's (like mindless hollow), but not actual characters. You are going to have to either limit him to that or remove it altogether as that's improbable that he can easily access their memories like that.

    Mugetsumu (無限月夢, Endless Moon Dream): With this technique, Akujin is able to use Shinzoku to create an illusionary world, around him and his opponent that is free for him to control. Depending on the opponent, Akujin will either torture his target or make them relive a traumatic experience from their life once more. Despite being able to become consciously aware of their situation and act differently, the victim is unable to significantly alter or escape from the inevitable progression of these events. When the technique ends the resultant psychological trauma will render the target unable to fight and possibly cause a complete mental breakdown. While it only takes a few seconds to complete in the real world, Akujin can make it seem as if days have passed for the target.

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    Stop, stop, stop, stop. I know damn well you didn't just try to steal Itachi's Genjutsu there, did you?
    So you are telling me this bold-ass negro can create an imaginary world, trap the opponent in it AND THERE IS NO WAY FOR THEM TO POSSIBLE COUNTER OR ATTEMPT TO FIGHT IT OFF? No, no, no, no, AND NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO. This sounds like a bad rip-off of Itachi's Sharingan-Genjutsu-Bullshit. Either make it to where it is based off the Will-System and those with stronger will or mental deduction can work through it, or just not do it at all because it sounds like it is without limits nor can you really fight against it.

    Moon-Fang Heaven Piercer): Un-demonstrated in previous incarnations of the technique, Akujin's Getsuga Tenshō manifests in Bankai mode. The method in which he utilizes Getsuga Tenshō is also unique to him. He literally creates a string of "moon fangs" between two of the hands of his Bankai's specter. He then hurls these fangs at his targets, creating massive explosions upon impact. Each fang has the power and capability of a regular Getsuga Tenshō. Thirteen fangs at a time seems to be his limit.

    Mugetsu (無月, Moonless Sky): Akujin generates a massive blade of deep black spiritual energy in one of the free hands of his Bankai and swings it towards the target. Doing so causes a massive veil of black spiritual energy to erupt upwards and approach the target, darkening the sky, and heavily damaging anything caught within the blast. The energy then continues to rise, dissipating into the sky.

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    ...............................................................

    Did you.....just.....steal....Ichigo's....entire Bankai...in that move? No. No. No. No. no. NO. NO. NO.
    NO NIGGA!


    You are gonna have to remove this outright as that's just plain plagiarism and stealing. MAKE YOUR OWN SHIT! Even other ruffians on the site have the god damn courtesy to at least rename it and make a little variation when they make Getsuga Tenshō RIP-OFFS. But you? YOU THE BOLD FOOL WHO JUST OUTRIGHT STEALS THE NAME, ABILITY AND EVERYTHING! Jesus Christ m8, get it together Tyrone.

    Enhanced Strength: In this form, one swing of its katana is enough to destroy an entire mountain range.

    AND, Unless you have a Master in strength, or end up near the 0-4 to 0-2 range, you DO NOT have the capacity to go around destroying mountains like you Mr.T on his period. So just remove that altogether or wait until you become that strong.

    The flames manifests as his burning hate and rage amplifying his fighting ability

    The edge in this one is strong.

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    Super Mugetsu (無月, Moonless Sky) Akujin generates a massive blade of deep black spiritual energy in one of the free hands of Resurrection form and swings it towards the target. Doing so causes a massive veil of black spiritual energy to erupt upwards and approach the target, darkening the sky, and heavily damaging anything caught within the blast. The energy then continues to rise, dissipating into the sky.





    NO





    Akujin has also seemingly gained the ability to use a Hollow's high-speed regeneration .

    technique

    You...are gonna need to go into more detail than that. Can he regenerate his limbs in millisecond? Can he restore organs? Does it take energy or physical stamina to do? Just...please.....explain this more than just one sentence....the same goes for these.

    -enhanced strength

    -Regular hollow powers cero, Bala ect.

    -Enhaced Speed


    General Skills

    Durability: Beginner
    General Speed: Master
    Strength: Advance
    Weapon Skill: Adept



    Racial Skills

    Hoho: Advanced
    Cero/Bala/Kidō: beginner
    Zanjutsu: adept
    Hakuda: Master







    NO








    YOU DON'T FILL OUT THE SKILLSHEET UNTIL YOU RECEIVE A TIER!


    At this point....I'd almost say...just start over....please....may Jesus help you with this app.

  • Tier: Nigga you got so much to fix before we even reach this point.


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